Hi. This is my first story. Sorry if you find language errors but i do the best to translate in english my story. Hope you enjoy. Criticism and advice are always appreciated. :)
Chapter 1:
It was a cold fall day in the middle of October. The leaves were leaving the tree branches en masse and the road surface was taking on that characteristic yellow-brown shoring. Let me introduce myself: My name is Johanna and I am 20 years old. I am 5'7" tall and weigh 55 pounds. Everyone calls it an enviable physique, especially because of my prosperous breasts and enviable curves. I don't hide that I take a certain pleasure when I draw the eyes of passers-by on me. It makes me feel beautiful and appreciated. Since my family is very wealthy, I take private lessons at home, like a sort of one-person university.
My home is gorgeous. It is a mansion with a pool, surrounded by a grove that is exclusively owned by our family. It's my little paradise, where no one can stick their nose in. That day was like any other. It was late in the afternoon and after finishing my classes I was hanging out in front of the PC, looking for new clothes to show off at family dinners and community parties. My attention was caught by a beautiful black dress, surrounded by a white silk sash at the waist that broke up the dress and gave color and contrast. I was so absorbed in the contemplation of this beautiful dress that I didn't notice my mother's knuckles drumming on my bedroom door. What brought me back to reality was her authoritative voice.
"Johanna, why don't you answer me? Come down to the living room and say hello to Agnes' replacement."