By Dawn & Linda
Note to readers. The authors of this story met, electronically, through Literotica. We became friends even though we have never met. We decided to write this story together by writing alternating sections. For this reason it might read a bit choppy in places - we hope you'll forgive any problems that remain. Regardless, we had fun writing it, and we really hope you'll have fun reading it. Also - much of it happened! Can you guess which parts are real? Dawn & Linda
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Pam had the day off so she went with her girlfriend Dawn to shop at the mall. But first they got lunch at the food court. As they ate Pam stared at Dawn with teasing, "fuck me" eyes that made Dawn wet. Then Pam tortured Dawn by rubbing her foot up and down on Dawn's leg while running her tongue over her lips. Not caring that they were in public. Pam only smiled when she heard Dawn whimper.
Then lunch was over and Pam hopped up, grabbed Dawn's arm, said "let's go," and off they went. On the hunt.
Dawn, however, had not recovered from Pam's teasing, and was just a bit dizzy. She whispered to Pam about the effect she was having on her. "You're a bad girl for teasing me like that when I can't do anything about it. Just wait until we get home." Pam laughed, squeezed Dawn's hand tighter and gave her a little kiss on her nose.
With that simple kiss Dawn really wanted to leave the mall, but then she came up with a different plan. She led Pam into a store she knew well. They looked through clothes and, after finding a couple of outfits to try on, headed for the dressing rooms. The dressing rooms were really nice. Each had a solid door and a nice long bench, and was very private. Dawn also noticed that no one else seemed to be around, and got to thinking... it would be so hot to fuck her love right in the dressing room!
Pam entered a dressing room and tried on an outfit. Dawn was waiting outside. Pam opened it to show her outfit -she had on a light tan colored peasant blouse, kind of a gauze material, with a denim skirt and boots. Dawn flooded her panties on the spot, cringed, groaned and said, "Omg you're so beautiful." Pam's smile made Dawn push her inside the dressing room.
Dawn shut the door and kissed Pam as she pushed her against the wall. Pam tried to resist, but it wasn't long before she was kissing Dawn back. Dawn's hands roamed over Pam's body, up and down, everywhere. As she kissed her on the neck and shoulders. Dawn told Pam how gorgeous she was and much she wanted her, but Pam replied, "We can't. Not in here. Let's go home. Please..."
Dawn said no one would know what they were doing if they were quiet, which made them both laugh. Because each knew that they were much too passionate for silent lovemaking.
Dawn kissed Pam again. After more kissing Dawn unbuttoned her pants and took Pam's hand and put it inside them so Pam could feel how wet she had made her. When Pam felt the flood between Dawn's legs, she groaned into their kiss. She knew Dawn needed her. And when Dawn needed her, Pam obeyed.
Pam nervously looked around and then started moving her hand against Dawn's wet and throbbing pussy, making her sigh into her lover's mouth. The feeling of Pam's fingers playing through Dawn's slippery slit was incredible. Pam took her hand and pushed under her own skirt, sliding her panties to the side so Dawn would touch her.
Each became even wetter, and both quickly found a rhythm for the other. At first each rubbed all around each other's pussy. Then each started finger fucking the other. They kept their lips together to help swallow any sounds they made. They grew more and more frantic, partly because of where they were and partly because they were so hot for each other. Their hips were thrusting into each other's hands and their mouths were devouring each other. Dawn's free hand grabbed Pam's rear and pulled it tighter against her, and Pam knew she was going to come shortly.
Dawn rubbed Pam's clit harder and then fingered her deeper, ordering her to "come with me." Both women gasped for breath and kissed frantically, grinding into each other when they felt it coming. Dawn told her love she was going to come when she felt Pam's pussy grip her fingers tightly, and Dawn felt the explosion hit.
Dawn whimpered into Pam's mouth, "I love you" and everything went white as she squeezed her tight. Dawn then felt Pam moaning and Dawn's fingers were suddenly covered in delicious honey.
They stood there for a minute, just holding each other as they tried to calm down. Pam whispered, "I love you too" as she removed her hand from under Dawn's skirt, licked her fingers, and then kissed Dawn deeply.
"Go down on me," instructed Dawn.
Pam smiled and knelt. She always obeyed her lover. She removed enough of Dawn's clothes so she could tongue her. She found Dawn's clit and started to lick her. It didn't take long for Dawn to come, much louder than when the two girls had rubbed on each other. But Dawn wanted more, and Pam was more than happy to oblige...
However, just because the girls hadn't seen any other women, they were wrong to think that the other dressing rooms were empty. In fact, Linda was in the next dressing room, deep in thought, trying to decide between a number of outfits. When she heard the sounds. The sounds of a woman in ecstasy!
At first Linda thought that a woman was jilling next door to her, and she tried her best to ignore it. Then Linda decided it was a girl and her boyfriend - that a guy had snuck into the women's' dressing rooms! Linda thought to herself that he clearly was a much better stud than Linda's lame excuse for a boyfriend, who could barely excite her. But then it became clear that it was two girls! Two girls driving each other crazy!
Linda couldn't believe it. All she could think was, "Shame on those girls." It just wasn't right, on so many levels. First of all, girls shouldn't have sex with other girls, period. Everyone knew it was immoral, wrong, perverted. They were sinful homosexual queers! She had been told this in church many times. Second, no one should have sex a store dressing room. Couldn't they control themselves until they got home? They were like animals! That's what lesbians were - nothing but immoral animals!
As Dawn and Pam became more and more vocal, Linda found their moans impossible to ignore. Finally, Linda decided she had to put a stop to it. She would find the source of the moans and give the girls a piece of her mind. Linda would tell the girls she had heard their perversions, and that they were sinners and should stop. It was wrong. Simply wrong.
But then Linda thought to herself that any girls who would have sex with other girls were horrible and crazy perverts. Who know what such depraved people would do to her? Maybe they would laugh at her and continue? Hit her? Rape her? Linda decided she would take that chance - for the sake of decency and morality they simply had to be stopped!
It was easy for Linda to locate the offending dressing room, so she knocked on its door. But there was no response. Linda decided the girls must be so involved in their animal-like sex that they didn't hear her. So she pushed on the door - and felt the latch snap (evidentially it wasn't made very well). Linda opened it. And saw something she had never in her life seen. Not even close. Pam was kneeling on the floor, eating Dawn. And fondling her breasts. Dawn's head was tilted back and she clearly was in ecstasy.
Linda froze. A thousand thoughts went through her mind at once. But not the thoughts she had heard in Church. "So that's what a girl looks like when she's about to come...I guess that's what a girl does when she's enjoying herself... that kneeling girl really knows how to eat another girl... and she seems to enjoy doing it... I wonder whether girls are better at eating other girls?" A thousand thoughts. But nothing that she had learned in church.
Linda also felt jealous. Because in all her life, she'd never come. As Linda watched she thought about how she'd let a number of men fuck her, but she'd never enjoyed it. She also had blown a bunch of men, but she'd never enjoyed herself the way the kneeling girl seemed to be enjoying herself. A few of the men had briefly eaten her, but it wasn't like what the kneeling girl was doing. Not even close. Linda couldn't help but think, "I wish my boyfriend would eat me like that."
Linda decided it wasn't fair at all! She'd let all kinds of men fuck her however they liked, and she'd blown them all, but she'd never really enjoyed any of it! But these girls clearly were having the time of their lives! And they didn't even have to put up with a selfish man and their yucky dicks. Let alone with the Church and its preaching that all sex outside of marriage was wrong, especially same-sex lovemaking. It just wasn't fair!
