Readers:
Please
read this long author's note! It's a heartfelt message from me to each of the 123 of you following my humble work. Me to each of you individually if I could.
Thank you SO MUCH for reading and voting and commenting on my work, and of course for liking it enough to follow me. That really, really means a lot to me.
I need to apologize for how long this chapter of Mark & Nia has taken to come out. I think of it as "Mark & Nia" because that's what it is now: their love story. The White Freshman, Black Coeds story wasn't supposed to go this way, but when Mark met Nia he (and I) couldn't help falling in love with her, and now I hate that title and want to change it.
I tried to publish the following idea as an Author's Update, but for some reason the moderators have twice disallowed it. The idea was to have a new series of related Volumes (The Awakening, The First Time, The Wilding, and now, The Romance) that repackaged all the past Chapters into larger chunks and made them more or less standalone stories. That model would've been used going forward, with the title changing at key points. But they won't publish that simple idea for me as an explanation to my readers before it happens.
So I'm giving it to you here, continuing with the story name I hate, at Chapter 24. I may yet do the Volumes idea, but if I do I'll preface each one as a "repackaging of Chapters x - y," so you can skip it if you've read those already.
And PLEASE, comment on any of this, or the past or future episodes, in the Comments. I think most writers love that kind of feedback, and I especially do. I've connected with one reader via email and he's given me some great feedback and ideas for the future of the story. I'd love to hear YOURS. I don't even care if you vote, but Nia & Mark belong to you readers as much as to me, so I'd enjoy hearing any thoughts you have about them.
Thank you for reading this far, and for following my little tale.
Saturday, 11/5
This time I wasn't the last one out of bed: I came into the kitchen dressed (sans underwear because they'd been lost in battle last night) and found Candace there alone, already cooking.
"Seen the girls yet?"
"No. I suspect they wore each other out!"
I went down the hall and checked Keisha's door, finding it unlocked, a bit to my surprise. In the dim light coming from the hallway and through the heavy curtains I could see them spooned in bed, Keisha behind. I thought about flashing the lights, but that would be cruel. So I decided to kneel at the edge of the bed and lightly caress Nia's face. She looked so peaceful and...
satiated
lying there with Keisha's one arm over her.
Presently she stirred and said sleepily, "Hey you!" Then she stretched over and gave me a kiss, which roused Keisha, who blinked her eyes against the light. Then she snuggled back closer to Nia, pulling the covers over their heads and playfully telling me to go away.
"Can't do it. This one has a recital at 2 and it's 9 now." Nia's eyes snapped open, as if she'd forgotten. She didn't
jump
out of bed, but she did ease out against Keisha's protests. She kissed me again and headed off to Keisha's bathroom. Being silly, I slid into Nia's spot and snuggled myself back into Keisha. "If you just want someone to hug up on, I'm available."
She
mmm'd
and hugged me, pressing herself luxuriantly into me. (Remember her large breasts? That was the luxuriant part.) After a bit of this though she said, "You're all hard and bony, I want Nia back! She's soft and feminine and curvy in the right places..."
"You're right. So why don't you go into the bathroom and send her back out here. Give us 10 minutes alone?"
"You can't properly love a girl like that in 10 minutes! It should take all
night
..." And she
mmm'd
again in remembrance.
"Who was talking about
her
? A
guy's
got needs too, ya know! And all I need is 10 minutes of her delicious mouth..."
"
*I*
could take care of that for you..." she said playfully.
"You could, but you
can't
. I'd love that, but I'd better wait for my girl." She hugged me tighter, and then surprised me by rubbing me through my pants.
"Oh I'm sorry, is that what I think it was? I thought you had a banana in your pocket and I was trying to figure out why."
I turned to face her and said, "I'll put a banana in
your
pocket!"
"Would you eat it as I pushed it back out?"
Whoa, where did that come from?
She was looking at me
really
naughtily now.
"Every bit until it was all gone, then I'd bury my mouth in that sweet pussy it came out of." Keisha gasped and reached a hand under the covers, rolling onto her back for better access.
