This is my first attempt at writing erotic fiction. Please give me helpful feedback and let me know if you like the story.
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"You're having beer with your breakfast?" Whitney asked her boyfriend Jake as she stumbled out of their tent into the morning light.
"Sorry babe, but you girls finished off all the juice yesterday and all we have left is beer and water...and I don't really like water for breakfast."
"Whatever makes you happy," she laughed and patted his head lovingly while giving him a peck on the cheek.
The six friends were enjoying their final few weeks of summer by taking a weeklong camping trip deep into the heart of the Colorado wilderness. Having completed their senior year of high school just months before, they would soon be heading off to different universities. It was the end of an era and they wanted to make their time together special. The six had grown up together and had paired off into three couples in high school. Jake and Whitney. Tim and Chrissy. Will and Hannah.
The friends had gone camping a few times during their senior year, but this was their first extended hiking trip together. The guys had worked for weeks planning their itinerary and the girls had gone shopping for groceries before they left.
It was no wonder that group had decided to do something athletic for their final hurrah. The guys were all on the baseball team and the girls had become good friends when they all ended up on the swim team their freshman year. All of them were in very good physical condition.
Jake and Whitney had started dating first during their sophomore year. She had fallen for his blonde hair and blue eyes and he had gone to more swim meets than he could count just to see her tight body in a swimsuit.
Tim and Chrissy had hooked up on a dare by Jake and Whitney. They bet them that if they went on one date together, that they would fall in love. Just friends at the time, Tim and Chrissy took them up on the dare. They both lost their virginity on the first date and had stayed together ever since. Chrissy was petite with a perfect body while Tim was tall and muscular. They were an odd match physically, but they had no trouble making mind-blowing sex together. A video of one of their "sessions" had even circulated around the senior class. Instead of being embarrassed, Tim and Chrissy were proud when someone would come up and say he'd enjoyed masturbating to their video.
Will and Hannah had been the last to hook up. They had only been dating for a few months and had only "consummated" their relationship the previous week. Hannah was average height and weight, but had full, beautifully sculpted breasts which Will had only touched that one time they had sex.
The sexual tension between the friends had been high for the whole trip. Tim and Chrissy had made out for an hour in the back of Jake's Ford Explorer on the drive to Colorado.
Whitney had given Jake a blowjob in the front seat while everyone else was sleeping. She said that she gave it to him to keep him awake and alert and it had sure done the trick. He wanted to return the favor, so he ran his hand up her skirt and between her legs and finger fucked her wet pussy. She allowed herself to whimper a little but held in the moans she was feeling for fear of waking up the other passengers. When he was done, Jake took his fingers out of her pussy and sucked them clean. He loved the taste of her sex.
Now they were in the middle of the woods, far from the main trail and even farther from any other humans. They had built a campfire the night before and sat around talking about old times. The night ended with a huge make-out and petting session before each couple had withdrawn to their own tents to make love. For a few minutes the cool night air had remained quiet as each couple had struggled to muffle the sounds of their passion. However, as the feelings intensified, the moans and groans coming from each tent were soon audible to each of the six. Instead of being embarrassing, the sounds of each couple became a turn-on for the others. Hearing their friends in a state of ecstasy was strangely arousing. The couples all came within a few minutes of each other and the area was quiet again until morning.
Now Jake was making eggs as he waited for everyone to emerge from their tents.
Whitney stood next to him, brunette hair tussled but looking sexy as ever. She was wearing only her boy-short panties (that Jake loved) and one of his t-shirts that didn't quite cover her perfect ass.
He stirred the eggs with one hand and reached up and gave her tight ass a playful squeeze with the other. The sex the night before had been fulfilling but they were obviously still very horny.
Tim and Chrissy were the next to emerge. He was wearing only a pair of cargo shorts and she had on only a pair of gym shorts. No shirt. No bra. Just a perfect set of slightly-smaller-than-normal perky tits greeted Jake and Whitney as she walked over to them.
The friends had certainly lost most of their inhibitions around each other over the last year. They had spent many nights making out in the same room. Sometimes one or two of the couples would even strip down to their underwear. But the real turning point was the day before when they had all six bathed together in the river. There was reluctance at first, but soon they were all six buck naked together and unashamed. The girls took turn washing each other while the guys tried hard to hide their erections.
Now 4 of them were sitting around a fire. Whitney with no pants on and Chrissy with nothing on top.
