This is my first time writing an erotic story and I'd welcome any feedback.
*One Year Ago *
Vanessa quickly off her computer and gathers her belonging and started walking out of the door of her favorite coffee shop when her phone rang and she looked down to get it from her bag when she hit something hard spilling her lukewarm coffee.
'Oh damn' she thought.
"Oh so sorry" she said.
"No worries I didn't like this shirt anyways" a gentle masculine voice said.
Vanessa looked up and was held captive by calming grey eyes. When her brain started again she spoke "No, it was entirely fault I pay for the dry cleaning or a new shirt."
Ethan looked down and thought 'she has to be the most beautiful ebony princess he had ever seen'. He gazed into her dark brown eyes and then roamed over her hourglass figure and thought about all the naughty things he could do to those curves.
"Well how about we forget about my shirt and I take you to dinner."
Her eyes widened 'This guy is out of his mind' she told herself. "Um...thank you but I can't let you take me to dinner." 'Yes, I dodged that bullet'
"Okay, why don't you take me to dinner" he says.
"You don't give up do you?"