I am trying to write in a little different style in this story. Please give me your criticisms so that I can try to become a better writer. If all you have is racist comments, don't bother.
After cheerleader practice late that afternoon, Angela realized that she had left her driver's license in the girl's locker room. She walked the deserted hallways humming to herself until she got to the locker room door. The hallways were dimly lit since it was after school hours. The locker room was also dimly lit.
The door opened noiselessly and Angela walked across the carpeted floor toward her locker. Then, she heard voices speaking softly. Angela stifled her urge to say something and crept toward the voices. As she looked around a row of lockers, what she saw surprised her. She was just barely able to suppress a gasp of surprise.
Sitting on a bench, naked, was Ms. Williams, the girl's gym teacher. Ms. Williams was reputed to be the meanest teacher in the district, much less the school. But what really surprised her was that Tommy Jones, one of the black basketball players, was standing naked in front of Ms. Williams.
Angela could see that his black penis was standing out erect from his body and that Ms. Williams was holding it. Ms. Williams was cooing and saying things like, "Does Tommy like Mommy playing with his cock? Does Tommy want Mommy to put his nice big boy's cock in her mouth?"
She was looking up at Tommy's face while she started to lick his cock. When she took it into her mouth, Tommy hissed his pleasure. He thrust his hips forward in an attempt to get her to swallow more of his cock. But, Ms. Williams was taking it slow and easy. She was licking it now like it was an ice cream cone. That gave Angela a chance to examine Tommy's rock hard cock.
She had seen hard cocks before. One of her friends had had a sleepover and had shown some porn videos. One of the male characters had had a particularly large cock, as they called it in the movie. The girls had all looked on in shock as the monster cock had penetrated a rather small girl's pussy. After a few minutes, they could see that the huge red cock was coated with girl juice.
At this time, all of the girls were virgins. They had made a pact in Junior High to remain virgins. One of the high school girls had gotten pregnant and the scandal convinced the younger girls to remain virgins. If not virgins, then to make sure they didn't get pregnant.
Peeking at Tommy, Angela could see that while his cock wasn't as large as the guy in the video, it was still big. Angela's first thought was that taking a man's penis in her mouth was nasty. Then, as she watched Tommy's reactions and Ms. Williams's actions, her thoughts slowly started changing. It looked like fun and Ms. Williams looked as though she was particularly enjoying it.
Angela wished she could get closer so that she could examine Tommy's cock. From where she was watching though, she could see that it was almost beautiful. Apparently, Ms. Williams thought so too for in one sudden gulp, she took all of it into her mouth. Tommy hissed his pleasure again and he stroked Ms. Williams's head while she was sucking his cock.
Angela could see Ms. Williams reach under Tommy's cock and play with his balls. He was moaning and swaying. He spread his legs, both to give Ms. Williams access to his balls and to better balance himself. Tommy was running his hands through Ms. Williams gray flecked hair all the while moaning his pleasure.
Ms. Williams asked Tommy if he wanted to come. He was shaking as his cum approached. Ms. Williams took her mouth away and held her face up to his rampaging cock.
Suddenly, Angela saw something she had never seen in real life. She saw a man's erect penis shoot its sperm. Tommy's hard, thick black penis shot a stream of white liquid all over Ms. Williams face. Streams of white sperm were hitting Ms. Williams on her face and she was trying to lick it up! Even as Angela thought that that was the nastiest thing she had ever seen, a small part of her mind was thinking how erotic that was. A blast of Tommy's cum hit Ms. Williams in her left eye. Another blast hit her directly in her mouth!
As Tommy's cock dribbled out its last drop of sperm onto Ms. Williams's tongue, he took his finger and ran it over Ms. Williams face wiping his cum. He held the finger in front of Ms. Williams so she could lick the cum from it. Ms. Williams licked Tommy's finger as though she was licking his cock. Then she drew Tommy to the floor and made him lay on his back.