First-time author, feedback is welcomed and appreciated.
This is the beginning of a much longer story that will span multiple categories. Fair warning, the bulk of it will end up under Incest/Taboo due to themes that will be introduced after the first couple of chapters.
There is plenty of action to come. I have at least another twenty chapters in various states of completion, and more planned. If anyone would like to assist with editing, I'm more than willing to accept help.
Thanks & Enjoy.
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The Birthday Party
Alex Donovan sat at his desk hunched over a laptop, futility attempting to focus on work. There was a party downstairs, but he wanted no part of it. An appearance would risk a hazing he'd rather avoid. Checking his watch, he counted the minutes until his escape. His sister Lily was turning twenty-two and a gaggle of friends was over to celebrate. He was outnumbered and outgunned, a painful microcosm of his life with the opposite sex.
His phone buzzed and he looked down. Shit, his buddy Ben just bailed on him: "Have to cancel sorry dude."
Alex sighed and responded, "What's up?" expecting an explanation from his normally reliable friend. He got none. He was trapped, and his rumbling stomach reminded him he'd have to go downstairs before long. A knock at the door interrupted his despondent self-reflection. "Come in," he said, sighing.
The door opened to reveal a curvaceous redhead. "Hey Alex," she said, a warm smile splitting her lightly freckled face.
"Hi Carrie, enjoying the party?" he asked, knowing he just exhausted his cache of small talk.
"It's been fun. Things are winding down though."
Relieved, Alex hoped he'd get his house back tonight after all. He looked at Carrie awkwardly, unsure if she planned on explaining why she was standing in his office.
"Lily said you were up here so I thought we could catch up. The girls just ordered pizza and we're going to watch a movie if you want to come down."
"Ah, I don't know..." Alex said, trailing off.
"Mind if I have a seat?" Carrie asked, pointing at an open chair next to his desk.
"Sure," he said quickly, watching her shapely feminine form cross in front of him and then bend to sit. He'd had a crush on his sister's best friend for years but never had the guts to do anything about it.
"How's work?" she asked, eyebrows raised.
"It's fine." Alex didn't like to talk about his work much, preferring to keep his business to himself.
"Oh come on, you can do better than that," she said with a probing smile. "I am actually interested." Carrie was being honest; she needed to know more about Alex. There were plans for the boy, big plans, and it was time to get the ball rolling.
"Well, if you really want to know, I'm trying to fix a bug in a piece of software that controls a network security appliance that a bank installed last week. If I can't get it fixed they will have to spend millions of dollars replacing the entire system," he said bluntly.
"That sounds important," Carrie said. "So you're working for a bank now?"
"No, I still work for myself as a consultant. People call me with problems and I fix them. I've done work for almost every major bank in the country the past year," Alex said, divulging more information than he normally would. He liked being around Carrie. She smelled sweet, like strawberries, and it made his head spin.
"How did you get to be a consultant? Don't you need to know a lot of people to do that?" Carrie asked, prodding him further.
"That's true. The company I ran, you might remember?" he asked.
Carrie nodded, she knew he had his own business but wasn't sure what happened to it. He wasn't around much back then.
Alex continued, "Most of the people I consult for were customers of that company."
"You graduated early, right?" Carrie asked, continuing to pull information out of her friend's younger brother.
Alex was surprised she remembered that far into his past. "Yeah, I graduated high school at fifteen. I got the business going while I was in college."
"And you're what, eighteen now?" the redhead asked.
"I'll be twenty in August," Alex answered, starting to get annoyed but not enough to chase the beautiful girl from his room.
"What happened to your business? And how come you aren't still in college?" Carrie asked, hoping she wasn't pushing him too hard.
"I sold it. And I dropped out. When dad died things changed," Alex said, looking at the floor now. His father passed away from cancer unexpectedly a little over a year ago. They were close, but Alex had come to terms. He had to be the man of the house now, as unnatural as that felt. He knew his mom and sisters depended on him, as he depended on them.
"Oh Alex, I'm sorry. I should have guessed. I don't mean to pry." Carrie said sympathetically. She'd helped his sister through their father's passing and was still helping her. Lily was taking it much harder than Alex or their younger sister Casey.
"It's ok," Alex said, then uncharacteristically continued to fill in the blanks for Carrie. "I sold my business after he died, partly so I could buy this house from my mom. She was having a hard time dealing with everything and I thought it would make her life easier. She could stop working and worrying about money and do whatever she needed to heal."
Carrie listened intently while he explained his selfless act and admired how much his family obviously meant to him. She'd always known him to be like this, to put the people he cared about before himself. It's the reason she was in his room, and why she spent time with him in general. People with his level of empathy and compassion were rare, and she constantly sought them out. She also had a sneaking suspicion that he was something else, a theory she hoped to confirm that evening.
Carrie sat quietly while Alex added, "Truth be told, I'm looking for a change. Things are starting to get normal again and I don't need to keep doing this," he said, motioning at his open laptop. He'd never shared those feelings with anyone but his little sister Casey. Carrie was simply too easy to talk to, it caught him off guard. He couldn't get half a sentence out around most girls.
But Alex hadn't told Carrie his whole story. He was, in fact, properly rich. He learned early on that people changed when they found out he had money, and never for the better. Especially women, at least the ones he'd met lately anyway.
"Sounds to me like you could use a girlfriend," Carrie said with a grin.
Alex felt heat rising up his cheeks and shrugged. "Never had much luck with that. I was always two or three years younger than everyone in school. That didn't make it easy." He shook his head and looked at Carrie's shoes. He wanted a girlfriend, a companion, but all his brains and money wouldn't solve that problem. If anything they made it worse.
"Well, little man, there's a room full of eligible girls under your feet. Maybe you should come down, who knows what might happen," Carrie said, her head canted suggestively. She'd called him little man to tease him when they were younger. It wasn't until Alex reached the age of 16 that he outgrew her. Now he stood several inches over six feet. His frame was lanky, but filling out nicely. He was handsome, Carrie thought. If only he had a little more confidence, he'd be unstoppable. Once she was through with him, anyway.