When I first read the story Cuckold Birthday Present by upswing, the original found
here
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I was totally into the story and got turned on. Then I read the part where Marla tries to eat her cake and have it too. She tries to get a double bonus of a car and her way with her husband Dave. I didn't care for that and came up with an alternative story ending.
I tried to contact the author upswing, but since the story is over 10 years old and the only submission by this author, I did not get a response and consider it abandoned. If he/she objects to my version, I will immediately remove it.
I have left the bulk of the story intact up to what I, as the husband Dave, would have answered my wife. Taking a cue from another recent authors take on a story he would have rewritten, I have made my changes in
itlaics
so the reader can see the difference. I believe my version leaves both husband and wife on equal and loving ground.
This is not my story just a different, kinder twist to it
I'm not a pro and have only a few stories printed but I give it my best and try to make sure at least everything is spelled correctly.
My husband Dave and I had been married for 25 years. We were both 48, still attractive and healthy. And our sex life was still good, even if it had fallen into a routine after all those years. Dave's sex drive was always higher than mine, and I tried to keep him happy the best I could, but I always knew he wanted a little more.
Shortly before his 49th birthday, he said he would like to spice up our sex life, and he said he had some fantasies he would like to try before he got too old to do them. Dave said he had a little game we could play, and to give me incentive he would buy me a new car if I went along. Well, that got my attention since my car was starting to get old, and I could really use a new one. I asked him what the game was. He said the rules were simple. He would make a list of 52 things he wanted to do, and I would have to choose one thing from the list every week and do it. I thought about it for a while and said I would have to see the list before I said yes.
Dave spent the entire weekend working on the list and he gave it to me Sunday night. I went through the list one by one. Dave was always asking me to be more dominant because he said he wanted to be submissive with me, so there were a lot of things on the list dealing with these kinds of things. He also liked being tied up and doing some mild S & M, but most of all he liked it when I was in charge to do what I wanted with him. I went through the list and knew I could do all of them except one. All it said was "Cuckold me". I couldn't believe he wanted me to have sex with someone else! I hadn't had sex with anyone outside our marriage, and now he was asking me to. Sure, I had my share of guys before we got married, but Dave always kept me quite satisfied sexually. Then I got to thinking of how turned on Dave would get when we had sex, and he would start talking about how he would like to see me take another guy, but I didn't think he would want me to actually do it. I figured it was always going to be just a fantasy.
I went to Dave and told him I would say yes to the game if he took the "cuckold me" off the list. He said he had thought about it a long time and he said the thought of having sloppy seconds and having me be a "Hot Wife" for a night turned him on beyond belief. He also told me he masturbated frequently with that thought in his mind. So he said if I wanted the car, it would have to be the whole list. I told him I would give him an answer in the morning.
After a sleepless night thinking about it, I figured I would make that the last thing I would do, and in a year I figured he would drop it and give me the point if it came down to the time of actually doing it. When we got up in the morning I told him I would play the game.
The year went by quickly, and it was turning out to be a fun game for me, and I methodically checked off a point each week. There was only 4 points to go, and one of the things on the list was to sign up on one of those adult friend finder sites, and have cybersex with someone. I knew it was anonymous, so I figured it would be harmless. I met a guy online who was 38, had a great body, and his pictures showed he was very well endowed. We got to flirting, and the next thing you know he got me so wet that I had to adjust how I was sitting. Wow! I couldn't believe how horny that made me. We kept in contact and had more cybersex for the next couple of weeks. Then he asked me if I wanted to hook up for real. I was so horny I just about said yes right then, but I said I would get back to him shortly. The timing of it was unreal. With only one point left, which was to cuckold my husband, here was this guy asking me to go to bed with him. Just a year ago I didn't want to do it, and now I was getting hot just thinking about it. I wanted to give Dave one last chance to back out of it, but I knew I had to choose my words carefully, so I decided to write him a note so I would have time to think about what I was going to say. It was Sunday, and Dave's birthday was next Saturday. I wrote the note and handed it to him as he walked out the door to go to work Monday morning. I could only imagine how hard it was going to be for him to concentrate on work that day after he read my note which said:
Dear Dave,
I love you with all my heart. You do everything I need to be sexually satisfied. As you know there is only one thing left on the list, and that is to cuckold you. I have made arrangements to meet a man I met on the internet for Friday night. I'm giving you one last chance to give me the point without me having to actually go through with it. I have put a lot of time and effort this past year to earn the points to win the car, so I WILL have sex with him if you don't "give" me the point. Remember, this was your idea, but I'm going to raise the stakes for you, so you better give what I'm about to say careful attention. You are about to open Pandora's Box. I will take another man because YOU want me to, and that's the only way I can win the car. But what if I end up liking it? You couldn't expect me to make it a onetime deal now could you? Well, I have fantasies that I would like to make reality too, so if you make me go through with this, you will have to play my game for the next year. The rules are simple, but you must do ALL of them, no exceptions, just like you're making me do.
Rule #1: Every Saturday for the next year, you will become my submissive slave to do whatever I ask of you for the whole day. The rest of the week will be normal except if I use the phrase "Witch Mountain", which would mean you would become my submissive slave until I released you.
Rule #2: I will be in complete control of your orgasms for the next year. I know how much you like to masturbate, so to make sure you won't be able to, you will wear a chastity belt from the time you get out of the shower, to the time you go to bed. I will allow you one orgasm a week, of which I will control how you get to cum. To make sure that you do as I say in Rule #1, the penalty for not doing what I tell you to do, would be that I wouldn't allow you to have an orgasm that week. So you better be prepared to do what I tell you to do, or you could have blue balls for a long time!
Rule #3: After I allow you to have an orgasm, you will clean up all the mess with your mouth and swallow every last drop of it. You see, I have been doing a lot of research on the internet about female domination, and the common theme is that after their submissive has cum, the Mistress makes them eat all their cum, so that is what you will have to do too.
Rule #4: I will be able to have sex with anybody I choose, whenever I choose. After I have sex with someone, you will be made to clean up their mess with your mouth. Hey, you've wanted me to be your Mistress for a long time now, so you better be prepared to be a good little submissive. I want you to know that I would never become emotionally involved with someone else because I wouldn't want to put our marriage at risk. It would be purely for the sex.
Now, are you sure you still want me to cuckold you Friday Night? You still have time to just give me the car and we can go back to our "normal" life, but if you make me cuckold you, then my game begins Saturday at 12:01 A.M., and yes, Rule #4 will be in effect, and you will be made to suck out all my lovers fresh cum from my well used pussy! You have until Friday morning when you leave for work to make your decision. You can either tell me I get the car without having to cuckold you, or you can put on the chastity belt that I will leave in your drawer, and come to me so I can put on the lock that I have. Once I put on the lock, there is no turning back. I have learned a lot of things about being a Mistress, and you might be getting more than you bargained for. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!
