This is my first submission -- actually, my first story -- and any comments/advice/praise/abuse you could offer would be gladly accepted.
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Leaning against the doorway, wearing only a long grey shirt which barely touched her thighs, she looked like something out of a magazine. Her long blonde hair, slightly disheveled, fell softly over her small breasts, which were just visible though the fabric. I couldn't help dropping my gaze to her thin, porcelain legs -- they looked so soft I longed to just reach out and stroke them. I tried to convince myself that Chloe was my best friend, that I shouldn't let her throw away her virginity on me.
Chloe and I had known each other for five years, and never had I thought about her any more than a great friend. We told each other everything. I knew about the girls she played around with in year nine. She knew my fantasies about the drama teacher at school. She'd go through all these boyfriends, and I'd be the one to help her get over them afterwards.
But how did this goddess suddenly appear half-naked in my bedroom door? It all started after Chloe had broken up with her last boyfriend. She called me the moment it happened.
"Hey Ben, sorry..." She had said, "I know it's late... but could you come to my place? I sorta just dumped Paul."
"Yeh sure Chloe, are you ok?"
"I'm fine..." She was quiet for a while, and when she spoke, she sounded almost pleading, "I just really want to see you..."
I didn't think it was too strange at the time. My parents were away that weekend, so I just walked out of the door. She lived literally three houses down the road anyway; it didn't take me long at all to get there. When I knocked, she opened the door right away and led me quickly upstairs to her room; her parents were probably asleep downstairs.
As I sat down on her bed, I began to actually take notice of her. She wasn't upset, as you would expect someone who just ended a relationship to be. On the contrary, as she lightly sat down beside me, she looked into my eyes with an electrifying, teasing expression. For a split-second, my eyes wandered down to her tight fitting white singlet, which followed her figure down to those stunning, skinny legs. Too hastily, I corrected my gaze -- but I'm sure that she noticed -- for she casually slid herself closer to me, until her jeans were brushing up against mine.
Croaking my voice, I asked how she was feeling.
"I'm alright -- I did the dumping, remember?" She grinned slightly, "I guess I'm just feeling disappointed..."
"Disappointed?"
"Yes. I wanted my first time to be with Paul -- but he's such a dickhead. All he ever did was ogle at my breasts."
For all the while I'd been sneaking glances at her sexy body. After she said this, I quickly looked up again and into her joking eyes -- muttering some stupid apology. She laughed.
"It's alright Ben, I like it when you look at me like that", she was still grinning at my blushing, "But I couldn't lose it to Paul. Anyway, it doesn't matter now; I've decided who I'm losing it to now."
"Who?" I asked innocently. I pretended to ignore the way her eyes had been smoldering into mine, the way she'd arched her body in my direction, the way her hand was suddenly on my knee. She took a short breath.
"You, Ben," she whispered, now moving even closer to me. Her face was inches away from mine. Her hand edged slowly up my leg.
"Me?" I whispered even softer to her lips. With a rush of euphoria, she rested her hand over my crotch, slowly rubbing the long outline of my now-hard penis. Our lips still hadn't touched. I was breathing in short bursts. Her eyes still burned with desire. Her mouth curved into a satisfied grin as she moved her hands to unbutton my jeans.
Suddenly I snapped.
"Stop, stop, please," I rushed, quickly standing up and facing her, "you've just broken up with you boyfriend. I can't be a rebound, Chloe... I have -- I've got to go now."
"No, please don't go Ben," she pleaded, her expression horrified. It made me feel awful, but I was certain I was doing the right thing. I didn't want to lose Chloe as a friend.
"I'm sorry Chloe.... I've -- I've got to go now."
So I left her there, alone, and almost ran home.
It seemed to take hours for my hard-on to shrink to normal size. Finally, I jumped in the shower. Everything felt weird. I couldn't believe that Chloe, my best friend for five years, had come onto me like that. Eventually, I turned off the taps, dried off quickly, and tied a towel around my waist.
I noticed nothing as I walked from the bathroom. It was just as I came into my bedroom, just as I was about to jump into bed and reach for a magazine, that I heard her standing behind me. She'd clearly raided my closet while I was in the shower; the light grey shirt was far too big for her small figure. At first I was in shock, until I looked up into her resolute eyes. I could not resist her, this time. Looking again at her sexy body, feeling my cock harden for her, I knew that I wanted it just as badly.
"Ben" she said simply, "Do this."
I didn't say anything. She moved very close to me, kissing me on my chest, then my neck, then my lips. I responded immediately, holding her close, cupping my hands around her tight ass, tracing my fingers up her smooth hips, feeling her wet tongue firm against mine.