Hi all.
This has been a long time coming because my work and home life have been frantic. I started this story as a mental break from a much longer far darker tale. I was looking to work on something a little less 'heavy' and this was it. I might as well also admit that I write at the speed of snail.
I'm sure that the strict adherents to the LW genre' will tell me that it doesn't perfectly fit the category, but LW is where I started and probably where I will finish so, please indulge me.
This is not a BtB. Nor is it a RAAC. Mostly, it's about two people trying to navigate their past & present and find love and redemption. I'm trying to write stories that are as unique as I can make them, but that's not easy in a category where almost everything has been done before, so I won't apologize for trying. I will however, apologize in advance for mistakes you might find. I speak good English (as my primary work language) but missed all the early lessons in grammar etc. so I'm learning as I go along.
I don't moderate comments because if one allows them, then they will be, what they will be, but I think that the readership is intelligent enough to recognize genuine feedback from cheap putdowns.
This story is in two parts as I'm still writing the second part...
Thanks to Henry and Daniel for the mini critique.
Nick
** Coming Home **
** Part I **
By the time I managed to get to the Hyatt Ballroom, the celebration had reached fever pitch. Giant screens and the sophisticated sound system were carrying the news of the local election results. The crowd finally hushed as Daniel Banner, the latest and youngest State Congressman stood up to address them. He turned around and offered his hand to Mckenzie Cunningham, then led her to the podium to stand next to him.
He was tall and tanned with a great haircut, wearing dark blue suit trousers and white shirt without a tie or coat. His expensive but informal look reinforced his flaunting of the fuddy-duddy convention, he had successfully stood against and won.
She stood next to him in a gun-metal grey ball-gown. Its conservative cut did nothing to hide the fact that she had the best body there. And if that wasn't enough, God had unfairly given her a face that was perfect in its symmetry.
It was a face remembered all too well!
They raised their arms -- hands clasped tightly in salute. His face was bright with the barely contained excitement of a victor. She appeared to be glowing in the reflected glory but her smile didn't quite reach her eyes.
I looked at the gun. It wasn't anything remarkable. A S&W snub nosed thirty-eight special. A Saturday-Night Special as the Cops referred to them. I watched it come up pointing to the stage. Pointing at them!
* * *
I met MacKenzie at my army buddy's, actually my best buddy's, birthday on a party boat on Lake Springfield. Michael and his wife Hannah had hired it for the night and about forty of us were on board to celebrate. The crew were about to pull up the gangplank when she arrived, late and calling to wait up. Birthday boy Michael, shouted for the crew to hold on as she rushed across the short gangplank.
She was a vision and I stared, the beer in my hand all but forgotten. She was wearing skinny, torn jeans with canvas tennis shoes and a long sleeve off-the-shoulder gipsy blouse in teal which contrasted beautifully with her tan and long brown hair.
In no time the other single guys onboard were clustered around her like moths to a flame. I decided I didn't like the odds and left it alone. She laughed and flirted with all but didn't let any of them get too close. Once or twice, I caught her looking my way.
I had finished my first beer and was about to go get another when Hannah came up to me.
"Have you met my little cousin yet?" she arched an eyebrow and tilted her head in the direction of the queen bee.
"Naah, she looks like she has her hands full with admirers already." I declined.
Hannah punched me hard on the arm. "I wanted you two to meet."
Michael strolled over with a couple of fresh beers and handed one over before she could say more.
"Bad enough you beating on me Hannah." He gave her his abused spouse look, "but now you have to beat on poor Jack too." He shook his head sadly at what the world had come to.
"But I make it up to you don't I big guy?" She angled her face up and stood on tiptoes to get to his lips a foot above her. She wickedly ran her hands over his groin and cupped his balls using her body as a shield from prying eyes.
"I saw that!" I informed them. "Go find a quiet corner somewhere."
She grabbed my face and gave me a huge kiss on the lips laughing. Then looked at Michael with undisguised adoration. "I'll do you right here my darling," she declared brazenly giving his cock another rub right in front of me. "Jack, you go run interference while I make Mike's birthday glorious!"
"Ahh, Jeesh, I really don't need to be seeing this," I grumbled to both, while they snickered at my discomfort.
"You wait here," She demanded. "I'll make it up to you by bringing that little hussy over to meet you." She strode off but I decided I wasn't really interested in meeting Ms. popular so I started making long strides away myself but Michael grabbed me by the shoulder.
"Whoa there Jack! Hannah said to wait."
I tried to tell him I didn't need this and I wasn't ready, but the bastard was bigger and stronger than me and he'd been my superior for so long that I instinctively obeyed. "About face Grunt and get your game face on we're in the action zone now." As Hannah returned locked arm-in-arm with the vision I was about to learn was MacKenzie.
"Jack Brennan, meet my cousin MacKenzie Cunningham." She gave her a look that said to behave.