Inspired by real life incidents, I have long considered this my best writing but I was never satisfied with it as previously published on LIT in two parts. Now, in hopefully my last word on this piece, I present a completely rewritten, reedited, corrected and combined version. I hope you all enjoy it and will let me know. Thanks. Now here's Rhia to tell her story.
This all started one really, really bad day when I was getting off work from my job at the mall toy store. My hours had been cut due to lack of sales since Christmas and I was still going to be a couple hundred dollars shy of the rent on my new apartment. I had spent the whole damn day worrying about what I was going to do but hadn’t come up with any answers. I wandered down by the Cookie Store in the mall to drown my sorrows in an excess of chocolate like any sensible girl would do.
“Hey, Rhia!” It was my friend Joe, the cookie guy.
“Hey!”
“Girl, you look really out of it.”
“Ha! You don’t know the half of it. I just got my own apartment and now my hours are being cut so I don’t know how I’m gonna be able to pay the rent next week. I’m trying to think of a second job I could do but nobody’s hiring.”
“Well, can’t help ya with the job but I’ll tell ya what. Cookies always help. Howzabout a Double Doozy chocolate chip special…on me?”
“I’ll take it,” I sighed dejectedly, mumbling a humble “Thank you.” As he handed me the bag, a guy walked by and whistled at me. I giggled for the first time that day and I think I felt myself blush a bit. I guess I was pretty sexy looking with my tight tank top and jeans.
"I tell ya, you lead an interesting life. Guys hittin’ on you all the time and shit….”
“Yeahhhh,” I smiled, “ I can’t even walk through the mall anymore without…Hey!” I looked around and there was my ex-boyfriend Jeremy. He came over and gave me a big hug.
“Hey, how are ya? Long time no see. ”We had broken up as friends but we hadn’t really seen each other since and that was last summer. “What are you up to these days?”
“Oh, just trying and failing to make ends meet. Hey, I’ve got a new apartment. You want to come see it?”
“Sure”
“Here.” I said, offering him a piece of my free cookie. “It’s a Double Doozy, a giant chocolate chip cookie with creamy insides.” I took a bite and licked the white icing from my lips with a long “Mmmmmmm.”
I hadn’t meant for that to be sexy but I guess I just come across as naturally sensual sometimes. Jeremy looked as though he had just gotten an instant erection. Suddenly, I remembered how good sex had been with Jeremy. His dick was kind of skinny but it got hard and stayed hard. As we walked though the mall, I found myself getting a just a tad wet thinking back on it. I also found myself thinking about Kevin… He was another guy I dated last year. I sucked him off once and gave him a few quick handjobs in the car but we never really made out. Now, his cock was thick but not very long. I nearly bumped into a post thinking about sex instead of thinking about where I was walking. “Sorry. Got distracted” I giggled to Jeremy.
Now, I happen to believe strongly that there’s no such thing as coincidence. That’s why I was pleasantly surprised as we walked along talking small talk to suddenly see, of all people, Kevin, walking towards us. Two of my ex-es in one day!
Hey, stranger!” I called out across the aisle. “It’s Kevin,” I said to Jeremy. He seemed a bit put out, as though I was still “his”. Now that I thought of it hat’s one of the reasons we broke up. Kevin and Jeremy had never met but I had mentioned each to the other before.
They shook hands almost reluctantly. It was kinda weird. Kevin was tall with wavy dark brown hair and a little goatee while Jeremy was about my height, five-six, with cropped blond hair. We must have made quite a sight as we sat down on a mall bench to talk, me in the middle with my long red hair sandwiched between two ex-boyfriends. Hmmmm. As I brought them both up to speed on what Joe called my interesting life, I was starting to formulate a plan.
“Hey, Kev, I was gonna show Jeremy my new apartment. It’s not too far from here. Wanna come?”
“Uhhh, sure, I mean, you know, you don’t think three would be a crowd?”
“No, honey, I laughed heartily. “Three’ll be a party the way I do it!” I giggled again and they looked at each other and slowly started to smile.
We took Kevin’s car. Along the way, we stopped long enough for Jeremy to buy a bottle of wine. Part of me was getting scared of what I was thinking but the part of me that was between my legs was definitely not. By the time we entered my apartment I was soaking the crotch of my little purple thong.
We sat around and talked and drank for about a half-hour. Jeremy laughed when there was no more wine to pour. I had drunk most of it myself. I stood and stretched a long stretch, running my hands through my hair. My tank top pulled up far enough and tight enough that they could see I wasn’t wearing a bra and they both laughed a little nervously.
“Oooooookay, guys. Now here’s the deal.” The wine had fortified me. “I am hotter than a cat in heat and I need both of you to take off all your clothes right now but remember, I’m in charge. What I say goes. When I say we’re done, we’re done. When I say ‘no’, it means ‘no’. Understood?”
Jeremy had his clothes off quickly as he said “Hell, yeah!” Kevin rose and pulled my tank top over my head revealing my apple-sized breasts. My nipples are a bright pink color and they were hard and long. He kissed me lightly as he fumbled with the zipper of my jeans.
