Dave Loses Mia To Bbc Boss Pt 04 Rewrite

I came across this site one day and couldn't stop reading these stories. From loving couples, cheating wives to kink. HOWEVER, once I came across stories of disrespect and cuckholding a husband or boyfriend, well that's when I needed to step in and re-write the ending.

My ending re-write is for a story by Mrifter: Dave loses Mia to BBC Boss Pt. 01 - Interracial Love - Literotica.com which I encourage you to read. I would like to thank Mrifter for allowing me to re-write is ending.

The first three chapter of this story seemed okay and, just maybe the author would take pity on Dave and save his dignity; he didn't. Halfway through the fourth chapter I knew it was over for Dave. As a result, I decided to make a few changes. Hell, who am I kidding. I'm changing the whole ending beginning within the fourth chapter where Dave has had enough and decides to go to a motel for the night.

""COME ON DAVE, PLEASE JUST FUCK OFF!!!" Mia yelled. Likely the angriest Dave had ever heard her."

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Looking back Charlie, I think I did the right thing. Kendal is doing well. She's sticking with college. She's still interested in modeling, but with a reputable agency. She talks to her mother at least once a week.

What about you Dave how are you doing?

I guess I'm ok. But I haven't talked to Mia in about 6 months, she only talks to Kendal. Kendal said she was pissed at me in the beginning but lately she's come to realize how screwed up her life had gotten and now she feels guilty for what she did to me. I guess I can see why she might be a little mad at me. I did temporarily screw up her life. But in my defense, I was trying to save her dignity and self-respect.

Dave I've only heard bits and pieces to this story from the guys that come in, but I've never heard the whole story. If you feel like talking about it, I'm buying. And Dave, you know I can keep a secret. Hell, I know who half the guys in this bar are screwing and it isn't their wives. So, if you need to talk to someone I'm here.

Charlie, my therapist tells me that it might help if I talk to a friend, someone that will listen and not judge me. Who better to talk to then my bartender.

So, give me a beer and I'll tell you my story.

Here's a beer and I'm all ears.

When I first met Mia, it was love at first sight. I was 16 and Mia was 18. Mia had a 3-year-old daughter named Kendal. I may have only been 15, but I felt so comfortable with Kendal like she was a little baby sister. My mom and dad were worried about me. I was only 15 and I was dating an 18-year-old with a kid. Mia's mom and dad helped so Mia could finish school and find a parttime job. Mia was a wild one. Obviously, she ended up with a kid 15. But she was a great mom and did her best to raise Kendal. After a while, Kendal was like my daughter. I was the only father figure she had. After college I got an excellent job, and I was able to help Mia raise Kendal. Once Kendal was in school, Mia would work during the day and I would watch Kendal at night while Mia took night classes. Mia was taking marketing and promotion class. Mia wasn't interested in a degree, she just wanted to learn about the industry. Our life together was good. We were happy. And we always talked about getting married like a real family and I would adopt Kendal and make it official. Over time we were able to afford a nice 3-bedroom house it even had a pool. And then I wanted to finally make it official, I asked Mia to marry me. She said yes, but reluctantly,

"I don't want to hurt your feelings, but I'm not sure I'm ready for marriage. I feel like I've been in a relationship my whole adult life. I love you so much, but I feel like I might resent it if you're the only person I have ever been with."

I was not surprised we had discussed it before. So, we agreed to "experiment" a little before marriage. I didn't want to be with anyone but Mia; but I loved Mia, so I went along with it. We agreed to a "hall pass" I guess you could say.

Around the same time, Mia was starting a new job and at a modeling agency working for this asshole named Mike Harvey. Well, no sooner do we agree to "experiment" and low an behold, Mia is fucking Mike. Look I'm no angel. Charlie, I'm embarrassed to say it, but I was getting a little turned-on seeing them together. And jealous. It wasn't what I was expecting. He was a big Black guy. Big if you know what I mean.

Really, how big are we talking cause Mia's petite only like what 5'4" right?

I don't know Charlie, like 11 inches.

Dave, do you want another beer maybe some pretzels too?

Sure, and may be a shot too.

Here's your beer and shot. Dave just let me take care of a few customers. I'll be right back.

Hey George, what can I get you?

