This story is based on an original story by Willcope published over 10 years ago. I reached out to Willcope regarding this story over 6 months ago but have got no response.
I have taken their ideas and thoughts of a twisted fetish-based ladies' academy and tried to expand it using my own fetishes. We don't pee unless we drink. The original is very much based on pee so they might as well be drunk. Naughty girls smoke. So, these girls do too.
Originally in Mind Control I have put this into Fetish.
Miss Enid Kirkwood's Academy for Young Ladies
Chapter 1
It had now been four very long, tiring, and stressful years and Nelly Andrews trying to balance both school and life had still not really taken her parents' divorce at all well. She had finally after many trials and tribulations finished school and was looking forward to her gap year before going to university in the following September.
She had always been her daddy's girl and much to her disappointment as he had in the past twelve months recently had shacked up with the giggly blonde bimbo called Suzy. This woman who compared to her mother was very much smaller in the waist and much larger hips and tits. For Nelly there was also another problem- Suzy was only a few years older than herself. The arrival of this floozy Suzy made everything else worse as she very much saw Nelly as competition for her husband's doting attention, affection, and cash.
So even though there was a deal in the divorce, more recently Nelly wasn't invited around much as she wanted, and as such she really did miss seeing her father.
The crux of the stressful divorce was that both parents angrily blamed the other for having a sordid affair first. The situation and the story's that were told to each other, and about each other were not helped by the fact that her mother had jubilantly remarried within months of receiving the Decree Nisi.
There was of course good and bad news for the young Nelly by staying with her mum firstly- the good news was that her new stepfather was an incredibly rich person. Unfortunately the bad news was he was an extremely ugly and the most totally unlikeable person she had ever met. He didn't even try to make friends with her. Harold Andrews was something big in the city and was rolling in money, it literally wasn't a problem to buy anything for her mother. Unfortunately, he certainly didn't try to buy Nelly's love.
As Nelly found him completely cold and unfriendly to her whilst being seriously controlling. She was disgusted at the way that her mother fawned on him and because of his money she seemed to accept his every whim (and there were many) as law of the land. It was not all rosy in the house as there were many arguments between her mother and Harold, they were numerous and growing louder, longer, and ever more bitter. However, heated arguments were always solved half an hour later by extremely loud, and incredibly noisy but clearly enjoyable and passionate loud sex.
Things all came to a head very late on a Saturday night. She had managed by the skin of her teeth to get the grades to go and study at university, but with the stress of home, she had missed the window to apply. As such she had much better ideas. She had been roughly planning to go as far away as she could. Looking at both Australia or Chile. But never quite got her act together to go. September came and went, and she was still at home, the half-read guide books that she had collected off eBay were neatly stacked on her desk in alphabetical order. There she was neither at university, nor swimming in the hot warm sea of Australia or working on her tan.
The cause of her indecision and lack of action was obvious to many. She had over the last twelve to eighteen months slowly been drinking more and more heavily, just because she could. It was just fun to escape her mum and Harold's sycophantic act of love over each other on the sofa and even one evening on the kitchen table. She really did feel uncomfortable eating her breakfast there. This meant in the evenings she would take a bottle of wine from the well-stocked rack in the larder and drink it all by herself in the bedroom. They never seemed to notice that she had quietly slipped away from them after dinner.
But on what had become the usual big Saturday night out with her very few friends that were remaining in town and had not gone off to university. She had really taken the opportunity to let her hair down and celebrated to excess. It had been a great night out, flaming sambucas the lot and she had thoroughly, very much 'overly' enjoyed herself dancing away until the small hours.
The good fun lasted all the way until she opened the taxi door and promptly fell out as her left leg didn't move as she instructed it to. Once she got herself and the contents of her handbag back together, she slowly got up. She then groaned and staggered across the pavement, swooping in an attempt at catching the gate post as her first marker on the way to the front door. She then meandered towards the house trying to navigate and avoid the chicane of the large plant pots that her mother had lovingly and artistically positioned years ago. As the cab drove away, she looked up to see that the lights in the hallway of their large town house were still on. She successfully cleared the pathway and then paused and took stock of the situation. There was more than a hint of incoming bad news, as what should have been a dark path was very much lit. Then she had managed far too easily to get the key in the lock, mainly as it was so brightly lit she could see it. Then she opened the door as quietly as possible, as she had the best intentions in the world of sneaking upstairs. As with many of her great exciting plans that were amazing in her head. It fell apart at the first engagement with reality. She again tripped up over her own feet, as she landed in a crumpled heap of arms and legs on the floor.
Nelly then looked up, her shoulders instantly sank further than the sorry place they were already. The first thing she got to see was her repulsive stepfather standing there in just his baggy white Y-fronts with his arms across his large fat grey haired stomach as he stood waiting for her in the hallway.
"And what time do you call this?" He boomed in his deep authoritative voice.