I've decided to repost the story. I've done some proofreading after getting more than the usual amount of responses about my grammar. It's these criticisms and suggestions that I greatly appreciate. I'm always looking for suggestions, requests, and criticisms, e-mail me.
p.s. thank you to the person who told me to buy a dictionary and learn to spell. he then proceeded to tell me go learn how to form a "sentance".
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Maggie opened her eyes to the warm sunshine. A warmth was coming from her insides as she sleepily stretched. She felt like a new person. Last night with Tepus had taken their relationship from innocent flirtation to a new level. A level of sexual exploration she could have never imagined ever having with any man. Her smile was stretching across her angelic face when a knocking on her door made her sit up.
Allan then busted into the room....
"Is it true! Was my moor slave here in your room last night!" he bellowed, with a furious look on his face.
"Yes...." Maggie weakly said. Did he know what happened? How could he?
"How dare he? I'll have him hanged as soon as i return to my quarters!" Allan said seeing the shamed look on Maggie's face.
Maggie then realized what he was saying. Was he accusing her of an affair? Even if he was right, what right did he have to make such an accusation? She was the most beautiful woman in the land and the king's daughter no less. She was a prize for the entire country and perhaps europe.
"Listen here you smug pig! He was here trying to tell me how apologetic you were and that you felt sorry for offending me. He was trying to help you! How dare you want to hang your own slave!" she angrily screamed, pointing her finger into his chest.
"He did?" Allan asked, curious as to why Tepus would do such a thing for him. He then realized the situation and wanted to take advantage of it. Feeling aroused seeing Maggie in her night clothes...."Well of course. I'm terribly sorry Maggie. He was right, I have been wrought with grief."
Maggie saw right through him and saw him for what a pig he truly was. He smiled at her, content with his new position and saw him leering at her chest.
"Allan, I wish not to see you right now. Perhaps you should leave." she told him while turning away.
He walked up behind her and pulled her close. She felt his little penis through his pants and she angrily shoved him away. "Leave now! Lest i call the guards." as she pointed to the door. Like a dog with his tail between his legs, Allan made his way down the stairs and out of the castle. Maggie went to wash herself from last nights activities. Sweat and semen had made her feel a bit uncleanly, or perhaps it was the Allan's appearance that gave her that feeling.
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Maggie began to call for her maid and wanted to draw herself a bath. Then the brook popped into her head. Perhaps she would see Tepus. Perhaps she could.....well other things began to pop into her head. It was amazing how such a sexually timid woman had been transformed recently. No less without even having sexual relations with a man. At least not the traditional kind.
Maggie dressed in a thick dress and wrapped her head in some cloths to conceal herself. She snuck herself out of the castle and towards the woods, making her way to the brook.
As she began to highstep through the tall grass in her thick concealing garb something knocked the princess down. She looked up as two men on horseback jumped off their horse and grabbed her by the arm.
"What have we got here, John?" the taller of the two said, through gritted yellow teeth.
"Seems a leper, and a trespasser. This here area be forbidden leperous bitch." he said leering close but wary of what he thought was a leper.
"Damn shame, seems she got quite a set on her. If they fall off i might have to mount them on my wall." he said as he grabbed and squeezed her breast. They both laughed when suddenly their horse ran off startled. There was a rustling in the grass. They looked as another rock landed in the grass. The distraction worked as a man flew from nowhere. A fist landed on the taller one's chin sending him flailing to the ground. John, was tackled to the ground and was met with some fists to his own face.
Maggie tried to get up but fell back down as an immense pain shot through her ankle. Maggie then looked as she brushed her hair and cloths from her face and saw that it was Tepus fighting these two men.
The taller one returned to his feet and jumped on Tepus' back. They wrestled back and forth as John tried to regain his bearings, his nose bloody and tooth missing. Maggie saw that the horse was nearby and whistled to it. Her years of horse riding made her quite the animal person. The horse came and she struggled to get on top of it. As she did she saw that Tepus had started to beat on the taller man however, John had gotten to his feet and pulled out a dagger. Maggie rushed the horse to Tepus and screamed, "Tepus c'mon!"
Maggie slowed the horse a bit and Tepus jumped onto it's backside as John lunged at Tepus' back with the knife. Missing Tepus he lunged into his tall friends shoulder. John watched his friend scream in pain as Tepus clutched the horses backside, feet dragging along the ground. He pulled himself atop the horse and grabbed around the waist of this mystery rider. "Thank you." he told her. "No thank you, I owe you much more."
Tepus was curious as to who this was. Their heavy breathing made it no simpler to recognize her voice. "May I ask how you knew my name?" Tepus asked. Maggie pulled her hood down and looked back at him. "Well that was unexpected. Quickly if you go towards the hills I know a spot we can rest." he informed her.
The hills went past the brook, which Maggie was looking forward too. However, the person she was looking for had made it. Even though their meeting was a bit impromptu.
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Tepus pointed out the destination to Maggie. There was an opening in the large face of the woods. It was small and it seemed somekind of connection allowed her to see what he spoke of. He didn't have to point it out to her, only mention it. The horse thundered in it's direction before entering the wooded area. The area seemed a bit familiar to Maggie,
Tepus spoke to her ear softly, "I've been wanting to show you this for a long time, there is a trail i roughly made, follow it."
Again their unspoken bond seemed to guide Maggie upon the trail. The trail led to the top of a hill, which gave a sparkling view of a brook. It was their brook.
"Oh my i've never seen this view!" Maggie exclaimed, watching the sun reflect of the angles of the water.
"Yes it is beautiful isn't it?" Tepus said leaning close, his strong chest against her back.
They both heard a splashing and looked around. It was Anne and Eleanor. Splashing around naked. Their giggles could be heard but they're conversation not.....
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"Who needs that moor? Black bastard!" Anne said bringing back her long hair with her two arms, causing her large breats to bounce as she eyed up the lean glistening frame of Eleanor.
Eleanor's small perky breasts and nipples were excited as she embraced Anne's soft body. Their lips meeting in a passionate kiss as their hands roamed each other's hips and sides.