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Note: this is an entry in an "
exactly 750-words
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The snow was falling increasingly heavily as Josh carefully worked his way on a horse, pulling the packhorse loaded with grub for Hal and Frank, up the Cripple Creek ravine into the Rockies. Hal and Frank were up at the camp, panning for gold, and Mr. Sinclair, impatient with Josh's surrender to him, was sending the young man up to the camp with the comment, "I'm tired of waiting and maneuvering. Let's see what Frank and Hal can do with you."
Josh knew what Frank and Hal would do with him—and then Mr. Sinclair could as well. And it wasn't that Josh was unwilling. It was as much a frustrating wait for him as for Mr. Sinclair. It was that he was scared of crossing that boundary. But he couldn't say he didn't know what awaited him at the gold mining camp up Cripple Creek.
By the time he got to the camp and the two-room sod house pushed into the hill and facing the rippling Cripple Creek that glittered in the sunlight from the specks of gold the creek leached off the surrounding mountains the snow had become so heavy that he could barely see his hand in front of his face. There was no sunlight now.
He could see light in the window of the sod house and smoke coming out of the chimney, but neither Hal nor Frank came to greet him and to help unload the packhorse. Josh knew there would be a Ute youth, Ouray, there too who lived here permanently, cooking for and cleaning up after a succession of gold miners using the cabin, but he didn't seem to notice Josh's arrival either. Josh unloaded the packhorse on the cabin's porch, put the horses in the barn, a wooden structure in better condition than the house was—livestock was valued higher here than the men who had answered the call of the gold rush in droves—and knocked on the door. No one answered, so he opened it himself and entered, dragging a sack of provisions with him.