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One day Raven was innocently walking down a posh street in Finchley, when all of a sudden, something hit her. She fell, hitting her head on the floor as she landed . When she woke up she was in a room full of rock posters, chains and guys stuff. There were three guys in the room. Two of them were leaning over her; the other was in the corner crying. Raven immediately recognised them. They were her favourite band Busted . She tried to sit up. Her head throbbed with pain and so did her wrist.
"No. Lie down. Just for now," James said .
"You really banged your head," Charlie said . Raven lay back down.
"What's wrong with Mattie?" Raven asked .
"He was the one who hit you, but I don't know why it's upset him," James whispered .
"Yeah, he's really beating himself up about it," Charlie said quietly, "You better get some sleep babe, we'll wake you when we're gonna eat,"
"Thanks Chase and you James. I'll talk to Mattie later," Raven said sleepily. She fell asleep.
She awoke with James gently shaking her.
"How's your head? Oh, and your wrist?" he asked .
"My head's fine," Raven said, "I just need some aspirin or something. My wrist still hurts but I'll live," Raven said with a smile. "Thank you so much for taking me in," Raven said as she gently took hold of James's shirt and pulled him closer. She kissed his lips gently as she curled her left leg around his waist. She kissed him harder. He slipped one had around her waist and the other found its way to her thigh at his waist. Raven moved her spare hand to the back of James's head . Raven's tongue snaked into James's mouth and started a battle with his own. She reached down and gently squeezed James's cock. James moaned softly into Raven's mouth. She gently ran her fingers through his hair then stepped back.
"We better get down for something to eat. They'll be wondering where we are," Raven said as she winked at James. They walked downstairs to where the others were. As soon as Mattie saw Raven he got up and ran to the back yard .
"Sorry about him," Charlie apologised .
"It's ok," Raven said, "I'll talk to him later. After all he is sleeping in the same room as me. I'll talk to him when we all go to bed,"
"Good point," James said disappointedly. James wished Raven was in his room. They sat down for something to eat and talked about anything that came to mind . After, Raven helped the guys clear away, then she went and sat in the lounge with James. Charlie went to the back yard to talk to Mattie.
"So James What type of movie's do you like?" Raven asked him.
"Mainly horror even though they scare the shit out of me. I usually end up cowering behind Mattie or Charlie," he said rather sheepishly.
"Well you can cower behind me if you want. I wouldn't mind at all," Raven said with a grin. She leaned over and kissed him hard .
Mattie was in the back yard sobbing when Charlie came up behind him.
"Don't tell me you're still upset over what you did?" Charlie asked
"Well how would you feel if you were me and you hit someone as beautiful and as amazing as Raven and knocked her unconscious!?" Mattie shouted back.
"Well I suppose I'd feel quite bad, probably terrible." Charlie replied .
"It's even worse when you're in love with the person you've hit," Mattie mumbled .
"What, sorry I didnât hear what you said," Charlie asked .
"Nothing,"
"You said something. What did you say?"
"I said it's even worse when you're in love with the person you've hit," Mattie said louder.
"T rue true. But you gotta talk to her about it or wait until tonight coz thatâs when she said she was gonna talk to you," Charlie said .
"She's mad at me for hitting her isn't she?" Mattie said sadly.
"No. She isn't. She loves you and I'm not just saying that to make you feel better. She really does like you a lot. She was really concerned when she saw you were upset." Said Charlie disappointed that Raven didnât love him instead . "Talk to her tonight, but come in and watch a movie with us before you go to bed . We don't want you getting ill from staying out here all evening." Charlie said with a grin, "Come on up you get." Charlie said as he pulled Mattie to his feet and kissed him.
They both walked inside and sat down. Charlie sat in between Raven's legs against the couch and Mattie sat next to Raven on the couch with James on the other side.
The movie was 10 minutes in when Raven turned to Mattie and whispered,
"I'm not mad at you, I'm just glad you're ok and that you didn't fall as bad as I did,"
Mattie smiled and leaned his head on Raven's shoulder, Raven placed her left hand on Mattie's thigh. She did the same for James and she crossed her ankles over Charlie's chest which brought a smile to his face. Throughout the film Raven continued to move her hand further and further up Mattie's thigh until it reached the top, then she uncrossed her ankles from Charlie's chest and swung them over his head and placed them over Mattie's lap. She then wrapped her left arm around Mattie's waist and she put her right arm over his left shoulder. Slowly as the film went on she ran her fingers down his chest until they reached his jeans. The room was very dark, the only light was from the TV and that wasn't much. You could hardly see your own hand in front of your face if you looked . Raven undid the top button of Mattie's jeans and undid the zip.
Raven kissed Mattie gently on the cheek as she reached into his boxers and took hold of his cock. Mattie was already hard so Raven decided she didnât have to play games with him. She slowly moved her hand up and down as she kissed his lips gently at first then harder. He responded by kissing her back and wrapping his arms around her waist. At this point Charlie had fallen asleep and James was in the kitchen getting them all drinks. Mattie emitted a low groan as Raven intensified the pleasure he received . Raven kissed Mattie passionately as she moved her hand faster. Mattie groaned loudly enough to wake the whole street as he came hard . Just before he came Raven had leaned forward ready to swallow as much cum as she could handle. Just as Mattie came James walked in with the drinks, it was still dark so Raven and Mattie had time to recompose themselves. Raven quickly removed her hand from Mattie's jeans while he zipped them back up again. James sat down and gave them their drinks.
"Did you hear something earlier? It sounded as if the neighbours next door are having sex again," said James. Raven and Mattie just grinned at James.
"Yeah I think it was, not sure though," said Mattie. They carried on watching the movie with Raven occasionally mucking around with them.
When the movie finished Charlie was still asleep and the others were really tired, so they decided to go to bed . Mattie and James went up to get ready for bed while Raven woke up Charlie.
"Good night gorgeous," James said as he kissed Raven good night.
"Night, night sexy, don't let the vampire's bite," said Mattie as he kissed Raven's neck gently before going upstairs.
"Night, night you two, sleep well," Raven said, "I'm gonna try and wake up this lump," she said as she pointed at Charlie. They both laughed and walked upstairs. Raven walked over to Charlie and kneeled down. She leaned forward and kissed him softly on the lips. He awoke instantly and grabbed her and pulled her down on top of him.
"Now your mine," he said with a growl. Raven giggled and kissed him.
"So what were you two smiling about when I mentioned the neighbours?" James asked .
"Oh. Nothing, we just thought it was funny coz we heard the sound as well. It was louder than usual wasn't it?" replied Mattie.
"Yeah. It sounded as if it came from the lounge it was so loud ." said James. "Well I'm off to bed; you behave yourself with Raven in your room. I know you almost too well."
James walked out and Mattie went into his room. James wondered if Raven hadn't actually fallen asleep herself. She'd been quite a while downstairs. He decided to go check it out. He walked across the landing and down the stairs only to find Charlie's shirt at the bottom.
"Charlie's a lucky guy," James whispered to himself as he walked further into the lounge. He heard someone moan so he decided to check it out. He walked to the end of the lounge and as it was still dark he couldn't be seen. He sat in a large chair and quietly watched . Charlie had Raven pinned to the floor.
"What do you think Mattie would say if he caught us doing this?" Raven said,
"He'd kick the shit outa me," Charlie laughed, "But I dunno what James would do if he caught us."
Charlie leaned down and kissed Raven passionately. He ran his hands beneath her top across her back lifting it over her head . He threw it across the room and it landed in James's lap. James gasped just loud enough to alert Raven and Charlie. They froze.
"Someone's coming," whispered Charlie.