Climb It!
Science battles in an unstable marriage
I've decided to go way out on a limb for my fiftieth story. I suppose it isn't that
far; after
all, others have been done in a similar vein. Most notably,
"Splashdown"
https://www.literotica.com/s/splashdown-ch-01.com
Most of my followers know by now that except for a few stories to which I've written an alternate ending, I try hard to create original content in a category ripe with stories that all feel and read the same. Sometimes, you all love them and sometimes, they rate below a solid four. Many of those stories garner hundreds of comments and tens of thousands of views, so I guess it's still a win. The most popular and well-known story ever published in LW only rated 3.86 after the first two months it was posted which is why I don't take ratings too seriously.
I'm getting ahead of myself. You'll find a refreshed and updated guide for newer or want-to-be writers at the end of the story, detailing what I've learned about LIT and its readers after 49 stories. The first one I did about 2 years ago, at the end of "Generation Conversations,' was a little hostile towards some well-known folk on this site. This one is nothing disparaging; just some helpful hints and words of support for the authors who may take LIT into the next decade; some may be very capable and entertaining, yet cautious to hit the 'submit' button.
For this story
, though, I've got a few asks and one tell. You'll figure out the homonym in the title pretty early so here is the
warning
:
If you're triggered by opinion v science, simply move on to another story. This is a Loving Wives, (or cheating wives) story on an erotic website. Concerning the plot, I've gone out of my way to be overly accommodating to both sides of the issue, based solely on current facts and statistical data; those would be facts and stats that are easily definable and provable. As with any author, it is my intellectual property and a work of fiction. If you attempt to use the comments section to put your political license on my property, your comment will be deleted. Comments on the story itself, as is always the case with me, are more than welcome. My moniker, in this instance, is also great advice.
Many thanks to StrikesandBalls, an exceptional editor who keeps me on True North.
Relax; it's just a story, people.
[Copyright 2024, all rights reserved, including part 107 of US Copyright law]
'Shit! That escalated quickly,'
I thought as I heard our bedroom door slam. Marley, my wife, and I, Dan Dawson, had just had a knockdown drag-out fight of epic proportions. The thing was, we were having a pretty decent night until she dropped a bomb on me. Maybe I overreacted, but damn, she'd pissed me off.
I grabbed a fresh beer from the fridge, knowing Marley wouldn't return to our living room. My face was hot and my blood pressure was probably sky-high. I decided to sit on our back deck and try to calm down.
The lights of Los Angeles were always quite a sight from our decks perched high atop the hills of Studio City. I'd never felt comfortable in this town but the minute Marley saw the house and the view, I knew there was no way I could talk her out of it.
Fucking insurance cost more than the mortgage and the mortgage number was so astronomical, I almost walked out of the escrow office the day we signed. In fact, I did stand up and pace for several minutes with Marley at my side, rubbing my arm, trying to settle me down.
It wasn't that we couldn't afford it but Marley and I grew up in the Midwest in small towns. This mini-mansion was simply a statement. To me, it was overkill and worse, seemed to contradict everything my wife stood for.
Marley grew up in Ohio, along the lake just south of the Michigan border. The first years of my life began in a Detroit suburb. When I was ten years old, Dad bought a mineral company in northern Michigan, near Traverse City. I met my future wife at Michigan State University. We were both science majors.
It wasn't love at first sight with me and Marley. If I had to put a label on it, more like a slow subtle burn. We were both dedicated, I overly so, to our studies. I saw her at least twenty times in the lunchroom cafeteria of the science building before we ever spoke. Even then, she was the one who approached me.
Marley isn't what you'd call 'exotic' beautiful. In our college days, she was a little plump. Not fat but what I referred to as carrying her baby bod. That wasn't quite it either but given the little bit of extra weight she had, one could easily see that if she took care of herself, it would eventually fade away as she got older and fade away it did.
I was caught off guard when she came to my table. "Do you have a protractor I can borrow?" she asked without fanfare. I smiled at her and at least her stoic stance relaxed enough for her to smile wanly back at me. Without a word, I reached into my backpack and pulled the tool out of the side pouch.
"Keep it," I said, handing it to her. "I've got plenty."
Not very romantic, I must admit, nor smooth. I was a geek then and even though age has graced me with better looks, I'm still one at heart.
Two weeks later, I saw her, paperwork spread all over the table where she sat, writing furiously on a spiral binder. I walked up to her and asked, "Can I get you a coffee?"
She looked at me with her eyes, not raising her head. "Today isn't a good time," she seemed annoyed. "I have to present this afternoon."
"Understood," I tried to be polite at her rebuff. "Could I possibly take you out for coffee sometime, you know, when you don't... I mean when you're free?"
Marley stopped in her tracks and she presented herself to my full attention as she regarded the weird boy in front of her. Then she smiled fully and I almost melted. That wasn't lost on her either.
"I'm Marley," she said matter-of-factly. "I don't go out with strangers."
"Sorry," I said, turning to go back to where I'd been.