[:::: Authors Note :::: ]
Welcome to Part III of Double of Nothing. Thank you for all the great comments around Part I and Part II. For those of you who have asked, I am seeing this as a five-part series. And yes, the last part was a little sappy and clichéd, but I did point that out to you all at the beginning.
If you haven't read
Part I
or
Part II
, click on my profile and give them a read; it will provide you with some context for what you are about to read and those of you who like to point out where laws, plot lines or story points could never happen in real life. You are right; however, in this world that I am writing, it can happen; I am enjoying learning to write and tell a story, and since I have a full-time job and a family to look after, I don't get enough time to research everything, so I do make compromises. A big thank you to Kite for helping me edit!
Let's pick up with Terry meeting with Mackenzie, Carol and Stephen at a coffee shop.
I hope you enjoy Part III of Double or Nothing.
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"What's so funny?"
Standing in the doorway was Mackenzie. She had her hands on her hips and a scowl on her face that reminded me of her mother last time we spoke. Looking at her, even a little before seven in the morning, she was dressed up in designer clothes, had a half dozen rings on her fingers and a big gold necklace around her neck. Her hair was held up with an expensive hair tie, and to me, it looked like she was wearing a lot of makeup for a fifteen-year-old girl.
I could see that her mother and her new father, Dr Stephen Morrison, the dickhead, were coming up behind her. They hadn't seen me yet, but it was only a matter of moments. Suddenly the smile dropped from my face.
Shit!
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For a moment, I sat there studying the face of the girl I once thought I knew; she had changed so much in the months since I had seen her last. Sure, some of those changes were likely teenage hormones, but most of it was her mother and the dickheads influence. In another year, she would be unrecognizable as the happy daughter that I once raised.
She must have wondered if I caught her question as before her mother and adopted father could arrive. She looked at me, and I looked back; the sneer that developed on her face looked way too much like Dr Dickhead for my taste.
"I said, what's so funny?" she repeated.
"Mackenzie, you shouldn't be so rude..." her mother started saying, walking in the door, then saw me, "Oh, Terry." She looked at me for a few seconds, her face dropped. Dr Dickhead, aka Dr Stephen Morrison, then noticed me. Still, before he could say anything supporting the developing sneer on his face, a look that almost matched his new daughter. Mackenzie stepped in and showed me that we genuinely were no longer related.
"Don't worry, mother, anything I say to him." She pointed at me, "wouldn't be rude. I figured that since the asshole was laughing, I would find out what was so funny!"
I was stunned by the language she used. The dickhead looked at me, then laughed, hearing Mackenzie's words and seeing the look on my face. He was having trouble holding in a look of glee. The few morning patrons in the store looked at a teenager showing disrespect to someone and shook their heads. I was surprised at one thing though, Carol looked embarrassed.
I shook my head and recovered; sighing, I looked at the three of them, then stared at my former daughter. "What I am laughing at is nothing that you need to worry about, Mackenzie."
Even with such a simple response, both Dr Dickhead and Mackenzie rallied, ready to have a go at me. Dr Dickhead, in particular, started tensing up his body, shoulders rolling like he gearing up for a fight. Thinking things might go south, I switched apps on my phone, hit video record and put my phone away into my t-shirt pocket. The top of my phone was poking out with the camera lens pointed towards what I was looking at. I looked silly, but I now had a recording, just in case.
"What did you say, asshole?" Mackenzie repeated the insult.
She now had a smug smile on her face, acting like she was bullying a kid on the playground at school. I looked at her like a strange kid off the street, giving me lip but looking for a backhand.
"Mackenzie, when did you ever learn such disrespect for people in a public place." I shook my head, unfolding myself from my seat and standing in front of her. "I don't understand it, and how can you be so rude as to gain the disdain of everyone else watching?" I asked, gesturing to the other patrons of the café.
Then, looking directly at her, for a moment, her arrogance withered as she came to realize what I was saying. She looked nervously around, seeing the peoples' stares as they looked at her, some nodding in agreement at my statement.
I looked at her, put my hands on my hips and put my dad voice on, "I asked you, young lady, when did it become the right thing to treat people with such disrespect in public regardless of who they are or your feelings towards them? I raised you better than that." I told her.
She was now looking unsure of herself, but then the dickhead stepped in.
He bristled at his own self-importance. "Mackenzie can call you an asshole, asshole! Because she's my daughter, not yours." He sneered at me again. "And it's not disrespect to call a piece of shit like you whatever she wants, regardless of the location.
"Besides cuck boy," he chuckled at his reference, "I thought since your wife and daughter left you for me, a greater man," he puffed out his fat chest, his hands tapping his fat pecks. "That you couldn't stand it here, so you tucked tail and ran away at your first opportunity. So, what the fuck do you think you're doing back here in my town, asshole?"
He was now strutting pridefully about the café, holding himself like the dictator of a small country. For myself, I began to feel rage that I was working hard to reign in.
I was built solid and well-muscled, having spent years as a tradesman working construction sites. Even in my new job working for Delotiz Inc as their quality manager, I still did a lot of heavy lifting helping out the floor staff. As a result, I kept most of my tone and muscle mass. The dickhead, by comparison, was short and rotund; he was a surgeon at the Maitland hospital and, for some reason, when it came to me, had a superiority complex that didn't know when to quit.
Perhaps it was the fact that he had an affair with Carol, my now ex-wife, for almost two years. He had convinced her to leave me, or maybe it was that he and Carol convinced Mackenzie to betray me and have him adopt her, taking everything that I held dear that made him think he was better than me. Or perhaps he felt that he was better than me since I was just a plumber and he was a doctor. But in a fair fight, there was no doubt that I would clean his clock in seconds. He was just too stupid; the stick shoved too far up his ass to understand that.
By now, several customers had gotten fed up with the scene and were walking out. I must admit that I would have done the same if I was in their position. The café staff were standing there, not knowing where to look. Carol was looking a little shy, but she was still standing by dickhead; Mackenzie was looking reenergized with her adopted father's rant at me.
I sighed for the third time in as many minutes and thought the softer approach might diffuse the situation. "Not that it's any of your business. However, I came to visit my parents."
The dickhead laughed. "Ah yes, the poor fucking excuses for grandparents that rejected my beautiful daughter when I brought her to visit them." He had a big self-satisfied smile on his face feeling superior.
My face went beet red, and I would have knocked him out in another two seconds for that comment had the waitress at the counter not called my name, looking a little panicked about the escalating situation. However, the momentary distraction allowed me to pull back from punching him into next week. 'Deep breath', I told myself, disengaging from the aggravating trio.