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This chapter contains watersports and piss drinking, it is twice as long as the previous chapters. Please don't ever rely on implicit consent in real life - your partner might see things differently than you!
Disclaimer: All characters are of age and purely fictitious; similarities to real human beings are not intended. Any similarity is to be regarded as accidental and done without the knowledge of the author.
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As the three women were lying in the sun after their lunch, a girl came riding along on her bicycle. With her long, shiny hair, her slender and athletic but well-rounded figure, and her - as usual - fashionable style to dress, she was the siren boys might wish to die for. She was living in the next village. At present, she was disappointed to see the group of women, here where she had thought to take a quick pee break in the bunker. She knew about the vagabond living in it; and as she did not like vagabonds, she had come up with the idea to annoy him by peeing into his treasured home and all over his very few cherished belongings. Getting closer, she was relieved to see the three women were apparently asleep and, as it seemed, mostly naked. Recognizing Marianne, she decided to take a photo of the group. She was not especially fond of Marianne, although she knew the girl liked her. She reckoned, she would be able to use these photos to extract some favors from Marianne - she always liked to have people obey to her will and didn't shy away from a little blackmail.
Putting her phone away, she descended into the bunker and discovered that she hadn't been the only one to elect the place as a favorite bathroom. 'Well,' she thought, 'If they have been peeing here, I might get another advantage: I have the effect I wanted, and if I obtained proof that the women have peed here, I get a grip on Marianne by threatening to tell her parents or the vagabond what she did here... Hm, maybe I don't even need hard evidence - let's see how she reacts. Maybe I can obtain the same effect without proof? Definitely stinks of pee in here - if only I knew she's done it!'
Returning upstairs without delay, she ran into Laura who was halfway down into the bunker. She had forgotten one of the cameras and wanted to pick it up. Laura hadn't noticed the bicycle leaning against the tree and was quite surprised to see someone around, but didn't let herself be intimidated.
"What are you doing down here?" she asked in a tone that sounded like she were the owner of the place. The same second, she thought 'Fuck, this is France - no one would believe me I'm the boss here, speaking English!'
Fortunately, the girl replied - albeit pertly: "I had to pee, so I went down here for some shelter. I realized someone is living here, and I decided to respect other people's belongings." Then she added saucily: "Are you going to deny that you have not been as polite?"
Laura was surprised to receive such a quick-witted answer in surprisingly fluent English. Instinctively, she felt the girl was not only intelligent, but also ruthlessly pursuing her personal advantage. In no way was she going to believe the girl was truly upset about finding the place imbibed in their pee - the contrast in her demeanor to Marianne's genuine empathy with the vagabond was too stark. Laura knew she had to figure out a way to divert the girl's attacking point to something else and keep herself free of harm. She couldn't accept this girl to run around boasting she had caught them pee in someone's place! First thing to do: check whether the girl lied about not having peed in the bunker. .
"Well, I see... You're playing innocent now?" Laura asked. "Sorry, but that doesn't work with me! Who says anyone peed down here? Let me see!"
Laura pushed the girl back into the bunker room, scolding:
"Ah, so you've been peeing on the mattress and now you're trying to blame us for it? Quite a nasty creature, you are! Couldn't find a better place to pee than the mattress, could you? Instead of at least peeing into a corner or so?"
Up to now, she had been convinced the girl really had peed here. But she saw that there didn't seem to be any other wet spot in the room and the mattress had been drying fast. Also, the girl seemed to be in real trouble of holding it. Actually, upon observing her opponent closer, Laura had the impression to be audience to a fine pee pee dance in an advanced state of progress. 'Well, then all I have to do is keeping the girl in here, waiting for her to lose it and watch her pee.' She mused.
But this thought was invalidated by the girl's next statement:
"Looks quite like Marianne, peeing on an innocent stranger's stuff!"
Laura almost burst into laughter. She knew this wasn't true, Marianne had tried to prevent any such thing from happening only a few hours ago. But as their visitor knew Marianne, she realized she couldn't coerce her to wet herself or pee in the bunker, nor do anything that would bring her in a position to harm Marianne by testifying to what had happened. Laura didn't feel like she wanted an investigation into what had happened today between them and their guide. She was in a dilemma - until she had a brilliant revelation: 'If the girl denigrates Marianne like this, maybe it is because it would fit into HER thinking?' she wondered.
"Come on, don't tell obvious lies. Marianne would never do anything of this sort." Laura stated. "- But I get the impression YOU'RE quite happy someone peed into this place..." she trailed of.
"Uh..."
"Because you yourself planed to do it, and now you hope to get the same effect AND blame it on someone else!" Laura pressed on.
The girl blushed and looked to the ground, embarrassed. She had been caught. But only for a moment: quickly she recovered and snapped:
"So what? I didn't do it. You can't prove anything - but I have pictures of you three lying in the sun, naked!"
Things were getting complicated, Laura admitted to herself. But on the other hand the girl had kind of confessed she had had naughty peeing plans. So how could she appease her and get the pictures? At the same time, Laura felt herself getting hot on the thought of watching their visitor go through with her plan.
"Don't make me laugh - do you really think I believe you?" Laura taunted. "How would you have taken the pictures?"
"Took them with my phone, duh!" the girl replied, getting her phone out and waving it in front of Laura.
"You've lied before - let me see the pictures or I won't believe you!" Laura said, looking inquiringly.