Same as always Charlie. Tom, Bobbie, and Ray are around here somewhere, so just give us a bucket.

Who shot the best today.

Tom of course. Hey, Dave how are you doing and how's Kendal? I haven't seen you around in a while. Also, I was sorry to hear about Mia.

Thanks George. I'm doing well and Kendal's doing good in school now too.

That's great. I'm glad she's back in school and she got the help she needed.

Thanks George. It was hard on her for a while, but she's tough.

Ok Dave, where were we.

Well Charlie, you were asking how big Mike's dick was.

Oh, that's right. So, he's gotta a BBC.

Yes Charlie. Anyway, I was shocked that he was what Mia would be into. And the guy is like 50. But I guess Mia really wanted to experiment before we got married. So, I just went along with it. It killed me to see her with him. But I agreed to it so I can only blame myself. I guess we learn from our mistakes, and I learned a lot.

Fast forward a week or so; I come home and find the music is blasting some rap music. Kendal and her friend Emily are dance around the pool, falling out of the tiny bikinis that Mike had bought them. They're in and out of the pool playing with a couple of older boys. They look like they were in their 20s. Mia was all over her 50-year-old big Black boss and there's this other guy Dan something there too. I wasn't happy. Then Mia comes running up to me and I made my next big mistake. See my pattern here? I can't say no to Mia. It's like I'm under a spell or something and I just agree to stupid shit that I don't want to happen. So, Mia comes running up to me.

"I have a favor to ask. And I promise this will be the last time, Mia says. I will be a good little wife for you. My wants and desires will be met, and I will be all yours! I just need this! And I am so grateful for you to let me have it. I promise I will be a good girl after this. I will do whatever you want me too, wherever you want. I promise on my life! Thank you so much for being the loving partner that understands."

She looks at me with puppy dog eyes, all while stroking my cock. Even though I was extremely turned on, I still wasn't comfortable with it.

"PLEASE babe! I won't be happy unless you let me do this. If you do, then I will be the best wife you could ever want!"

Regardless, how I protested, she continued stroking me until she finished me off.

"Please baby, I need this!! Or I will always wonder what it would have been like!" Mia was practically begging me at this point.

And of course, I gave in again and I let her do whatever she wanted. And then my life ended. I was so stupid, but I don't think it would have made a difference. If I said no, she would have done it anyway and just resent me for not saying yes. I was in a no-win situation. Then she gave me a long passionate kiss. Probably the last one I'll ever get.

"I love you!" She said, "You're the most perfect man a woman could ever want!"

So, what'd you give into this time Dave?

Mia's boss Mike and his friend Dan started saying things to me and what they were going to do to Mia. I was being humiliated while Mike and Dan both fucked Mia right there in front of me. I couldn't take it anymore. I told them to at least take it in the house instead of my backyard where someone might hear or see them.

Then I fucked up one last time for the night. They went into the bedroom, and I followed to watch. I know I know, pathetic right? And then I knew it was over. Mia's last word were:

"COME ON DAVE, PLEASE JUST FUCK OFF!!!"

That's when it hit me. I had becoming her cuckhold. Was that her plan all along? Is that what she meant by "experiment" before we got marries? And would it end once we were married or if we even got married? Well FUCK THAT. I screwed up big time, but I'm not a cuckhold, it was time to pull myself together and rethink my relationship with Mia. All the years we were together and what I did for Mia and how I helped her raise Kendal. No, I was done with Mia. So, I left.

I checked into that cheap motel just outside of town. I don't think I slept at all. The next morning, I showered and called work and took a few days off. I waited until I knew no one would be home and I drove home to change and pack some close for a week or two. I also grab my computer. When I started to leave, Kendal walked in. She was concerned for me and asked me where I went last night. I told her the truth. I stayed at a motel and I moving out. I couldn't watch your mother anymore. I told her that her mother and her friends were turning me in to their little cuckhold. I hated to talk to Kendal like this, but she's an adult know and needed to hear the truth. I told Kendal that her mother and I were done. Kendal started crying and told me I was wrong and that her mom would never do that to me. She loves you she said. I told her, you watched her, for God's sake, she was taking on two men at the same time. I will always love you and your mom, but I've lost all respect for her. And you better watch yourself too. They'll be expecting the same thing from you that they're getting from your mother.