Just then Nia came out of the bathroom. Neither of us moved or acted guilty; we were all pretty comfortable sexually now. "Am I interrupting something?"
"No, not really. I was just about to eat a banana from Keisha's vagina." Nia had by now become pretty used to the crazy things I sometimes said.
"Ah. Would you guys like some time alone for that?" I looked at Keisha and saw a pleading in her eyes.
"Yes, sweetheart, that would be lovely. Ask Candace to hold off on our pancakes for a bit?" Nia gathered her clothes as I stood and shucked mine, kissing her deeply before she left. "Now where were we..." as Nia closed the door.
"Something about a banana, I believe. Peeled or unpeeled?"
"Peeled, of course. That'll be smoother going inβ" she moaned, "βand much easier for me to eat as it comes out." She gasped and rubbed herself faster. "Let me slide it into your mouth to moisten it first..." Keisha's eyes were burning as I offered her two fingers in lieu of the banana. The things she did to that 'banana' with her tongue ought to be criminal, and my dick was wishing he was being assaulted like that.
Keisha was quite worked up and told me I could rub myself against her thigh; that wouldn't be overtly sexual for her. (
Boundaries
, remember.) "I think it's lubed up good now, so let me move down here and watch you slide it in." So I pushed the blanket off her and saw her slender body in all its glory: long and lean and a mocha brown, topped with two scoops of chocolate ice cream, just to beat that metaphor to death.
"Here, you do it so I don't hurt you," and I made a show of passing the 'banana' to her. She took it, and then talked dirty to me.
"You want to watch me push this slippery phallus inside myself, you naughty boy? Let me just put the tip in....
Ahhh
... Does that look sexy, the white against my brown pussy lips? I bet you wish it was your dick, don't you? Would that feel nice, shoving it in slow and deep like this?" She was shoving two fingers in slow and deep, and it was driving my dick mad, so I started stroking it, turning on my side to do it.
"That's it, you nasty young man, stroke that fat white cock while you watch me fuck myself with this banana. You wanna taste it now,
hmmm
? Take a bite." (As a quick aside, it's pretty hard to fake actually
having
a banana in a situation like this, but Keisha offered me her two fingers, drenched in her juices." I 'bit off' the banana at her middle knuckles, taking time to lick it clean first.
"
Ooo
, you like that banana, don't you? Let me get another bite ready for you..." and she went back to finger-fucking herself. Then another "bite" as I watched Keisha pleasure herself, my face only inches from her fiery-hot snatch. My dick was oozing pre-cum, and I knew I'd never have her like that, but this was still fun.
Another bite and then only a quarter of the banana was left. "Keisha, could I be allowed to come on your lower leg or foot? Would that be "too sexual" or whatever?"
She thought it over and said, "No, that would be alright.
*I*
wouldn't be getting anything out of it (like if you were touching my breasts), and for you it would be just a place for it to go so as not to make a mess. So yes, that would be okay. And maybe you can come with me?"
"That's my goal, lovely lady." She smiled and then we went back to doing lewd things with the banana, while I rubbed the head of my dick on the top and side of her lovely foot. (I didn't, and still don't, have a foot fetish, but there was something erotic about it. I guess it was the idea that, "I can't have
that
, so this will have to do. And it's actually nice that she's sharing it with me."
"There, it's all the way in. Now put your mouth on me and get ready to catch it."
[I know this sounds kinda gross, even though we didn't actually
have
a banana, but don't tell me
you
wouldn't eat the banana!]
So I put my open mouth on the opening of her love tunnel (banana tunnel?) and she went pretty wild. "Here it comes, baby! Oh God yes! Eat that banana, boy. That's it, munch that thing!" I didn't know if she meant the banana or her puffy labia, so I went with the latter. Meanwhile, my dick had made the smooth top of her foot super-slippery and I was about to blast all over it.
"Lick my clit now, Mark! Oh that's it, baby! Lick it faster!
Harder!
Faster!......Ohhhhh