I'm always happy to receive CONSTRUCTIVE criticism. Be kind, this is my first story.
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Lights flashing, the smell of cigarette smoke, perfume and alcohol permeate the dance floor. The music is loud and the crowd is lively. Holly doesn't go out to night clubs very often, especially considering that she wasn't 21 yet, but when she does the 20 year old likes to let her hair down and have fun. The young college student loved being able to dress sexy and show off her fit tanned body. Tonight was no different.
Holly knew how to dress to make every inch of her curvaceous 5'3" 108 lb frame look amazing. Her hair was shoulder length, brown with blond highlights. The young girl wore a dark brown tank top with spaghetti straps that barely covered her belly button ring, accentuating her toned stomach and full 34C breasts. She also wore a pair of skin tight black hip hugger Lycra pants that allowed people to appreciate the lovely tribal tattoo on her lower back. Beneath the tattoo, and above her hip huggers, was a strategically positioned pair of black thong panties to help accentuate the young woman's lovely hips and butt.
The 20 year old was drawing the attention of sorts of onlookers. One of which was Alex, a 51 year old butch lesbian sitting at the bar, drinking a beer and admiring the lovely young woman on the dance floor. Normally Alex wouldn't have come to a bar like this, it wasn't her scene. This was a straight club which catered mainly to the college crowd. The 51 year old preferred going to a lesbian club across town, but tonight was different. Alex was just dumped by her longtime girlfriend.. She wanted to get drunk and this club was just a block away from her apartment.
Although the mature lesbian was devastated having just been dumped, she had to admit that the brunette on the dance floor was certainly easy on the eyes. In fact, she made Alex forget about her ex. The swaying of that sexy young body was mesmerizing. The mature woman tried not to objectify women as objects, but she found herself lusting after the beautiful brunette on the dance floor.
Holly danced with wild abandon, letting her body move to the rhythm of the music. The 20 year old had no problem finding willing dance partners. Normally that was a good thing, but not at the moment. One of the guys, who was obviously drunk, was man-handling the young girl, trying to pull her top down. The the young woman, who was also drunk herself, slapped him. The look on his face was that of astonishment which quickly turned to anger. He slapped her with the back of his hand. He was about to slap her again, but before he could, a glass bottle shattered above his head.
"That's no way to treat a lady you stupid son of a bitch", said a husky voice out of the shadows. "Are you okay miss?"
Still somewhat shaken with tears in her eyes, Holly replied "Yes, I think so thank you".
"You're welcome honey." said the deep voice.
Before another word could be uttered, the bouncers descended upon the scene. Several of them checked on the man lying unconscious on the floor. Another pair rushed Holly's savior, hitting the shadowy figure in the stomach before throwing the young woman's protector out the front door.
"Wait, he's the one who protected me from that guy," said Holly as she pointed to the unconscious man on the ground. But it was too late. The young girl's knight in shining armor was already out the front door. The beautiful brunette decided to run out and check on the person who helped her. There she found her defender leaning against the wall. Holly walked over and finally caught of glimpse of the person. She was old, much older than the college student. This older woman was 5'9', 208 lbs with a beer belly, and had brownish-gray hair cut very short. A very masculine looking woman, wearing blue jeans and a long sleeve crimson colored thermal shirt.
"Hi, I'm Holly. Thank you for helping me. Are you alright?" the college student asked.
With a meek smile on her face she said, "My name's Alex and I'm fine honey. I'm more concerned about you. Are you OK?"
"I'm fine thanks to you." said Holly as she smiled. "You are my hero! Is there any way I can make it up to you?"
Alex's heart skipped a beat when she heard this. Even though the older lesbian knew it was completely wrong, she was extremely attracted to a girl. It was against the butch lesbian's principals to go after straight women and women who were more than 10 years younger than her. The beautiful brunette standing in front of her definitely broke both of those principals, but Alex just couldn't resist her. Staring deeply into the young woman's beautiful gray eyes and smiling sheepishly she said, "Well if you're asking honey. I guess I...I...would it be too much to ask you for a kiss?"
Normally Holly would have politely said no to such a request. The college student was straight. Though she had fantasized about making with women before, Holly had never kissed a girl before. It didn't help that the 20 year old found the masculine woman completely unattractive either. But the brunette felt obligated to grant Alex's request since the older woman did help her out.
Holly smiled and said. "You saved me from that jerk. I would be more than happy to give you a kiss."
The masculine older woman smiled. She gently caressed Holly's cheek, slowly moving her hand back, running her fingers through the young girls' soft hair. The young girl could feel the experienced lesbian's left hand on her right hip. Then in a swift but gentle motion Alex pulled Holly close to her.
The butch lesbian pressed her lips against the young girls lips, kissing her softly. Holly was hoping that it would be a quick peck on the lips, but she could feel the old woman's tongue forcing it's way into her mouth. All the brunette could do was to let Alex's tongue into her mouth. The overweight woman pulled the beautiful young woman into her, their bodies touching. Holly felt the foreign tongue massaging her own tongue. For a brief moment, the college student found herself aroused. She put her arms around the butch lesbian's neck, tenderly kissing Alex back. Realizing what she had done, the much younger girl quickly regained her composure, Holly's arms fell to her sides and she finally broke off the kiss.
"Well, uh... Thanks again!" said Holly as she began to walk off.
"Uh, uh, wait!" Said Alex, hoping to find a way to keep the young girl from leaving..
The young girl turned around. "Yes." said Holly, hoping to get out of the situation as quickly as possible.
"I don't think you're in any condition to drive. Do you have a friend to take to home?" asked the older woman.
"No, my friend left a while ago. But I'm okay to drive." said the college student.
"I don't want you getting hurt young lady. Look, I have an apartment across the street. You can have my bed, I'll take the couch." said Alex.
Holly looked for a way to get out of the situation. "I know what you're trying to do. I'm really flattered, but I'm not interested. Besides, I think I'll be fine. Thanks for the offer."
"Look, you can leave just as soon as you sober up, plus my bedroom door has a lock on it and I'll be sleeping on the couch if you're concerned." replied her butch protector.
Holly felt trapped. She didn't want to spend the night at this woman's place, but she knew she was too drunk to drive home. "I...I guess so." relented Holly..
"Great! Follow me." said the older woman as she led Holly off to her apartment.