Ok here it is! The first edited chapter of Jenny and Carrie. Becca edited the first half, and told me to study what she had done and finish editing it myself to keep the story the way I wrote it. JC did some more.
I used what I felt worked for the better of the story. So, I hope it comes out well for you the reader. Now before you start commenting on the being doctor parts in the hospital. I will say I know next to nothing about being a doctor, like the entire book so far it's right off the top of my head and from either TV or the movies, so just go with it. Hey it's fiction.
I had 5 different editors for this chapter but only two submitted any help or any ideas so I had to go ahead and put it out. Please vote and give feedback.. JenniElizabeth
Thanks for all your help Becca and JC it is very much appreciated...
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"Very good sisters, now what are we having for dinner tonight?"
"Well we all decided to have meatloaf, mashed potatoes, and corn. Liz wanted to make desert, so she is making banana pudding," Jessica told Jenny and Carrie.
"Oh boy, that sounds great sisters." Carrie told them then laughed. "I guess you four know how to pick out peoples weakness. Because you all have picked ours here, Both Jen and I get a soft and mushy at the sight of meatloaf."
"No way sisters! We wouldn't try that with either of you." Carole said laughing with her sisters. "How are you both feeling today?"
"We do feel a little better sis, thanks hun." Jenny answered.
"Yes. We all can see you both do. But each of you still look very tired and worn out. Remember what our mothers told you sisters, that you both would need a lot of rest and sleep to fully recover. So, if you both would like to go and take a nap after we eat, we four will gladly watch over our nieces for you." Liz told her big sisters.
"Yes, sis that is very true. We will need all we can get. Thanks sisters, I guess we'll both do that." Carrie stated.
"That I will fully agree with." Jenny said, as they all heard crying in the den. So the new mothers went back into the den, where they saw both of their daughters were awake. So Jenny and Carrie changed Lynn and Heather, and then carried both back into the kitchen where they both sat at the island/bar talking to their sisters while they breast fed the girls. As they did this all four of their sisters came over and sat down with them.
"Would you sisters mind if I asked a question here?" Carole asked Jenny and Carrie.
"Sure sis. What's the question dear?" Carrie asked.
"Well ok. It might sound a little dumb, but I have to ask it anyway. Does that hurt?"
"No dear. Neither of the girls is biting on us, they are just sucking on our nipples. See sisters at their ages a mother's milk is best for them. See dears women's breast are actually milk glands, when she becomes pregnant they start producing milk for the baby." Jenny explained.
"Ok thanks sisters, now we all know. I guess it just looks painful." Liz said.
"Sisters, please don't feel afraid to ask any question that any of you have. It doesn't matter at all what it is either, it could really help you in your education."
"Ok we won't now." Jess said as the four got back up and checked on their families' dinner. Then both Jenny and Carrie had finished feeding the girls and all six played with them until both Lynn and Heather fell back asleep. The ladies took the girls back to the den and tucked them into their cradles and went back to the kitchen. They set the table, while their sisters finished cooking. Then all six sat down and ate, then cleaned up the kitchen.
Back in the den, both Jenny and Carrie gave their sisters instructions to follow if their nieces woke up before they did. Then all six hugged and kissed and the ladies went to their room and bed, where they made love and fell asleep in each others' arms.
They both woke back up at 9:30, and got into their robes, entering the den to see that their sisters were having a ball playing with Lynn and Heather. Both Liz and Carole had Lynn on one couch and Jess and Sheryl had Heather on the other. This sight made both Jenny and Carrie smile very proudly. Jenny went over to the couch with Liz, Carole and Lynn, and Carrie to the other.
They all had a great time playing with Lynn and Heather until around 11, when the twins had to turn in for the night because they had school in the morning. They hugged and kissed Jenny and Carrie then each gently put kisses on each of the little girl's foreheads and left for their beds.
