Hi. This is my first try to write something. It is not a happy story, but I needed to write it. After I wrote this, I found several other stories with a similar storyline but then again how many stories in LW are original? I have a few other stories I'm working on, but I am a slow writer, and I really suck with describing things so I often jump past many things. Thanx to other2other1 I did a retake on this story and wrote some more to the story. I hope to get some good Ideas as how to continue to write stories and to get better at it. Cheers to all and I hope you enjoy my story. Sidious.
The end of a man
-John-
It was the end of a fabulous workday. On his way home to his wife to give the great news of his new position at work. John had left early so that he could surprise his wife and take her out to dinner to celebrate and tell them of the trip he had planned for the easter holidays. It had been tough for him and his wife, Anette, these last three years. First, he had a blood clot that almost killed him. Then they found out that he was practically impotent and their love life suffered. He did what he could but in the end Anette stopped wanting to have sex with John and the both suffered for silently not talking about it at all. But this should be a good time to try one more time to get their love life going again.
He had been to see a sexologist to help with his erections and had finally started to get a n erection that lasted more than 2 minutes. To add to this, he had gotten a promotion at work.
Coming home he stopped in his usual spot outside their house. He went inside holding some flowers for his wife of 20 years.
The door was unlocked as it often was. The door didn't close when just pulled closed. So, he knew that his wife didn't hear him enter. He pushed the door open and stepped in. He took two steps in to see if she was in the living room. Looking into the living room his life fell apart. There on the floor was his wife, in front of the hallway he was standing in, naked on hands and knees and in front of her was Jeff, with his trousers by his ankles, and behind her was Darren, dressed the same cocks buried in mouth and probably her cunt. These were his best friends, his "brothers". His words froze in his mouth. It was like time stood still. His wife was moaning with their cocks in her. He saw her take out the cock in her mouth and heard his wife moaning and asking for their cum. Words he'd never thought he'd hear from his prim wife. He saw them all cumming and the guys where smiling and moaning. That was until Jeff heard a sound from the hall. John had dropped the flowers he held when seeing his life fall to pieces. The look of surprise when he saw his face and realizing that they were caught. The pain on his friends faces and then he saw it turn blank as John turned in the door and went straight out of the door.
"John! Wait!" Shouted as Jeff tried to pull his trousers up and run after him. At the same time Darren and Anette stared as Jeff scrambled after John. Both tried to make sense of what just happened. Then both shouted after John as well.
John was just opening the car door when Jeff caught up with him. "John, buddy wait". John turned around with anger and hatred in his eyes when he looked at Jeff. "I'm not your buddy! You're backstabbing bastard! Now you let go of my arm before I treat a bastard like you like you should be treated!". Jeff tried once more to plead with his brother but to no avail. It ended with John's fist in Jeffs face. When Jeff stumbled back from the hit John sat in the car and drove away.
He drove for what seemed like hours not knowing where he was going. His phone vibrated but he didn't notice it at first. His wife was calling him his best friends were calling and sending texts. He didn't look at them. He turned of the phone. After some time, he didn't know how long, his fuel warning light came on and he stopped at a petrol station to fill up his car. He realized that he didn't know where he was and didn't know if there was any place to stay. So, he just parked the car by the petrol station after filling it up and started to cry. He cried for hours in the end he fell asleep in the car exhausted from grief, anger of the betrayal his wife and two best buddies had wrought upon him.
-Anette-
Back in the house Anette, Darren and Jeff were trying to reach John.
Anette was crying, thinking about what they had done to John. She loved John and missed the sex they used to have before John's blood clot so much. When she came with Jeff and Darren she was dreaming of John. How she wished he would be the one inside her. The dream came so abruptly to an end hearing Jeff shout out for John; she turned her head and saw Jeff scrambling to get hies trousers upp. Both Anette and Darren scrambled up and looked out the window to the driveway and saw John's car speeding away down the street and Jeff slowly getting up from the ground screaming after the car. "Quick Darren, go after him see if you can stop him. I'll call him and try to talk to him." Darren jumped into his clothes and went out after John but realized that it was too late. And started to ring him. But no one got an answer.
Anette was beside herself. What had she done. Why was John home so early? He should have been two hours out, lots of time for her guys to finish this fuck session. She loved John but his unfortunate blood clot 3 years prior had left him almost impotent. And Anette had felt sorry for him as his erections only lasted a minute or two before going soft. So, she instead of trying to help him and encourage him with enjoying sex as good as they could she closed that door for him. Thinking it was best this way.
But after a few months when Anettes libido just got too much for her and by chance Jeff came over one day when John was at work. She didn't intend to do it but with them play flirting she ended up seducing Jeff for a quick fuck. Thinking this was just a onetime thing even saying so to him. Jeff being divorced after a bad relationship just went with the flow. Being horny and always having found Anette to be sexy, and as it was just going to be a one of as Anette said he went along with it.
But then they did it again and then again. Neither Anette nor Jeff thought about what they were doing behind Johns back and the possible outcome it would have. Then one time Jeff caught them, Anette was devastated and begged Jeff not to say anything to John. Darren not knowing how to handle the situation and more focused on his own upcoming wedding with his fiancรฉe told her he would not saying about it, but it was going to stop, or he would have to turn to John. Anette promised that it would stop. And it did. For a while.
One day when both Jeff and Darren were coming over to get John for an evening at the pub Jeff asked about how Anette was doing. Before John came down to the living room, she explained to both about John's dilemma. And explained how difficult it was to keep herself satisfied with her plastic friend.