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Something was wrong, but Maureen had no idea what it was. It seemed like a shadow had suddenly fallen over their marriage.
Herb was evasive when he spoke to her. He didn't respond to her as much as humor her, no matter what she said.
After more than a week of this, she had enough. He started to get up from the table after dinner to clear the dishes, but she held his arm and motioned for him to stay in his chair.
"What's going on, Herb?" she asked.
He looked at her as if he didn't know what she was talking about.
"Don't give me that look. You're not good at being cagey. It's like you're suspicious of me. You're watching me all the time and hanging on every word I say like you're waiting for something."
"Come on!" he said. "How could I suspect you of anything?"
His tone didn't reassure her. Her irritation showed in her reply.
"You know our lives are such an open book that it would be hard for me to hide anything from you."
He didn't say anything, so she continued.
"You're too smart for me to fool."
"Am I?"
His reply came so fast that she thought he had been waiting for his chance to say it.
"Aren't you always telling me you're smarter than me?" he continued. "That's what you say to everyone."
She exhaled loudly in exasperation and gave a short laugh.
"You're so funny. You always run circles around me. That's why I make such a big deal out of it when it turns out that I'm right about something. It amuses you and our friends. If I thought it hurt you, I'd never say that.
"I love it when you lie and tell your friends I'm smarter and better looking than you. Whenever one of them puts down his wife in front of other people, I'm thankful I married someone who doesn't need to do that to make himself feel important.
"But everybody who knows us knows you're the one with the brains, and I'm the one with the temper."
She saw that she wasn't getting anywhere, so the conversation ended there, but similar conversations continued to take place. They didn't have sex for over a week, which was unusual for them, and when they finally did, it was like animals coupling, with no tenderness or intimacy.
Afterward she was angry -- at him and at herself. She decided that she wasn't going to wait any longer to find out what was going on.
The next day she didn't have any trouble discovering what was causing his behavior. The hard part was disguising her emotions that night when he came home. She wouldn't look him in the eye and barely said a dozen words to him all evening. He noticed but continued to observe her and didn't ask her anything.
She continued avoiding him the next morning and rushed off to work. By that evening, she had gained control of herself. Though he continued to act the same way, she didn't notice because she was usually lost in thought.
She initiated sex a few days later, but again it was more like they were rutting animals rather than lovers.
Herb woke up Saturday morning, a week and a half later and saw she wasn't in bed. He went down to the kitchen and found her at the stove.
"Do I smell pancakes?"
"You sure do!"
Maureen spoke in a cheery tone, but there was a slight strain in it.
"What's the occasion?"
"Today is a special day," she said. "I'm going to tell you everything you want to know, and then we're going to start the rest of our lives. It's going to get rough later, so I thought we'd begin with a nice breakfast."
"Uh..." he said.
"Close your mouth, Herb, or a fly's going to get in. Isn't this what you've been waiting for? Don't you want to hear the truth — the whole truth?
"Yes, but —"
"No discussion until after breakfast," she interrupted. "But I'll tell you this now. You know how I'm a stickler for details. I always insist on knowing every little detail. It's a habit I got into at work.
"Most of the other sales reps are lazy. They don't bother doing the preparation I do, so they don't dee the details, or if they do, they think of them as trivial. Details are the reason I always get the biggest year-end bonus of anyone in my department.
"I know my habit spills over into our private life, and our friends wish I'd stop pumping them for every little detail when they bring something up. I see your exasperation when I tell a story and have to spell everything out. Like you say, I'm beating a dead horse.
"So I'm warning you now, that I'm going to tell you everything in detail. At least after I'm done, I don't think you'll have any questions.
"But breakfast will be silent. I'll be looking at you and thinking about our six years together, our plans to start a family next year and the reason I married you. Can you remember why you married me? I married you because I love you more than anyone else in the world. I still do."
He began to say something, but she put up a hand.