Jenny and Carrie took their girls to their room, where they sat on their bed, watching TV and playing with Lynn and Heather, until the girls fell asleep at 1:30. Both put the girls in their cribs and fell into their bed and were out like lights.
Both Lynn and Heather woke Jenny and Carrie back up like a clock work at 4:30. They got up and changed their daughters, and fed them. When that was done they headed for the kitchen to make breakfast for them and their sisters. When they entered Jenny and Carrie put Lynn and Heather in their baby chairs while they fixed breakfast and coffee for themselves.
At a quarter to six, their sisters entered, all dressed and ready for school. The six sisters hugged and kissed good morning, and then the twins kissed both Lynn and Heather. They then sat down at the table eating and talking until Liz, Jess, Carole, and Sheryl had to leave to catch their bus to school. Both Jenny and Carrie had the time of their lives playing with their daughters that morning until both girls fell asleep around ten. Both Jenny and Carrie took this cue and in turn fell asleep too.
At 11:30, their phone rang and woke Jenny, she reached for it sleepily.
"Hello?' she answered in a voice barely audible.
"Good morning Jen dear. Sorry to have woken you up hon. we had to call and see how you eight are faring down there." Katherine stated talking with Leslie on their speaker phone. They did this so both could talk to Jen and Carrie together, as both loved to do.
"We are all doing just perfectly mom. Both Carrie and I really love being mothers. Now we both know why you and Les were all smiles and very happy. So how are all of you doing up there?"
"We all are doing very well dear. Kathy and I just had to call and see how our daughters and grand-daughters were doing because we both are already missing each of you, so much we can't stand it." Leslie told Jenny. Carrie finally woke up and joined in on the conversation.
The four women talked for another two hours, and Carrie told Katherine and Leslie the question that Carole had asked them while they fed Lynn and Heather. All four died laughing at this. Soon they heard the babies crying.
"Hold on mom and Les both our girls are paging us." Jenny told them Soon both ladies had their girls quiet and feeding on their breasts, so they returned to their mother and Les on the phone.
"What have you ladies got planned for Thanksgiving and Christmas" Katherine asked Jenny and Carrie.
"We all have made plans to come home for three or four days over Thanksgiving, and then come back home and return there from December 20th until about the 19th of January for Christmas break. How does that sound?"
"Ladies that sounds wonderful. It will be very nice to have you eight here with us for a couple of visits. We all are really missing all of you dears. Please call us dears after you have made your flight plans."
"Of course we will. It will be just as nice for us eight to see you all too. Well mom and Les, we both are sorry, but we both have to go now. Our girls are demanding our attention. Boy these two are so jealous!" Carrie said and laughed with Jenny. Hearing this also made Katherine and Leslie laugh.
"That's fine ladies. We will talk to you all very soon. We love you all. "They said.
"We love you both too, we'll see you later." Jenny told them and they hung up. Jenny and Carrie sat around playing with Lynn and Heather until 2:30, when the phone rang. Carrie answered it. "Hello?"
"Yes, hi is this the Hayward residence?" A woman asked." This is Sandra Cox; I'm the nurse at Shelly High school."
"Yes it is. I'm Carrie Hayward. How may I help you?"
"Dear your sister Sheryl has gotten sick. I ran a few simple tests on her here, but I think she needs to see a doctor. Her other sisters are here with her. The principal has excused them so they can be with Sheryl."
"Okay tell them to get everything together so they all will be ready when we get there. Thanks for calling." Carrie said. She hung up and told Jenny about the call.
"Oh no! Well honey, go ahead and pick Sheryl up while I keep Lynn and Heather occupied." Jenny told Carrie. She agreed and went to get dressed. Seeing that the rental van was still there she took it because all five wouldn't fit into the vettes.
30 minutes later the five sisters came home and entered the house.
"Well sis let's take her up to her room and give sis a good going over." Jenny told Carrie.
"We'll watch and play with our nieces for both you sisters." Liz told them.