One Night in Xanadu
A Princess of the Xiongnu and the Old Way
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This story was written for the Literotica "One Night in XXX" Story Event and as almost always, here's that little note from Chloe right at the start.
Back in early February (2019), I was tossing around ideas with a few other Literotica writers for a Literotica Story Event (NOT a competition, just an "event" where anyone interested could write and submit a story on a common theme). It's a great way to get a whole bunch of people kicked off and writing their own stories with a common starting point, a fixed target date, and it's amazing to see the different paths each one of us takes from that same starting point.
In this case the starting point was "One Night in XXX", where XXX is a city or town which can be real or fictional, but if it's fictional it had to be in an existing published book or movie. The whole story, start to finish, had to take place over one night, altho it can start the day before and finish the next morning and there can be a little in the way of flashback or prelude to set the scene. I guess it captured everyone's imagination because people were diving in and starting to write stories for it even before the Literotica announcement of the "Event" was made.
So a big thanks to Laurel right up front for giving this event the go-ahead and a just as big thanks to all the other authors on Literotica who were inspired enough to jump in - and I hope you all reading this little story of mine enjoy all the other stories everyone else has written for this story event -- and if you're wondering why you're suddenly seeing a whole bunch of "One Night in XXX" stories popping up together, that's why, folks.
Anyhow, after kick-starting the idea and organizing it with Laurel and a few other authors and writing up the announcement for Literotica, I thought I better write something myself and Coleridge's "Kubla Khan" popped into my head for some reason although this story really isn't based on "Kubla Khan." So here you are, "One Night in Xanadu," Chloe's contribution to the "One Night in XXX" Story Event, a little historical piece that's shamelessly historically inaccurate (it would have even Robert E Howard shuddering in his grave coz I sat here with a pile of his books in front of me looking at the style he wrote in and just murdering it altho then again, Howard was pretty good at murdering history himself so maybe he'd just laugh. Wherever he is, I hope he enjoys this and RIP, dude. You were one of the best!). Anyhow, I hope you all enjoy the story all the same coz it sure was a lot of fun to write.....
If you want some good music to go with this story, go to youtube and search for "The HU -- Wolf Totem" for some great Mongol folk-rock that I listened to endlessly while I was writing this. They're amazing! And someone did a ten hour loop -- lookup up "The HU -- Wolf Totem -- 10 hours" and listen while you're reading this. It won't take you ten hours to read but you won't have to hit replay either and it's in Mongolian so it's not like the words are gonna distract you from the story. Also, partway through the story, my heroine sings "The Heart Sutra". If you want to listen to the version that inspired me, search youtube for "The Heart Sutra (εΏη») by Faye Wong (ηθ²) with English Subtitles (High Quality Audio)". It's beautiful...
Also, just a warning. This isn't my longest story on Literotica by a long shot, but it's a few LIT pages before the first sex takes place so if you're after a short stroke story, skip this one. That said, the First Time sex is hot (I mean, how many girls get to lose their virginity to the Great Khan himself in fabled Xanadu) and the final sex scene is violent and bloody, and, I hope, hot. Bloody hot. You'll get that one when you read it. LOL. And of course if you like my stories, varied as they are, I think you'll really enjoy this one.
. ....and now, get reading! And don't forget, go read everyone else's stories too. We all had a lot of fun writing these for you, and it's a wild variety, so go enjoy ...Chloe
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In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A stately pleasure-dome decree
Where Alph, the sacred river, ran
Through caverns measureless to man
Down to a sunless sea.
So twice five miles of fertile ground
With walls and towers were girdled round;
And there were gardens bright with sinuous rills,
Where blossomed many an incense-bearing tree;
And here were forests ancient as the hills,
Enfolding sunny spots of greenery:
Kubla Khan, by Samuel Taylor Coleridge
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"You see before your eyes Xanadu, Princess Altani," the Captain of Five Hundred said, proudly, as we rode side by side over the low ridgeline, pausing a little after the crest to gaze down into the great valley before us. The Great Khan's Summer Palace, Xanadu, lay spread below, vast beyond anything I had imagined. My escort, my guards, they reined in behind us as I halted, shielding my eyes from the red-gold glare of the setting sun reflected from the gilded roofs. There, before me, was my destination. My fate.
Xanadu.
That was the name the Captain of my escort used for this sprawling city of stone built around that great Palace and the verdant park enclosed within those inner walls that I could see even from here. Shangdu. δΈι½. That was the name used by the Han for this place. My people, the Hu, we whom the Han named Xiongnu and the Mongols called Hunnu and others called Hun, to us this was the City of Stone, for my people had no cities, no buildings.
We were people of the steppe, our homes our yurts, our beds the ground, our roof the blue sky. People of the Wolf, we called ourselves, for we were wolves. Wolves of the plains, the great steppe that went on without end. But I, I was to be a wolf of the plains no longer.
I had been sent as a gift to the Great Khan, the Khagan, here in his Summer Palace.
His Xanadu. His Shangdu. His City of Stone.
Call it what you will, this great city constructed from the bones of the earth loomed before my eyes as we rode towards it at a fast trot, for dusk came down fast and we were at the end of our long journey. This night, this night that I had feared and dreaded over all these long weeks of travel, this night I would find myself within this city of Xanadu, no more travelling across the steppe and of that I was almost glad, for winter was falling fast. Snow lay sprinkled thinly on the ground now, white on the brown autumn grass and Xiongnu though I was and inured to hardship, winter is no time to be riding across the great steppe.
Xanadu.
This was that city to which I was dispatched. I, my father's only daughter, gifted as a concubine to the Khagan. The Great Khan, ruler of all the steppe tribes, ruler now too of the great empire of the Han, for the Han had fallen in defeat as had my own people a generation ago. Slaves, all were slaves to the Great Khan and though we Hu were of the steppe, my people had not escaped that fate. The Mongols had defeated us and I, I who was a Princess who fate might have destined to rule, now I was a mere gift.
Gifted to the Great Khan by a fool. I, a princess of the Hu, we that the Han named the Xiongnu and the Mongols named Hunnu and others called Hun. Bitter were my thoughts as I gazed down on those great walls of stone. Walls that stretched high and impassable across the grassland before me as we rode towards great wooden gates set in a fortress-like tower, one of half a dozen great towers that I could see.