This is my first story. Critiques welcome.
ANY RESEMBLANCE TO REAL PEOPLE IS COINCIDENTAL. ALL CHARACTERS ARE OVER 18.
"I'm sorry I grabbed your tits so much tonight," Alex said with a wry smile.
I laughed and shrugged "Honestly, I didn't even notice, it happens so often," I replied as I unbuckled my helmet.
Alex sighed. "I'm pretty sure roller derby practice is not one of the rings of hell but it sure feels like it. Fuck, it's hot."
The room was thick with sweat and heat, and not even open doors or fans running on full blast could make it less oppressive. I glanced over at Alex. Her white shirt was soaked through and clinging to the curves of her body. I could see the outline of her pink sports bra beneath her shirt: the only part of her top that wasn't translucent with sweat.
"You kicked ass tonight," she said.
I smiled brightly. "Only because you went easy on me."
She nodded in disagreement, but it was true. She always knocked me up and down the track.
"I'm still struggling with plow stops," I continued, as I bit my lip.
"They're not so hard," she replied. "They just take practice. Do you want me to teach you?"
My heart skipped a beat. Alex was beautiful. She had shoulder length auburn hair that was shaved on one side. She was taller than me, and curvy with large tits and large ass, but somehow with a waist smaller than mine. I had never seen anyone like her. And she was absolutely lethal on the track.
I stuttered. "I... I would really like that".