This is my very first story and I have no clue if it's good for ya'll. All comments good or bad are accepted and please provide something that could make my work better.
No sex in first chapter sorry, ya'll need to know them first before the fun begins.
All work of fiction and it will showen.
Enjoy reading pretties
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-Kère-
"run you fool" yelled Henry, my brother in arms "I told you running a freaking rescue mission to hell was crazy even for a lunatic like you!" as the drums of Hell sounded behind us.
"How was I supposed to know a 3000 year old alarm system still worked?" I shouted to Henry, as we ran through the Hall of Souls
"But we're still alive aren't..." I was stopped mid sentence, as a cloud of black smoke and screams past over us.
"You want to rephrase that little one?" Henry said as we stopped mid run, when we saw the souls of Hell forming a great barrier blocking the way out of this God forsaken place.
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-Marcus-
"Mmmm...drums..." my eyes shot open as the realization sunk in. "What the Hell is going on." I threw my black silk covers to the floor as I began trying to find something to wear. " Who is dumb enough to break into my hell?" Just as I found last night clothing and slid it over my body, as my captain David came running into the room.
"Lord Marcus, the 48th prison was attacked and a maximum security level Angel has been freed." sighing and thinking to myself "interesting, someone smart enough to get past my defenses and..." I was snapped out of my thought when my captain and friend broke in "Sir, what are your orders"
"umm... right... summon the ferries and the souls, secure the area before they escape. I want to know who the idiot is that was stupid enough to break in here. I want them surrounded and secured, and tell the ferries not to lay a claw on them, in tell I get there, understood!"
"Sir" David said as he turned and ran down the hall where the ferries cages were. I began to evaporate and thought to myself, as my room turned to shadowy smoke around me "Who is brave enough or truly stupid enough to break into the 8th Ring of Hell, and steal from me... I wonder?"
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-kère-
"well at least it can't get any worse... right?" I said as a crash of black and green flames encircled as... damn..."really they sent the ferries." From the shadowy flames the ferries came from the heart of the fire.
Beautiful creatures with bodies of ladies with hands as eagles and black wing coming from their backs and a powerful glow of power surrounding them.
"Kère really, can you shut up before that mouth of yours get us into more trouble and deeper hole?" Henry said as he took his fighting stance, which looks like our last.
I joined him into our fighting stance. "What? they sent the guardians of Hell onto us, what can be worse than that Henry?"