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Becka's breath was temporarily torn from her. She gasped inwardly, and then went silent. She seemed to pause to savor her initial victory. She then began to slide up and down on the piece of my shaft she had conquered thus far. John stood and took her hands to steady her as she rode up and down my shaft. Every time she came down, another bit of my straining cock went into her. With her constantly gradual movement up and down, she managed new and larger increments of my meat. Displaying endurance I would never thought her capable of, she continued this rhythm for a good six or seven minutes. At the point where she had about six inches going into her, I felt her body begin to shake. Barely perceptible at first, it increased exponentially as she impaled herself onto my meat.
Becka then exclaimed, "I have never had anything this deep. Not my hairbrush, or John or anything I could have dreamed of." After saying this she proceeded to continue her assault. Her breathing was growing more rapid, and her shaking was reaching what seemed like a crescendo. She was still taking about six inches when I realized that she was going to come on my cock. She continued her movement up and down on me and then reached a point when she froze at the apex of an upstroke, my cockhead nearly escaping from her channel. Then she dropped back down on me, taking an additional two inches. She now had a good eight inches of jet-black cock in her and I felt something stop my progress upon her descent. I just had the time to note the obstruction deep within her when she let a compressed shriek and came for all she was worth. She then let go of John's hands and lay back on my stomach. I eased her fall as I sensed her imminent collapse.
Once she was lying all the way down across me, all of her movement ceased. I reached across her torso and held her breasts while she laid there with ten inches of meat crammed into her. Then I felt John's tongue again. For a while we both were content to lie there while John sucked her lips and ass into his mouth. He continued unrelented for several minutes. Then before I knew it I felt her cunt clamp down on me again. She proceeded to orgasm again. I was happy to lie there and feel the resulting pleasure her tiny tunnel was getting from the combination of Johns tongue and my deep penetration. John continued for some minutes and brought her to two more crashing orgasms.
I felt it was time for something different because I could tell that Becka was not going to be moving for a little bit. I warned John to watch out as I picked Becka up and laid her beside me. She was totally soaked in sweat. I didn't know how much more she could stand, but I was determined to find out. I brought her to the center of the blanket, brought her beautiful white legs back over my shoulders and laid my meat across her stomach again, scissoring back and forth. I could see where the wet spot ended on my cock, and I knew I had to try to get the rest of it up her snatch.
John watched mesmerized as I brought my nearly apple size head back to the mouth of her womanhood. It felt as if all of the blood in my body was in my dick, and it looked it, too. Not wanting to waste time, I slipped into her tight little white cunt nearly to the previous watermark. Her eyes opened up wide and the breath came out of her in a long sigh. She was still tight as hell, and I couldn't believe after what she had taken of me while on top that her pussy had closed back up, but I knew that was only temporary. I started a slow, deliberate pumping into her. Then I came up against her cervix with about two inches to go. I was not going to give in unless she asked me to stop. She did no such thing. She reached up and pulled my head down to hers wanting my mouth. This made me even harder and crazed with lust the likes of which I had never known existed.
Against what felt like the end of her tunnel I pushed. Then I pushed more. Now and again I would bring my meat back out so I could look down and see her sweet little red pussy spread out. I doubt it was made for this kind of abuse, but I knew that she would never look at another cock the same way.
I pushed more and more and over a period of twenty minutes buried myself deeper and deeper into her newly ruined twat. Her orgasms came about once every couple of minutes. She told me that I had her pussy stretched out so wide that every movement caused action on her clitoris. She didn't know the word "Clitoris" though. She referred to it as her little "bud".