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Another one in my 'Village' series, very loosely linked to others in the series. Sensible comments appreciated.
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John was bored, he had refused to go on holiday with his parents, as he had a job and wanted to save for university. He forgot that there would be long periods of nothing. Then the phone rang, next door neighbour.
"John, I'm sorry, are you doing nothing?" she said. "The sink is blocked, and I need to fix it, I don't want to get a plumber at the weekend, could you have a look, I'd be sooo... grateful."
Annie was a bit gushy, and over the top, John quite liked her, partly because she had a pair of lovely tits. John was eighteen and had never had the opportunity for a good fondle. Annie had noticed John's obsession with her tits, 'Don't dribble,' she thought last time she met him. She shook her head, teenage boys and hormones, she thought. Annie was separated from her husband, she was forty and was a little bit short of sex. She often thought of her teenage neighbour. But how to get him?
Then she hit on the age old idea of the blocked sink, the god of plumbers invented blocked sinks. She thought about a mouse in the kitchen, but quite liked mice, and found them quite cuddly and nice.
So blocked sink it was, naΓ―ve John never realised he was being set up, but as we said earlier, he was a nice boy who like looking at Annie's tits, and left his hormones switched on, He cleared the sink, Annie was grateful and offered him a beer. He sat down and drank the beer, Annie a wine, then Annie started her ploy, well tried and tested.
"I've never seen you with a girl, John," she said and got the standard reply:
"I find girls difficult to talk to," he said.
"A nice boy like you?" she said, "I thought they be falling out over you."
"No," he said.
"What about Charlotte, over the road? Nice girl, I've seen you walking home from school together." She replied.
"Charlotte's just a friend," he said, defensively.
"Friend?" said Annie, guessing that Charlotte might see John as more than a friend.
"Friend," he said, firmly. He couldn't tell Annie how often he thought of Charlotte, and how often she was part of his dreams...
There was a silence, whilst Annie thought.
"So if your friend Charlotte was here, and she was sat next to you, what would you talk about?" Annie asked.
"She's going into biology, so we would talk about animals and things," said John, wondering where this strange conversation was going.
"So let's practice, talk to me about animals and things," she said.
So John spoke about animals, repeating the things that Charlotte had said to him,
"Well that sounds interesting," Annie said, "so why would Charlotte not find that interesting?"
John was lost here, what was Annie getting at, he turned to her, "I think that you like Charlotte more than you let on," said Annie, quietly.
Annie was right of course, John wondered where this was going, still.
"So here you are, sat next to Charlotte, would you kiss her?" she asked.
"I've never kissed, her, she's just a friend." Said John.
"I kiss my friends," said Annie. "Have you ever kissed a girl, John?" she asked quietly, knowing the answer.
John looked at her, "No," he replied, "no, I get all nervous."
Annie had him now, entangled in her web, "Let me show you, it's easy, you put your heads close together, like this," putting hers near his, "turn your heads, and push lips together." She kissed him, to his surprise. They pulled away from each other, "Now ask me if you can kiss me back," said Annie.
John did so, Annie nodded, and he kissed her back, they held the kiss longer that time.
"Easy isn't it," said Annie, John nodded, "but you need more practice," she said, pulling him to her. John responded to the kiss, enjoying it, he put his hand on her shoulder, pulling her tight to him, he could feel the swell of her breast, Annie smiled, she knew where this was going, 'easy does it', she thought. She let the kiss continue, then got hold of his hand and pulled it slowly down to her breast. John felt the breast, then opened his eyes, and looked at Annie, "Go on," she said, "I've seen you looking at them."
John fondled her breast, continuing the kissing, "It's time you took my jumper off," said Annie, John did as he was asked, laying the jumper on the floor. John returned to the fondling and stroking, Annie kissing him enthusiastically, he made no attempt to unfasten the bra, awaiting a signal, "When you have done that for a while," said Annie, "the girl will expect you to unclip her bra, don't worry, she will let you know if she wants you to stop, a nice girl will do it gently, not wanting to hurt you." John did nothing.