Recession Blues: Wife Forced to Strip
Original story: Stormbringer
'Novelization': RogueAlan
I have been enjoying Stormbringer's stories for years. 'Welcome to the Neighborhood' is a personal favorite. I stumbled across illustrated panels for 'Recession Blues' a couple years ago, and again more recently. The story was great, and while the art is worth tracking down, I guess I'm one of the less visual minority who prefer to read the story so the images are in my head. So I set about fleshing out the story. And Stormbringer graciously accepted it.
I should note here, that at the completion of chapter 1 I was so excited I did not even get the edited chapter out to him. What follows IS the edited chapter. And there is more on the way. I hope any of you who have not read his work before will take time to look him up here on LitErotica and read some of his stories. And I hope you enjoy... Recession Blues
(SKIP to avoid SPOILER)
Synopsis: A married couple having financial difficulties consider the possibilities of having the wife strip for a living after she wins an amateur night contest at a strip club. After accepting a job, the black bouncer ejects a client being too aggressive towards the wife during a lap dance. The bouncer collects his 'reward,' and the wife ends up doing more than she expected, and in doing so, assures that she is firmly in the club owner's control.
Characters: (Descriptions are left up to the artist)
Ann- The wife, has an amazing body worthy of a porn star.
Tom- The Husband. average and nondescript... and unemployed.
Leslie, the Club Owner- older, smooth but a little sleazy.
Jacen- The bouncer. Over muscled and hung.
The aggressive client-
Settings: A bedroom, kitchen or dining room table, stage with a pole for stripping, Table in the club with a view of the stage, a lap dance area, the entrance to the club both inside and outside, and a parking lot with a car.
***
Ann looked at the splashy ad in the Sunday paper. A shapely blonde held on to a pole, bills generously adorning her thong where she was frozen above a group of staring men. The upright living V of a bouncer is visible at the edge of the photo, the upper and lower borders advertising 'Amateur Contest, Every Wednesday Night. Win $500.'
"I hope you find something interesting in there," her husband said, setting his pencil on the check register, "It's the last paper we'll be able to buy for awhile... We're officially broke."
"What?" Ann was shocked. She knew things had been tight, but last week there had been $400 in their checking account.
"This credit card payment and the electrical bill wiped us out." He reached for the Classifieds section, "If I don't find a job soon, we're in real trouble." Ann looked at the ad again. She knew Tom had been trying... He visited three or four businesses a day, jobs he was grossly overqualified to do, jobs that paid minimum wage, part time jobs... he had even applied and told the company he was willing to travel. She sighed.
"I already looked... There's still nothing. I guess a degree in modern dance wasn't the smartest choice," she looked at the ad again, "The only thing I could do is work at the local strip club... They're hiring dancers."
"Right," her husband rolled his eyes, "That's so funny." Suddenly Ann was angry. Was he saying she could not do that job?
"Really?" Tom recognized the tone in her voice, "It says right here... They have amateur night each week... The winner gets $500."
"Bullshit," Tom scoffed, "Let me see that." He looked at the ad. There was not much to it.
"That would pay the rent, but I don't think I could dance nude." Ann shivered at the thought.
"I know." Ann's eyes narrowed angrily at her husband's unintended sleight. He sighed, and surprised her, though, adding, "I guess we can keep it in mind... it beats being homeless."
***Wednesday night.
Tom and Ann paused at the front of the club. Ann hated to admit that she was nervous, but she was holding her husband's hand very tightly. She looked around, resisting the urge to stare at her reflection in the glass at the front of the club. She was sexed up, and knew that several of the guys in the line were staring at her. Nobody did more than stare, though, maybe because of the big black bouncer standing outside the door. The display behind him advertised the amateur night and the $500 prize.
"We're just here to check the place out," she said, mostly to herself, though Tom nodded his agreement. He was trying not to stare at the revealing photos advertising the various dancers within.
"At least it's clean," he paused, "Looks like a decent enough place." The only strip joints he had ever been toβa couple bachelor partiesβhad been real shit holes. The bouncer looked them up and down. That is, he looked Ann up and down. Nodding, he smiled,
"Good evening, folks. Here for the amateur competition?" he certainly hoped so. Tom shrugged.
"Maybe."
"She should enter," Jacen encouraged them, "You'd be a natural, ma'am." Ann blushed and looked away. The couple moved inside, unaware of Jacen's eyes following Ann's firm ass. 'Damn, look at the body on that slut,' he whispered into the microphone he wore.
"Which... Oh, never mind. And no shit." The inside bouncer answered through the almost hidden earpiece.
***
Tom and Ann paused inside the smoked glass front door, looking around. Tom noticed every guy in the room was eyeing Ann. He was proud of how sexy and beautiful his wife was. Ann did not seem aware of the attention, as she eyed the larger, more explicit photos high on the walls of the big entry hall. A man in an expensive white suit came up, clapping a hand on Tom's shoulder and deftly slipping his other arm around Ann's waist, moving between the obvious couple. Like the inside bouncer, he had been alerted to a particularly tasty visitor by Jacen's statement. Behind the couple, the next group entering held the door wide enough for the club owner to see Jacen looking inside. The big bouncer noted who he was chaperoning and nodded that it was the right mark.
"New guests," the owner began before the couple could startle at his approach, "I hope you're here for the contest, young lady. You are astonishing."
"I don't know," Ann demurred. Tom's chest puffed out possessively.
"She's never done anything like this before," Tom said, "We saw your ad, and thought we'd check the place out, first."
"Of course," the owner smiled broadly, as if that was the most natural thing in the world, "And I'm sure you'll be quite impressed... We have only the best here... the best service, the best food, the best beer and booze... and the prettiest dancers." He looked around conspirationally, "I hate to confess it, but judging from the competition, you have a great shot at winning," he winked, "Go grab a seat. Drinks are on me if you decide to compete."
As the couple moved off, the owner raised his hand to his mouth and feigned examining the rest of the room.
"Great call, Jacen... She's perfect."
"Yep," the big bouncer agreed, "Those tits and ass are amazing." The owner kept the couple in sight as they moved through the spacious hall and through the heavy velvet drapes.
***