Separated by some 3,000 miles, I wrote several stories for my girlfriend, hoping to keep us in touch and sexually connected. This and other stories are fiction based on her fantasies and written with her as the first person. I tried using details to evoke visions of what the characters would see, hear, feel, smell and taste—something I believe is missing from most Literotica stories. Although catered to her intimate fantasies, I am sharing them with fellow readers hoping you will also enjoy them.
As a writer, I am always looking to improve my craft and would appreciate feedback, especially from women. I'd like to know what you, the reader, found particularly arousing and what could be improved upon.
Regards
My phone beeped and I saw a text popup from my Baby. "Are you close."
"About 15 mins." I replied back.
"I have a surprise for you. Actually, two." He texted.
"Hmmm. What are they?" I texted back.
"Surprises."
When I finally arrived at the hotel, I found his room number and knocked. The door opened slowly. My Baby's head poked about from behind, beaming a wide smile. He held the door open, waiting for me to walk in. I thought he would have come forward to meet me over the threshold, but as a stepped inside, I saw why. My Baby was standing there naked. Before I knew it, he grabbed me around my waist, pulling me close, as I dropped my bags as the door closed behind us. He locked his mouth on mine, delivering a long, passionate kiss. I could smell his cologne as I drew in a breath against his arms that held me tight. I closed my eyes and returned the kiss.
God I miss you so much
, I thought to myself. I wrapped my arms around him, feeling the skin of his back. Before I knew it, his arms dropped below my hips, then pulled me up off the floor. My arms and legs wrapped around him as he carried me and together we fell on to the bed, still locked together in a tight embrace. He lay on top of me kissing me deep before running his mouth and tongue down my neck. His hands ran up to the top of my blouse, then pulled it down, along with my bra as my breasts popped out. His mouth continued its way down my chest to my left breast where it opened to suck in nearly half of my boob so hard it almost felt like he was going to tear it off! The tip of his tongue swiped back and forth across my nipple as his lips closed around my breast, finally locking on my nipple as he pulled away his mouth, stretching it out as it grew hard. His other hand reached over to caress my other breast, gently fondling my other nipple. I drew in a deep breath as this taking me by surprise began to arouse me and I couldn't wait to have him, nor he couldn't wait to have me.
I felt a yank and looked up to see that my pants and panties were bunched in his hands and tossed aside. He slid up my naked body, his warm skin against mine until his face reached mine, whereupon he delivered another deep kiss. I could feel his cock poking into my right thigh and opened it slightly to let it fall into place. He moved up further until it was pressing against my lips and thrust. I reached down to move his cock into my opening and with another thrust, his head was inside me. He wrapped his arms around me and pulled him tight against me as he thrust again, entering further. With two more thrusts, he was all the way in and lay against me, his head above mine and kissed me. I could feel his cock slid in and out as I spread my legs further apart to let him in. I returned the kiss, placing my tongue deep inside his mouth as we both struggled to breathe. His pace increased; each thrust pushed my head back and slightly up the bead. Reaching up I wrapped my arms around him, then my legs around his waist and held him tight as he rode me.
The head of his cock went up and down like a piston and I could feel my pussy getting wet and sensitive. His pace continued to increase and I could feel pressure building inside me as I began to tighten around his bulging cock.
"Ohhh. That feels good," he said. "I want you so much. I want to fuck your pussy! Run my dick in and out until we cum!"
His talking dirty to me and thrusting brought me to the brink of climaxing and I rolled my head back and opened my mouth as each thrust sent my head bobbing.
I opened my eyes to look at his just before he close them. I watched squint, grimace and as in great pain, then cry out. But nothing could further from the truth as I felt his cock swell inside me then everything inside grew slippery as he spewed out his load of cum. Watching him cum made me excited, to the point that I too came, then watched his face return to normal and then form a satisfied smile. He lay on me his next to me, cheek to cheek as he breathed heavily in my ear.
I heard clapping, then turned my head to see a man and woman sitting on the couch across the room. Scared half out of my wits, I poked and tried to bring to his attention the couple sitting across the room from us. Baby rose up and grinned from ear to ear. I was pissed and felt my privacy violated. After all, they just watched us having sex.
The woman got up from the couch and walked forward continuing to clap. As she left the shadows and came closer into the light, I could better make her out. She was medium height. Her long red hair flowed down her back and he skin was very light, contrasting her dark red lipstick. She wore a silk blouse and black skirt and looked professional.
"Very good. I enjoyed watching your lovemaking," she said with a thick French accent as she looked at me.
Baby rolled off me, leaving me naked and exposed. I felt like grabbing a pillow to cover up.
She dropped to her knees looked at me and said, "Have you ever made love to a woman?"
Shyly, I shook my head back and forth.
Her hands rose up and her shiny crimson red nails went over her top button and popped it open. I followed her hands down as her blouse opened up, revealing the top of her large breasts. She pulled her blouse open, revealing the cleavage of her C or even D cup breasts.
"Do you like my breasts?"
I stood there dumbfounded, not knowing what to say or do. She smiled back and continued to undo her blouse, then slid her arms out the sleeves and tossed off her top. A few freckles above her breasts were the only markings on her otherwise perfect skin. I could see how the color of her skin lightened near her bra, so light that it nearly matched its white lace. My eyes were fixed on her and her hands, until I watched them disappeared behind her back, her bra loosen and fall way. She straightened her back and looked at me.
"There, now you can better she them. Do you like my breasts?" she inquired again.
My eyes were now glued on the porcelain pair of flawless globes, each with a pink nipple that seemed to point directly at me.
"Would you like to feel them?" she asked in her heavy accent. "Have you ever felt another woman's breasts before?"
