Finding The Twink In The Bar

By Joe Lewin

Author's Note: I received a private note from a reader who told me he enjoyed my stories but noted that I often take a lot of time to build to the sex scenes. He wondered if I'd ever tried writing something short and to the point. I thought he made a good point and set a goal to write something spank-worthy in under 1,000 words. Leave a comment and let me know if you think I hit the mark.

I was in San Francisco for a meeting. After checking in, I made my way to my room. I fired up the computer. Per my normal routine, I opened up a hook up ap to see if there was any one interesting close by.

I clicked on one bubble. No picture--just a muscled bare chested meme, but a nice description: "22/5'8"/140/5c". In his profile he'd written: cute boi likes to dress up all in lace and go in style."

"Hey," I typed.

He responded: "Hi. Looking?"

"Absolutely," I wrote.

"Where are you staying."

"Embarcadero Hyatt," I responded.

He blinked out and was gone. "Oh, well," I thought.

I continued to chat with a few guys. 15 minutes later the twink's bubble reappeared, with a message for me. I clicked in and read: "Hi. I'm at the bar in your lobby. Figure out who I am and take me to bed."

I was down at the bar in less than 2 minutes.

I laughed when I saw him. He was the only 20-something in a sea of 30 to 50-somethings.

I nodded at him and he walked to me.

He reached me and said "you win."

In less than 2 minutes we were in my room. I closed and latched the door behind us. I then stood before him to get a good look. He had a mop of blonde hair and crystal blue eyes. His face was hairless and without a blemish. His lips were thin and pink.

I wrapped my arms around him and drew him in for a kiss. It was passionate and hungry, each of us using his tongue to lick and explore the other's lips and mouth.

We moved into the room and he stepped back. He rolled his t-shirt up over his head. When his arms went up I noted a small patch of reddish-blonde hair under each arm. Otherwise, his chest was bare. His nipples were puffy and pink.

He unbuckled his pants and dropped them to his ankles, kicking them away when they landed on the floor. He had been going commando and was naked.

His cock was about 5" long and cut. He had a nice reddish blonde thatch of pubes at the base of his cock. I spun him around to look at his ass. Two perfect small globes.

He spun around as I was taking my shirt off. He reached forward and undid my belt and pulled my zipper down. He let my pants drop. I, too, was commando. Set free, my 7" cut cock sprung forward.

He let out a little moan and took my hand and walked me to the bed. When we got there, he turned me around and had me sit on the edge.

As soon as I was sitting, he buried his face in my crotch. He pushed my legs open wide and then used his hands to grope and squeeze my balls and trace erotic lines of pleasure up and down my thighs and stomach. One hand reached up and squeezed my nipples.

His technique was exquisite. He licked the underside of my cock, his snake-like tongue flickered along the tip and stem. He alternated this by holding my cock and licking the underside from the base to the tip and then repeating that. His tongue and mouth were wet and soon my cock was coated in thick saliva. And then he started to suck me. Slowly he went down to the base and then went back up again.

He continued to do that, taking me deep into his throat then coming back out again.

He stopped and looked up at me with a smile. He then held my cock out of the way and went to work on my balls and taint with his tongue and his mouth. He sucked one ball in and lightly chewed on it. Then he sucked the other in and lightly chewed on that. He swirled his tongue around, all over my balls. He dipped his finger in the pool of saliva accumulating at the base of my cock and then stuck his finger in my ass, rolling me back to give himself better access.

Then, continuing to finger fuck me, he went back to work on my cock with a fury. He was an expert cocksucker. His tongue slid up and down the bottom side of my cock as my cock went in and out of his mouth. One finger plunged in and out of my hole while the other hand fondled and played with my balls.

He did this for a few minutes. I felt the cum starting to boil down below and warned him. He did not stop. In fact, he continued to suck my cock, finger my hole with deep plunges and roll my balls around with a renewed passion.

I groaned as I exploded into his mouth. He opened his lips, slipped me out as I was still cumming. He took a couple of nice shots to his lips and his cheeks and then plunged me back in to suck me some more. As my volleys came to end, he licked my cock clean and used my cock to gather up the cum on his chin, cheeks and lips, coating my cock and then taking it back into his mouth to lick it off with his tongue.

He then licked off any residue with his tongue.

After a few minutes he got up and came back from the bathroom with a warmly damp towel and cleaned me and him off. He then scampered up beside me and said: "Now that we have that out of the way, let's take our time.