Thought I would try something different. Telling a story through dialogue without narrative. Will it appeal to readers? Let's find out.
CINDY
"How did it go last night, Joan? Did you have a good time at the theater?"
JOAN
"The theater was fine. The dinner afterwards was good. Then we went to his apartment for drinks."
CINDY
"Did he try something?"
JOAN
"He didn't try. He succeeded."
CINDY
"In doing what?"
JOAN
"In fucking my brains out."
CINDY
"You mean he raped you?"
JOAN
"Well, not exactly."
CINDY
"Did he or didn't he?"
JOAN
"Well, I kind of tried to stop him. I couldn't and after a while it didn't seem to matter. I guess you could call it forced seduction."
CINDY
"That's rape. There is no other word for it."
JOAN
"Maybe. But, God it was good."
CINDY
"Oh! Joan, What happened?"
JOAN
"Well, as soon as we got into his apartment he kicked the door closed and grabbed me. I tried to struggle but he's as strong as an ox. He just slung me over his shoulder and headed for the bedroom. After he dropped me on the bed, and before I had even finished bouncing, he had my legs up in the air and my panties were whipped off. Christ, I've never been depantied so fast in my life."
CINDY
"Then what?"
JOAN
"I don't know, I mean, it happened so fast. There I was, flat on my back on this guy's bed with my dress rolled up around my waist, my panties on the floor and him kneeling between my legs."
CINDY
"Didn't you scream?"
JOAN
"Scream? No... Well, I was taken so much by surprise, I guess I made some kind of protest, but it came out pretty weak. In any case he ignored it. He just slid a finger into me and started wiggling it around. Boy, he sure knew where to wiggle it. It wasn't long before he had me bucking like a mule. At some stage he took his finger out and got down on me with his mouth. Jesus, that guy has a talented tongue. Within a couple of minutes he brought me off. It was the biggest and longest orgasm I've ever had. I screamed so hard I'm surprised the neighbors didn't call the cops."
CINDY
"Didn't he stick his thing in you?"
JOAN
"You better believe it. After he sucked me off, while I was lying there in a dreamy kind of trance, he undressed. I tell you, he had a great body. Those hard rippling muscles were a pleasure to watch."
CINDY
"Did he have a big penis?"
JOAN
"You've never seen one like it. He's hung like a bull. That cock must be all of ten inches long and his balls look like they weigh a pound each. Anyway, he started working me over in earnest. He's so damn strong I felt like a little girl. He tossed me around this way and that until I didn't know which way was up. First he hung my legs over his shoulders, slipped those huge hands under my ass and pulled me on to that throbbing love muscle. Shit, I thought it was going to split me apart. That man sure knows how to fuck. He drove me crazy. I lost count of my orgasms. And he did it in every position imaginable. By the time he finally shot his load into me I was totally exhausted."
CINDY
"Whatever you say, he raped you and you should report it to the police."
JOAN
"Are you nuts? It was the best fuck I've ever had and I want more of the same."
CINDY
"You mean you are going to see him again?"
JOAN
"You better believe it. He'll be here in a few minutes. He's bringing Chinese food with him for dinner. You better stay in your room. If he sees you he might want you for dessert. That guy has a hell of a sexual appetite. I've no doubt he could manage both of us with no trouble at all. Hey I don't mind sharing him with you if you like."
CINDY
"Yuck! That's gross, Joan. But you really mean it don't you? Have you ever done anything like that before?"
JOAN
"Share a man with another girl? No I haven't. I was once shared by a couple of guys though. That was a fabulous experience. It's a luxuriously decadent sensation to have two guys make love to you at the same time."
CINDY
"God you're awful. How could you do that?"
JOAN
"You know, Cindy, sometimes you make me sick with your holier than thou attitude. Why don't you relax a little, enjoy life. When were you last fucked?"
CINDY
"I wish you wouldn't use that language. Derek was my first lover and I haven't made love since I broke up with him last year. I don't intend to until I meet another man with whom I can fall in love and share a genuine commitment."
JOAN
"Genuine commitment? Jesus! Derek was a wimp. I'll bet you never even had an orgasm with him."
CINDY
"That sort of thing isn't as important as you think. Love and mutual respect are what matters."
JOAN
"How the hell would you know whether an orgasm is important if you've never had one. Wake up girl, there's plenty of time for love and commitment. In the meantime, find yourself a big hairy man who knows how to fuck and let yourself go. Hey there's the door bell. I'll get it. It must be Brad."
JOAN
"Hi Brad. Who's that with you."
BRAD
"Meet Roger. You said you had a room mate, so we thought we could make a foursome for dinner. We have enough food. But don't worry. If it isn't good, Roger will leave."