Charlie, she tried to convince me that Mike is nice to her. Of course, he is, he wants to fuck her just like Mia. Then she told me that they were going to have another party on Saturday. She said Mia and Mike would apologize to me and that it was all a mistake. And that her mother thought I agreed to do this. I gave Kendal a hug and kissed her goodbye.

You need another drink, Dave?

A coke this time, I'm not much of a drinker.

That's probably why Mia's turning you into her little bitch.

Fuck you, Charlie!!

I'm just playing with yuh Dave. Here's your Coke. Now go on with your story.

Hearing that there would be another party, I had an idea. I remembered seeing them drinking and smoking pot out by the pool the other day. So, I went to an electronics store and purchased a surveillance system that I could install around the house and the backyard. If nothing else, I could have them all arrested for supplying minors with alcohol and drugs. Maybe if I were lucky, they'd all get locked up for a day or two. Just a little satisfaction of knowing I fucked up their day. Well, it ended up better than I could have ever imagined.

I had the clerk at the store set it up for me so that the feed would go directly to my computer. I could watch and tape everything. I really didn't care about Mia anymore, but I still wanted to keep an eye on Kendal.

Throughout the day I was getting calls and texts from Mia wanting to know where I was and when I was coming home. She even apologized to me for the way they were treating me. I ignored her calls and texts. I may still love her, but she went too far.

The next morning, I returned to the house when no one was home and installed the surveillance system hiding cameras throughout the house and backyard. Then I went back to the motel and check the computer to see if it was working. I guess Mia and Kendal hadn't seen each other for a few days because I heard her Kendal and Mia talking that evening. Kendal told Mia that I had left, and I wasn't coming home. Mia started crying and told Kendal that this was what I had agreed too.

I'm think Mia's plan was to cuckhold me and now she was pissed that I wasn't going along with it. Anyway, Kendal went off on Mia. She told her mom that she went too far and humiliated me. Then Mia says "But he agreed to it baby. This was what he wanted. He wanted me to be happy."

Kendal stood up for me and told her mother "No mom, he didn't agree to be a cuckhold for you Mike and Dan to humiliate. Mom, was that your plan all along? Were you planning on having sex with Mike and just needed dad to agree to it? Were you always planning for Dad to become your cuckhold? Were you planning on humiliating dad for your own enjoyment? Mom, please tell me that wasn't your plan all along."

Mia just ran off to her room crying. I don't know if that was Mia's plan or if it was Mike's. It doesn't matter anymore. The rest of the video was uneventful. But the next day I learned a lot.

Mike stopped by in the morning for a quickie, I guess. Mia and Mike were talking about the party on Saturday and what to expect. It would be Mike and Dan and each of their respective sons Damon and Antoine. They were the two that were there the last time out by the pool. They were bringing a few more girls too. And photographers to taking pictures and videos. Then Mike gave Mia a contract for Kendal to sign. Mia dropped right to her knees to thank Mike for the contract.

So, you mean Mia dropped to her knees.

Yes Charlie, Mia pulled out Mike's his BBC.

When Mia went to take a shower, I heard Mike on the phone talking to Dan. They had more planned for Saturday then chips and dip. I only heard Mike's side of the conversation, but I did hear Mike say cocaine and ecstasy and video and orgy. It was music to my ears.

Look at you Dave a regular Magnum PI. Is that when you brought in Detective Lean in on it?

Yes. I've known Dale for years. So, I gave him a call and we met here for a few drinks, and I told him the whole story. He said I was a fuckin idiot for going along with Mia's stupid idea. He took my computer and told me I would have to meet with the DA and sign some paperwork. Basically, saying it's ok for the police to use the surveillance tapes and that I owned the house, stuff like that. They wanted to make sure no lawyers could say anything they did was illegal. I bought the house with Mia, so I met the DA and did what needed to be done.

Dale said he was sorry how things turned out. I ended up staying at his house with his wife Mary. Do you know Mary?

I do, she's funny. Whenever Dale drinks to much I call Mary to let her know that I took Dale's keys away. She tells me to just throw him in a cap and she'll take care of him. She stops in when she comes back for his car and we talk.

Well, she couldn't believe what Mia was doing to me. And I showed her one of the texts from Mia.

