Written: 10/15/05 -
Revised: 7/22/06
(M/F, Consensual Sex, First Time Together.)
SUBJECT:
I went to an amusement park where I met a girl who had absolutely no breasts and no hips. And, boy, did she compensate! She gave me the ride of my life!
WARNING:
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Chapter 1. The carnival
I saw her at a carnival, actually it was the carnival associated with the county fair. Being a photographer, I have seen some beautiful women, but this woman's features were
strikingly
beautiful! She looked young, fresh and innocent. Her face was instantly pretty and pert. And then it grew on you! She was slender and delicately boned. Her eyes were like sparkling green jewels. Her hair was blond and cascaded in waves down her back. She was not tall, maybe 5 ft 1 or 2 inches, but she appeared long legged and rail thin, with almost no body to speak of. Her shoulders were bare as she wore a stretch tube top around her midsection and upper torso covering what breasts she had. The elastic top was snug and she was so flat it made her appear almost boyish. A mid-calf-length skirt that had very little flare for the hips completed her ensemble.
It was early in the day and we both had arrived before the rides had started. She was leaning over the fence looking at a children's ride that imitated flying elephants with large ears, like Dumbo. She appeared almost waif-like with green Bambi eyes wide in a pale white face crowned with long, luxurious, rebellious waves of hair and a single ruby red earring in one ear.
Her tube top was tangerine in color and she wore no bra. Hell, her bust was so small she probably didn't even know what a bra was for!
I moved beside her leaning against the fence and greeted her with a cheerful "Hi!" and she responded in kind. She flashed me a smile out of the side of her all green eyes, displaying perfect white teeth. With her blond hair and alabaster complexion, the effect was electrifying! I felt the current run along my spine and hoped I hadn't whimpered out loud as her beauty was enhanced by her perfect angelic smile. I looked down at the stunning beauty I was towering over. Her lips were so full and her smile so wide, I wanted to use that mouth right then and there. And I didn't have talking in mind!
But her superlative charm lay in her eyes and the twinkle there and I wondered if it was her own natural twinkle or if it was something that I had inspired in her. It had to be her personality shining through rather than any attributes of mine. I'm good looking, but not *
that*
good looking! Besides, I had to be at least twice her age. Still, there are lots of nymphs around with 'father complexes', and who was I to interfere with a young girl's favorite complex?
Still, I had the feeling that she could look at a man with at least two different kinds of natures, one sweet, wistful, appealing, innocent, and virginal, and the other: a seductive
dancing
devil.
The flash in her eyes made me feel that she was an unconscious and instinctive flirt. Briefly, I fantasized, that she was an insatiably greedy little soul who lived on love and had never yet returned it.
Those eyes! So sweet. So strange. So beautiful . . . . .
"Are you waiting for the rides to begin?" I asked.
"No. Actually, I'm waiting for a friend," she responded, looking at the ride. The ride was obviously for children, not a young lady of her age. (I noticed that she used a gender-neutral reference to her 'friend'. She might be waiting for
someone
, but she hadn't said it was a
boyfriend
!)