I welcome all positive feedback and constructive criticism, but lately I've been getting some that doesn't make sense. Please - I don't mind help, but blind negativity helps no one.
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"Tori" swung her compact frame around the pole, the cheesy music in the background helping her keep her rhythm. She'd had a horrid day at HQ, many of her fellow officers had been acting like jerks. Teri could have horrible days, but Tori could always get the crowd going and that made her happy. It was funny, the job she was doing to make money to pay for her training was the job that seemed to make her happier.
She'd had a weird day at work. One of her arrests made her horny as hell. He was a tall, Nordic-looking stud who'd been arrested on outstanding traffic violations. If he hadn't had over 20, she would have flirted with him outrageously - perhaps even taken him somewhere and fucked him - and let him off with a warning. But it was not to be. She played by the rules on her police job, despite the temptations. She'd seen too many careers go down the toilet that way.
She danced and twirled, her pussy throbbing with lust. All of a sudden, an inspiration hit her. She knew what she was going to do next. There were butterflies in her stomach, but she knew it was now or never!
Tori finished her set and went backstage and grabbed Devin. The hot blonde was confused for a second, but when the two girls got onstage and she saw the gleam in the tiny brunette's eyes, she knew what she was up to. And she was more then ready for it. This was going to be the culmination of all of Devin's kinky fantasies. The way her beautiful friend was dressed, in a slinky black leather halter and leather chaps, with high stilettos, made Devin horny as hell. Devin was in a pink little top and short pink skirt, a pink thong and white heels. She looked very innocent, Tori looked depraved. The audience would eat this up with a spoon.
Cuing the DJ, the music changed to a slow sensual beat. Tori circled her friend, swaying her body in a sinuous motion that ignited the tall blonde's passions instantly. Devin had wanted to make it with her sexy friend ever since she had started dancing, and now Devin was going to get the chance. She reached out and caressed Tori's face, Tori kissed her hand as she did so. The gesture was small, but it made Devin ache with further lust. Tori was playing the aggressor, which was so out of place for her, but Devin didn't mind a bit.
The fact that the two friends were about to change their relationship to lovers in front of a crowd of people seemed to fire both women up. They leaned into each other for a passionate kiss and pulled away minutes later, almost forgetting that this was also an act designed to fire up the crowd! Tori's body ached to be in her friend's embrace, to experience her first lesbian debauchery. She couldn't wait to be between her friend's legs, tasting the cunt she knew would be sweet.
The two dancers writhed erotically around each other, the crowd roaring their approval. Devin would flicker her tongue at Tori and the lusty brunette would occasionally reach out and caress her. With a sudden yank, she pulled off Devin's top, baring her breasts to the cheering crowd. One of the customers held up a 20-dollar bill and Tori tossed him the top. She leered at the "innocent" Devin and continued the routine.