So my first erotica story. Criticism is greatly appreciated.
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Sextus had spied Vibia entering the baths weeks ago, and now, after what seemed months of planning, the two were finally meeting.
Sextus had watched the beautiful raven haired girl go into the baths, her white dress riding on her high breasts, the skirts swirling around her brown legs. His eyes had descended down her body to where her sandals cupped her small and shapely feet. The hot air of the baths had blown the long straight hair across her face hiding the perfect triangular nose and large blue eyes. She had tossed her head showing off a nearly boyish grin that split her heart shaped mouth.
As he had walked up the hill to his father's villa he couldn't help but imagine her undressing for the baths, letting her dress fall to the stone floor and walking into the steamy water, sitting with her head back and hair out, the water covering her hips and curved belly up to her small breasts. How she would have allowed the slaves to sponge her shoulders down, laughing as they wet her arms and neck.
When he had arrived home he had frantically searched for one of his sister's slaves and begged the elderly servant to go to the baths and discover the girl's name. As he anxiously watched the woman go he began composing the long love letters he would send in the next couple of days.
And now, she was there in front of him. They had arranged to meet at the Shrine of Isis while everyone else would be at the festival. She wore a tunic rich with festival colors, red and green, the skirt ending just before her knee, a blue shawl was wrapped around her shoulders, and her hair was tied up in a high knot spun around with a gold chain. She watched him unabashedly, eyes greedy for detail.
They had seen each other once or twice from afar. Sextus had written about it in his secret letters, and she had responded in kind. He had loitered at the baths each evening hoping to see her enter again, but to no avail.
After a moment of looking Sextus grabbed Vibia's arm and dragged her through a veiled doorway at the back of the shrine lest her chaperone spot them together. Gold anklets he had barely noticed on her bare legs jingled as they hurried.
The side room was dark except for a small slitted window giving over to a small square where some festival musicians were playing. Hearing the brisk flute Vibia ran to the middle of the room and rose onto her toes. Suddenly she spun away from Sextus laughing, whirling to the wall. Laughing Sextus held his hands out to her as she danced back towards him. After a few hesitant steps the two lovers spun in a fast dance, he slowing spinning, while she, her tunic raising up, circled and whirled quickly around him.