"Dave, I wish you would come back home and talk to me. You need to stop being so jealous. I'm sure we can work this out. Mike said that he would share me with you and he promise not to make fun of you anymore."

For real! She sees no problem with what she's doing.

Nope, she's hooked on the BBC, I guess. The rest of the week I just tried to keep busy. I talked to Kendal every day. She signed the contract even though I told her not too. Mia and Mike were pressuring her to sign. But signing the contract turned out to be a good thing in the end. But I'll get to that.

Whenever I talk to Kendal, she tells her mom was getting pissed that I won't respond to her calls and texts. I knew she was still having sex with Mike, but I asked Kendal anyway. She said she was. I told her that if Mia was still having sex Mike I wasn't coming back. I guess Kendal told Mia what I said. Next thing you know, I get a text from Mia saying "This is what we agreed to. We were going to experiment. Why can't I just let me have my fun!!" So, I gave in and responded back. I asked her when will it end? Did you plan on continuing to fuck Mike after we get married? I never got a response back.

So, now it's Saturday and I'm in the van with Dale watching the video feed. We're watching what's going on inside and outside the house. It's like boxes and you have to click into each square to see the different rooms. The girls are topless out by the pool and drinking, just what you would expect. Kendal's friend Emily was there too, and topless right along with Mia. At least Kendal still had her top on.

We saw a couple of the girls fucking Damon and Antoine in the pool and the camera guys was filming it.

And then Dan showed up. As soon as Dale saw Dan, he knew who he was. He's a known drug supplier that they can never get enough evidence on to convict. He walked out to the bar by the pool and laid out a few lines and they all started snorting coke. We saw Kendal stumble away and go in the house. She was the only one still wearing a bikini at this point.

We clicked around the boxes to see what was going on in other rooms. By this time Dale had plenty of evidence. So, we just took one more look around the rooms. Mia walking into the den and just passed out naked on the couch. The rest of the girls were out by the pool with Damon and Antoine and the photographers. Then we saw Mike and Dan heading toward Kendal's bedroom. We didn't have a video in Kendal's room, but we knew what was going to happen next. So, Dale sent the police in.

Dale and two officers went right to Kendal's room. Dale told me Kendal was on the bed naked as Mike and Dan jumped up, naked as well, with hands over their heads. Dale also told me Mike and Dan resisted had arrest. I watched Mike and Dan get dragged out of the house in cuffs and they looked like they got the shit kicked out of them, black eyes missing teeth, busted up ribs. They were a mess. I never questioned Dale on what had actually happened; I just thanked him and told Dale I was taking him and Mary out for dinner.

Dale let me go in the house and check on Kendal with the EMT guys. She was out of it. The EMT guys said Kendal appeared to have been drugged.

I went to the hospital with Kendal. All the girls went to the hospital too. It looked like they were all drugged or high or both. Mia, Mike, Dan, Damon and Antoine went to jail.

I stayed with Kendal overnight at the hospital to make sure she was OK. When Kendal was released, I took her to Dale and Mary's house. Our house was still a crime scene.

Mia was charged with various drug felonies and bail was denied. Mia's Lawyer was trying to work a deal with the DA. It took a few days, but Dale was able to get me in to see Mia. I wanted to let her know that Kendal was ok and that I would take care of her.

Mia started complaining that she was arrested for no reason. It was just a party and now they want her to testify against Mike and Dan or she could be in prison for at least 5-years. And how did Dale know what was going on at the house. That's when she put 2 and 2 together and started screaming "you did this to me you bastard"!!! I said yes Mia I told Dale and the DA. I'm no cuckhold wimp like you and your friends thought I was. I installed a surveillance system throughout the house and yard. I let Dale know what Mike and Dan had planned for Saturday. It was all on tape. The DA and the police saw and heard everything. Yes, even you with Mike and Dan.

I told her everyone was high, there were all kinds of drugs at the house, and did you know that Mike and Dan tried to rape Kendal. Mia was stunned; she had no idea what they had done. I told her that was because you were high as a kite and passed out on the couch. She asked if Kendal was ok and then all of the sudden turned back into the caring Mia I had remembered and fell in love with.

She said "I guess you got revenge on all of us she said. Are you happy now." And then she jokingly said, "I guess we're not getting married are we?"

Mia cried as she was taken back to her cell.