This is my first time writing a story. I hope you can give me any criticism so that I may become a better writer. Thank you.
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It's their first time meeting like this they've both wondered what it'd be like. Would it be just like any other time, where they would go their separate ways by the end of the night? As she knocks on his door, he opens it allowing her to come in, greeting one another, as they take notice what each was wearing, he had on his nice denim jeans, and she was wearing a slow cut top and a short skirt. As he shuts the door he peeks around the corner as if he was expecting someone to follow. Right away she notices the lights were dim with music playing low, and a few candles were freshly burning. She sets her purse onto the table, as he asks her if she would like something to drink. Yes, thank you, "she says," walking towards him, they take there drinks to the lounge, where they sit and normally hold a conversation.
This time it was different, as the conversation slowly drifted off the room filled with silence. Their eyes melted into one another as if their souls were connecting. Each of them began to sense the caressing of one another. First, their lips began slowly touching, they begin locking there lips together as their hands caressed each others bodies. It was as if she was being lifted up into the air, and slowly down again. Their kissing was full of so much passion, it was so elegant, then it would get faster, and a little rougher as she moved her lips to his ear, and down the side of his neck, slowly breathing, nibbling as she went along, he moaned. Bringing her lips back to meet his, with a little bite she takes his lips into hers. His hands gripped around her face the passion is almost too much to bare, his hands move down her arms, caressing her along the way, he works his way down to her breast, gently teasing her nipples, licking and nibbling them. He continues to take her breast in, as she throws her head back in excitement. Oh how wonderful that feels.