Smokey Saga #66:
"
Friends And Live-Ins
" (part one)
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So with this story, I decided to do something (sort of) new/different. There're two sex scenes in it, one in the first half and one in the second. And this entire story ended up pretty lengthy. So I opted to split this Saga into two more or less equal parts, and submit and post one after the other. I think Readers will appreciate the individual shorter parts to read, rather than having to bite off one great big long piece. So shortly after this should come "Friends And Live-Ins" part two.
I do feel the need to warn you, however, though this is a touching story, its first sex scene (the one in
this
chapter)—though involving no BDSM
...
well, at least no B—is quite rough. (Of course, this was also the case with "Thick And Thin.") So you'll want to know that going in. And remember, Readers: your feedback is always very welcomed, valued and appreciated.
P.S. This story's dedicated to my biggest Lit fan. She knows who she is.
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Bon *Sniffle* Voyage
Saturday, July 23rd, 2016, 1:20 p.m.
Dora Cunningham brought her food trays to the coffee table. She put the finishing touches on preparation, trying to keep her emotions in check. She looked around. The banner was in place. The room was cornered in balloons. The guests would start arriving any moment. And the woman of honor was to be nowhere near the apartment until 2:30.
Her longtime roommate and best friend Susanna had accepted a prestigious new job in Madison. It broke her heart to leave Dora, but the opportunity was far too rewarding to turn down. Dora of course wanted her to be as happy and fulfilled as possible, and supported her decision to go. In fact, she persuaded her. Susanna was concerned it might be rough for Dora on her own.
"Oh, babe, I'll be fine," Dora'd assured her. "I can find another roommate. You
have
to do this; it's your success. You've worked so hard, and you owe it to yourself. You deserve it. Trust me, the only thing that'll be rough on me's how much I'm gonna miss ya."
It was true; Susie hadn't left yet, didn't even know about the surprise party, and Dora missed her already. Her new job started Monday, August the 1st, and she was to depart for Wisconsin the 27th. Just enough time to arrive at her hotel, settle in and start earning a sweet inflated salary while making permanent arrangements. And they'd maintain online contact until they got a chance to visit in person.
Knock-knock-knock!
The first guest(s) had arrived. Dora's heart jumped a bit. She pranced on tippy-toe to the door and peeped through. It was her parents, bearing their culinary contribution. She exhaled in relief.
Susanna, who worked shorter hours Saturdays, usually arrived home from her office around 2:30, today being no exception. So Dora'd asked everyone attending to please try and make it by 1:30(-ish)—2:00 the latest—in case Susie was early. Mr. and Mrs. Cunningham were typically pretty punctual. Dora's brother Mikey, on the other hand, was habitually tardy. Today, she hoped, just not too much.
In due order, Susie's parents arrived as well, followed by their solo and mutual friends, and God bless him, Mikey walked through the door at 1:59. The coffee table was now cluttered in snacks and gifts. The apartment wasn't enormous, which was why Dora and Susanna didn't do a wealth of entertaining. Today, however, was a special occasion. Dora'd scooted some furniture around, moved an appliance here and there, set up some extra chairs, done everything she could to open up the space. Once everyone had arrived, she surveyed the apartment. It wasn't overly cramped, and people seemed to be able to mingle and move about okay.
Now all they needed was the guest of honor. It was a few minutes past 2:00. Dora looked out the window, and saw no sign of Susanna's return just yet. She was probably just getting off. Dora grabbed a glass and spoon, and tapped out a nice sharp "Shave And A Haircut."
"Ahem!" she called. "Attention, please!
"Thanks, everyone, so much for coming, and being timely. I'm guessing Susie's just on her way now, so I'll keep watching for her, and when she gets here, why don't we all just stand where we are, and yell surprise. No need to try and hide behind anything."
The party went off without a single virtual hitch. Dora spotted Susanna parking and exiting her car, all guests took position, and no good "SURPRISE!!"s were wasted. The innocent Susanna Feldman was legitimately—but only figuratively—knocked off her feet. She was dearly touched by the party and presents, the guests and hostess enjoyed themselves the same, and to top it off, they watched the Twins win one more game for Minnesota while Susanna was still here. The bash was a sheer success.
"Okay, everybody," Dora announced after supper, calling again for their guests' attention. "At this point I'd like to call upon anyone who'd like to make a toast to Susie, and share a few words. So who wants to go first?"
Susie sat to hear everyone, and was about moved to tears by the time the fifth or sixth person spoke. Dora waited as glasses were raised again and again, wanting herself to be the last to toast. After everyone else was finished, she stood with her own glass.
"Okay," she exhaled. "Here goes...now, I'm gonna try and do this without bursting into tears," she warned the others with a chuckle.
"Well, Susie...gosh, where to begin...what can I even say? Susie, you're the sister I never had. We've known each other since...since, well...
birth
, practically. You're my all-star pal, my B.M.F.F.F..." She paused to giggle with the others. "...My partner in crime, my fair-
and
stormy-weather amiga. There aren't enough words to describe how much you mean to me, but I'm gonna try anyway. Susie, babe, I think we can all agree what you're doing is just so great, and I know it's right too. I'm not saying all of us won't miss you like crazy, but I am saying that I'd go through hell to make your dreams come true. Fortunately, I
didn't
have to do that this time, but, eh..."
She paused for the next short spell of laughter. "...I'm just so excited, Suse, that you're moving on to bigger, better things like this. It's the kinda thing that takes real courage. Passion. Enthusiasm. And as long as I've known you, Susie, you've had those markets cornered. I know you're gonna make a success of yourself. I don't mean to put pressure on ya, but I have all the confidence in the world in you, and more. I'd like to think I know you as well or better than most of us in this room—uh, well, with two obvious exceptions over there, of course, Mr. and Mrs. F. But I know you as well as you know me. And I know if it was me going out there, you'd be just as thrilled for me, without a hint of resentment or envy. I'm