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Disclaimer: All members of this work of fiction are over the age of 18.
Saturday mornings must have something special in them, they seem so much better than all the rest, and this fine Saturday morning was no different. It was six in the morning and I was just finishing my last minute packing for the camping trip. My best friend from high school, Jake Ryan, had invited me on a camping trip with his family. We were both heading to different colleges; I decided to take the opportunity as one last adventure for some time to come. Going on the trip were Jake's mom and dad, his sisters Sara and Piper, his girlfriend Stacey, Jake and myself.
I heard when their minivan pulled up and said my goodbyes to my mom and dad and headed outside. I greeted Jake in my driveway and tossed him my bag, which he threw in the back, then motioned me in the van. Jake's mom was shotgun; Jake and Stacy were in the middle row leaving the sisters and me in the last row. I had known Jake and his family ever since we were kids so Sara and Piper, who were a couple years older at 22 and 24, were almost like sisters and they treated me as such. They both clung to their window seats knowing it would be a precious commodity for the long drive ahead forcing me in the middle.
"So Lewis, ready for the outdoors?" questioned Jake's dad.
"You bet," was my reply, trying to sound as enthusiastic as I could, eliciting slight chuckles from Piper and Sara.
About a half hour into the drive to the campgrounds, I found myself staring at the headrest in front of me. Jake and Stacy had their earphones on watching some movie on their portable DVD player, and Sara and Piper had both fell asleep. Another five minutes passed and I noticed Sara, who was to my left, shifting in an effort to find a comfortable position. Then, in her sleepy haze, Sara leaned over to me, resting her head on my shoulder, finally settling down. I tried not to move for fear of waking her. I looked down at her and was surprised to see the view on offer. Down past Sara's long brunette hair, I could see into her plaid shirt, of which, the first two buttons were unbuttoned. As I gazed guiltily, I could see the cups of the black lace bra holding her petite breasts, pushing them together. It was a remarkable sight and I was taking full advantage. My eyes were now fixated on Sara's chest and it was a shock to me when a couple minutes later, I felt Piper tap me on the shoulder. It was almost as if I had forgotten she was there. I embarrassingly turned to her; she just looked at me with a coy grin and silently mouthed the words,
"Naughty boy," after which, she leaned her head back and went to sleep.
I did not know what to make of it, and for fear of being caught again, I slipped on my earphones, turned on my ipod, and tried to go to sleep.
"Hey lovebirds, wake up, we're here."
I was awoken by Jake's comments to which, at first, I was confused by but then I realized my head resting in the crook of Sara's neck, staring straight down at her chest. Sara and I had basically entangled ourselves while we slept. She too was just waking up and looked down to me with a shy smile,
"Wow Lewis, you make for a nice pillow, thanks."
"Anytime," I awkwardly replied as we made our way out of the van.
After we picked out a decent campsite, we set up the tents. There were three tents, one for Jake's parents, one for the girls, and one for Jake and me. The tents were up in no time at all so Jake and I decided to try our hands at some fishing. We made our way out to the middle of the lake with a rowboat and cast our lines. After a few small catches, I turn my view to our campsite and saw that the girls had put on bathing suits and were just lying out in the sun. We were too far out for me to see anything but that did not stop me from trying. It was weird though, every couple of glances I could swear that I could make out Piper staring right back at me, at which point I would avert my eyes.
Before too soon, we noticed it was starting to get dark and decided to head in. Jake looked to me inquisitively before speaking.
"Hey man, I need to ask you something before we head in."
"Sure thing, shoot"
"Well, it's this tent thing, Stacy and I were talking and I convinced her to sneak into our tent around one in the morning, so I hate to put you in this position but could you sleep outside when she comes over?"
"Dude, I'll freeze out there."
"Come on, you have your sleeping bag, just take one for the team, you know I'd do it for you."
"Ok ok, but you owe me Jake, big time."
"Cool, thanks man, I really appreciate it," he said with a smile as we began to paddle in.
When we got back, everyone was around the fire just chatting.
"So where's dinner?" Jake's mom teased.
"Threw it back, they were too small," Jake replied.
As evening turned into night, the temperature plummeted and the notion of sleeping outside was just dawning on me, it was going to be a long night I figured. After getting washed up and grabbing something to eat, we all sat around the campfire just talking, telling stories and remembering old times. Before long we were saying out goodnights and heading to our tents, this was around 11pm. I managed to get a couple hours of sleep in before Jake, shaking my shoulder, awaked me.
"Hey, Lew, Stac is here," he whispered.
I looked up and saw Stacy waiting at the opening of our tent.
"Hey Stacy," I managed to say in my sleepy state.
"Hi Lew, thanks so much," she replied as I gathered my sleeping bag and made my way out.
"Have fun," I quipped and walked passed her as she blushed at the comment.
As I exited the tent, the chilly mountain air greeted me and a shiver ran though my body. I lay my sleeping bag down next to the fire and started to get in. Before I tucked into my bag, I heard the zip from one of the tents opening. I did not know which tent t was and just prayed it wasn't Jake's parents. I looked to the tent and saw Piper stick her head out and cast her gaze my way.
"Hey, what's going on?" she whispered.
"Um, I guess Stacy and Jake wanted some alone time," came my reply.
"Ahh, I see, sucks for you," she chuckled.
"I guess."