Will and Hannah were the last to leave their tent and they came out fully dressed, much to the disappointment of the others. Though the couples had stayed faithful to each other, each of the six was definitely attracted to each of the others. Hannah was in a pair of tight, short khaki shorts that barely covered her exquisite ass and a halter top that showed off her descent sized boobs.
"What do you guys want to do today?" asked Hannah as she and Will sat down to share a plate of eggs.
"We could go back to the river to bathe," Chrissy said with an impish grin, "I am pretty dirty."
"You are a dirty girl," Whitney chimed in and leaned over and gave Chrissy a sensual kiss on the lips.
"What are you girls doing kissing each other?" Tim asked, astonished but aroused at the same time.
"Lighten up Tim," Chrissy said as she walked back over to her boyfriend, "You're just jealous. With that she sat down on his lap and began passionately kissing him, her perky tits exposed to the cool morning air. He reached one hand up and began to slowly caress her erect nipples.
"You guys should get a room," Hannah interrupted.
"Do you see in rooms around here?" Chrissy turned and replied to her friend and then winked at her.
"Everyone's obviously a little horny right now," said Jake and he slid his hand down the back of Whitney's boyshorts. "Why don't we retreat to our tents, take care of some business, and meet back here in an hour or so and then we can go on a hike or something."
"I think I have a better idea." It was Hannah this time. "Why don't we play strip poker!"
Everyone was startled. Not at the suggestion of strip poker, but because it was shy Hannah who had made the suggestion.
"Wow Hannah, you're certainly coming out of your shell," said Chrissy. "But I'm already at a disadvantage," she said as she cupped both of her breasts in her hands and made a puppy dog face. "Let me run and get some more clothes on."
"I'm going to go put on some pants," Whitney said and Jake frowned as he saw her soon-to-be covered ass walking back towards their tent. "Don't worry guys," she said over her shoulder, "you guys know how bad I am at cards...I'm sure I'll be wearing less than this before too long."
Soon the six were back around the campfire more, bundled up than they needed to be for a nice, sunny morning in the woods. The girls sat in camping chairs while the guys sat together on a log.
"Ok," Jake said while shuffling a deck of cards on the cooler in front of him, "let me refresh everyone on the rules. Each time you lose a round, you must remove an article of clothing. The last person with anything on is the winner. Any questions?"
"I have a suggestion," Whitney said with a devilish look in her eyes, "How about the first two to lose have to pair up and have sex. Then the next two to lose do the same. Finally the last two will be the last to get it on."
"That sounds like you get rewarded for losing," Tim said.
"Fine," said Whitney, "we don't have to do it that way."
"No, it sounds like fun," said Chrissy.
"But what if the person we are paired up with is not our boyfriend," said Hannah reluctantly.
"That's just a risk you'll have to take," said Will looking playfully at his new girlfriend.
"Ok, I guess it sounds like fun...and I am pretty horny," Hannah said licking her lips.
"What are we waiting for then," Jake said, "I'll deal."
Hannah won the first round and the other five removed one article of clothing. Jake took off a shoe. Tim tossed his hat. Whitney took off her pants again.
The next few rounds were won by different people each time and soon Whitney and Tim were only wearing their underwear.
Tim glanced over at his girlfriend Chrissy (who still had on most of her clothes), shrugged and made a face that said, "I'm not trying to lose."
Tim won the next round with a full house. Whitney, who had on only her boyshorts and a sports bra crossed her arms behind her back and slowly pulled off her top, revealing a beautiful set of breasts.
Tim looked over at her, knowing that he would soon be fondling those breasts and his erection began to show through his boxers. Instead of becoming jealous, Chrissy looked over at him and smiled as she slipped off her own bra again.
"One more round and you're out, Whitney," Jake said jealously.
"I'm sorry babe, but you know I suck at cards."
Whitney actually won the next round. Tim was in his boxers only and Whitney in her panties and they knew their coupling was inevitable. Most of the rest of the group were fairly naked at this point, and they were aroused enough by the sight of each others bodies that it didn't matter who they would be "paired up with."
Jake won the next round and Tim and Whitney stood up and walked towards each other wearing only their bottoms.
Tim's erection was showing through his boxers as he walked over to where Whitney was now standing. He glanced over at Whitney's boyfriend.
"Are you sure this is ok with you Jake?"
"Rules are rules, my friend...have fun."
With that Whitney and Tim embraced and began making out in front of the others. He was taller than her and her full breasts pushed hard against his torso as their tongues danced together. She left one had slip down to his waist and began massaging his erection through his boxers.
"Ahem," Chrissy cleared her throat. "I believe you two forgot something," she said staring at Tim's boxers.
