I came across this site one day and couldn't stop reading these stories. From loving couples, cheating wives to kink. HOWEVER, once I came across stories of disrespect and cuckholding a husband or boyfriend, well that's when I needed to step in and re-write the ending.
My ending re-write is for a story by Mrifter: Dave loses Mia to BBC Boss Pt. 01 - Interracial Love - Literotica.com which I encourage you to read. I would like to thank Mrifter for allowing me to re-write is ending.
The first three chapter of this story seemed okay and, just maybe the author would take pity on Dave and save his dignity; he didn't. Halfway through the fourth chapter I knew it was over for Dave. As a result, I decided to make a few changes. Hell, who am I kidding. I'm changing the whole ending beginning within the fourth chapter where Dave has had enough and decides to go to a motel for the night.
""COME ON DAVE, PLEASE JUST FUCK OFF!!!" Mia yelled. Likely the angriest Dave had ever heard her."
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Looking back Charlie, I think I did the right thing. Kendal is doing well. She's sticking with college. She's still interested in modeling, but with a reputable agency. She talks to her mother at least once a week.
What about you Dave how are you doing?
I guess I'm ok. But I haven't talked to Mia in about 6 months, she only talks to Kendal. Kendal said she was pissed at me in the beginning but lately she's come to realize how screwed up her life had gotten and now she feels guilty for what she did to me. I guess I can see why she might be a little mad at me. I did temporarily screw up her life. But in my defense, I was trying to save her dignity and self-respect.
Dave I've only heard bits and pieces to this story from the guys that come in, but I've never heard the whole story. If you feel like talking about it, I'm buying. And Dave, you know I can keep a secret. Hell, I know who half the guys in this bar are screwing and it isn't their wives. So, if you need to talk to someone I'm here.
Charlie, my therapist tells me that it might help if I talk to a friend, someone that will listen and not judge me. Who better to talk to then my bartender.
So, give me a beer and I'll tell you my story.
Here's a beer and I'm all ears.
When I first met Mia, it was love at first sight. I was 16 and Mia was 18. Mia had a 3-year-old daughter named Kendal. I may have only been 15, but I felt so comfortable with Kendal like she was a little baby sister. My mom and dad were worried about me. I was only 15 and I was dating an 18-year-old with a kid. Mia's mom and dad helped so Mia could finish school and find a parttime job. Mia was a wild one. Obviously, she ended up with a kid 15. But she was a great mom and did her best to raise Kendal. After a while, Kendal was like my daughter. I was the only father figure she had. After college I got an excellent job, and I was able to help Mia raise Kendal. Once Kendal was in school, Mia would work during the day and I would watch Kendal at night while Mia took night classes. Mia was taking marketing and promotion class. Mia wasn't interested in a degree, she just wanted to learn about the industry. Our life together was good. We were happy. And we always talked about getting married like a real family and I would adopt Kendal and make it official. Over time we were able to afford a nice 3-bedroom house it even had a pool. And then I wanted to finally make it official, I asked Mia to marry me. She said yes, but reluctantly,
"I don't want to hurt your feelings, but I'm not sure I'm ready for marriage. I feel like I've been in a relationship my whole adult life. I love you so much, but I feel like I might resent it if you're the only person I have ever been with."
I was not surprised we had discussed it before. So, we agreed to "experiment" a little before marriage. I didn't want to be with anyone but Mia; but I loved Mia, so I went along with it. We agreed to a "hall pass" I guess you could say.
Around the same time, Mia was starting a new job and at a modeling agency working for this asshole named Mike Harvey. Well, no sooner do we agree to "experiment" and low an behold, Mia is fucking Mike. Look I'm no angel. Charlie, I'm embarrassed to say it, but I was getting a little turned-on seeing them together. And jealous. It wasn't what I was expecting. He was a big Black guy. Big if you know what I mean.
Really, how big are we talking cause Mia's petite only like what 5'4" right?
I don't know Charlie, like 11 inches.
Dave, do you want another beer maybe some pretzels too?
Sure, and may be a shot too.
Here's your beer and shot. Dave just let me take care of a few customers. I'll be right back.
Hey George, what can I get you?
Same as always Charlie. Tom, Bobbie, and Ray are around here somewhere, so just give us a bucket.
Who shot the best today.
Tom of course. Hey, Dave how are you doing and how's Kendal? I haven't seen you around in a while. Also, I was sorry to hear about Mia.
Thanks George. I'm doing well and Kendal's doing good in school now too.
That's great. I'm glad she's back in school and she got the help she needed.
Thanks George. It was hard on her for a while, but she's tough.
Ok Dave, where were we.
Well Charlie, you were asking how big Mike's dick was.
Oh, that's right. So, he's gotta a BBC.
Yes Charlie. Anyway, I was shocked that he was what Mia would be into. And the guy is like 50. But I guess Mia really wanted to experiment before we got married. So, I just went along with it. It killed me to see her with him. But I agreed to it so I can only blame myself. I guess we learn from our mistakes, and I learned a lot.
Fast forward a week or so; I come home and find the music is blasting some rap music. Kendal and her friend Emily are dance around the pool, falling out of the tiny bikinis that Mike had bought them. They're in and out of the pool playing with a couple of older boys. They look like they were in their 20s. Mia was all over her 50-year-old big Black boss and there's this other guy Dan something there too. I wasn't happy. Then Mia comes running up to me and I made my next big mistake. See my pattern here? I can't say no to Mia. It's like I'm under a spell or something and I just agree to stupid shit that I don't want to happen. So, Mia comes running up to me.
"I have a favor to ask. And I promise this will be the last time, Mia says. I will be a good little wife for you. My wants and desires will be met, and I will be all yours! I just need this! And I am so grateful for you to let me have it. I promise I will be a good girl after this. I will do whatever you want me too, wherever you want. I promise on my life! Thank you so much for being the loving partner that understands."
She looks at me with puppy dog eyes, all while stroking my cock. Even though I was extremely turned on, I still wasn't comfortable with it.
"PLEASE babe! I won't be happy unless you let me do this. If you do, then I will be the best wife you could ever want!"
Regardless, how I protested, she continued stroking me until she finished me off.
"Please baby, I need this!! Or I will always wonder what it would have been like!" Mia was practically begging me at this point.
And of course, I gave in again and I let her do whatever she wanted. And then my life ended. I was so stupid, but I don't think it would have made a difference. If I said no, she would have done it anyway and just resent me for not saying yes. I was in a no-win situation. Then she gave me a long passionate kiss. Probably the last one I'll ever get.
"I love you!" She said, "You're the most perfect man a woman could ever want!"
So, what'd you give into this time Dave?
Mia's boss Mike and his friend Dan started saying things to me and what they were going to do to Mia. I was being humiliated while Mike and Dan both fucked Mia right there in front of me. I couldn't take it anymore. I told them to at least take it in the house instead of my backyard where someone might hear or see them.