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A Surprise Visit 12

A Surprise Visit 12

by randymarus
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A Surprise Visit

i was nervous as a young virgin lad in a whorehouse. After a long cyber relationship, never having met in person, i stood at the door of my Mistress's abode. She'd invited me to visit Her for a long weekend. Actually, it was not so much of an invitation as a command, as i discovered attached in my e-mail a round-trip ticket to her home airport. A subsequent communication from Her offered as much explanation as i was going to get...

"It's time for U/us to meet in person. you'll arrive Friday afternoon. you can take an Uber to the address below. Bring what you'll need for a weekend excursion."

And that was that. Luckily, my calendar was empty. i knew immediately that i'd follow the provocative directive.

The next several days in preparation for my trip seemed surreal, as though i was experiencing events from the outside in. A third party observer of my own life. A phantasm, barely connected to reality. Yet, there i stood, at the door of Her lovely home, suitcase in hand, trying desperately to avoid shaking from nervousness.

She answered the door and i was astonished at Her attractiveness. You see, i'd never seen Her before...not even a photo. She was taller than i'd expected, brunette, tasteful and carefully applied make-up - lovely lashes and some shadow. Nice lips. She was leggy, wearing a short, tight skirt, sheer black leggings, high heel, open-toe sandals. A loose top with plunging neckline, no bra. Tasteful jewelry - silver earrings, necklace, bracelets, both on Her wrist and on one of Her ankles. Interesting designs, reminiscent of southwestern symbols.

i stammered a greeting, barely in control of what i was doing or saying. i stared at a beautiful visage. She'd told me once that some of Her friends told Her She looked like Hallie Jackson. i agreed. She bore a striking facial resemblance, although i thought my Mistress was a svelte version of the NBC news woman.

She got me settled in, had me deposit all my stuff in Her guest bedroom. She suggested i enjoy a shower and i did.

There was commotion in the kitchen as i prepared to present my refreshed self. Apparently, a friend of Hers was making U/us dinner. She escorted me to the dining table. He served U/us and then bowed out, explaining that he had a date of his own. His mannerisms suggested he was gay.

We sat to some grilled salmon, couscous and mixed vegetables. She had me open a bottle of German white wine from the fridge, a Rhinefalz Riesling Kabinett. i poured and She proceeded to take charge of the meal, talking about everything from the weather to politics to music, from entertainment to sports (O/our home NFL teams differed), the challenges of home ownership to how intrigued She was to finally meet me.

As dinner wrapped up She made Her way into the living room, and told me, "Rinse everything and load the dishwasher. Join Me when You're done." i eagerly followed Her edict, clumsily finding my way around the strange kitchen.

Upon completing my chores i joined Her on the couch, a luxurious, welcoming piece facing an entertainment center and a fireplace. She turned on three things - the TV, the gas fireplace and me. i wondered, how could i have ended up in the company of such a spectacularly gorgeous and compelling woman? Moreover, one who had claimed me, heart and soul, as Her thrall, Her slave, Her worshiper.

W/we watched some news, as She explained that this was a ritual for Her on this Friday evening. W/we sat side by side, sipped wine, watched and commented on the events of the day. As the news shows wound down She took U/us in a new direction.

"Pour us each another glass of wine. And then be a love and go fetch the suitcase in the guest bedroom closet."

i poured and then fetched, returning with a sizeable suitcase.

She announced out loud, "Inspection." And waited momentarily. Then She explained, "When I say 'inspection' you'll remove all your clothes and then stand at attention in front of Me. For an inspection."

She turned off the TV. She fiddled with the remote and some soft jazz percolated in the background. I recognized the lyrical approach of Lou Donaldson's alto sax. She watched me comply, promptly but nervously to Her demand of an inspection. Soon i stood there, naked as a bird, under Her gaze. "Stand up straight," She commanded. "Shoulders back. Ordinarily I'd say 'eyes ahead' but I've noticed you've been staring at Me. I give you permission to stare...wherever You want - My legs, down My top, into My eyes.

i gawked at Her, from head to toe. i ended up looking into Her eyes. Her penetrating, all-knowing eyes, glaring right back into mine. She opened the suitcase and extracted a contraption that She identified as a chastity devise, what She preferred to call a cock and ball cage. "Hands behind your back. And go ahead and watch Me do this," she offered, as She fit it over my cock and then entrapped my balls. She swiveled it into place, snapped it shut and secured it with a tiny little lock. She turned the key and then clasped the key onto Her necklace. "For safekeeping," She said. "I like My slave to be concentrating on Me and not his own gratification. This little cock cage insures that." She winked at me.

Next, She pulled out a neck collar and handed it to me. "Read the tag out loud," and i did. "brian xander - slave and property of Amanda Blair." O/our names. "Kiss it. Then read it and kiss it eleven more times."

i counted each recitation and kiss. After the eleventh recitation She secured the collar around my neck and then snapped a leash onto the collar.

"Let's take a walk," She said. "On all fours, slave." i hit the floor on all fours. She pulled gently and i followed Her. "I want to show you My sunroom. You haven't seen it yet." We walked and then, suddenly, "Heel!" She jerked on the leash. Old dog owner that i am, i recognized the command. i postured myself beside but slightly behind her. Still as stone. "Good boy," She complimented me. W/we resumed O/our walk. She resumed the Doggie command. "Heel!" again. Then She dropped the leash on the floor. "Stay," she ordered. and She walked alone to the threshold of Her sunroom.

"Pick up the leash with your mouth." I bent my head to the ground, took the leash between my lips, then gripped it more securely between my teeth.

"Come!" She called, and i shuffled toward her and entered the verdant and window-filled room.

"Give Me your leash." i presented it to Her. She took it from me. "Now sit." i swayed back on my haunches and She let the leash slacken. "I hope you appreciate My love of plants and My green thumb," She spoke.

"Wouldn't You know it, Mistress. i'm a plant person too!" She seemed pleased.

She gave me a rundown of some of Her favorites. It was indeed an impressive collection of greenery. "I'm especially proud of this one - My crenelated euphorbia." It was, indeed a magnificent specimen. Nearly five feet tall with countless arms extending from the main trunk. The two of U/us enjoyed the silence and the verdant atmosphere. Finally, She said, "Let's go." And She led me back to the couch, issuing the Heel, Stay and Come commands along the way. Arriving at the couch She dropped the leash to the floor, sat on the couch and said, "Stand." i complied.

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"Hands behind you," She reminded me. "So tell Me, thrall, what are you thinking?"

At this juncture it wasn't hard to articulate.

"i'm thinking how fortunate i am to have such an accomplished and inventive Mistress."

"Why do you say I'm accomplished?"

"You are so tuned in to my desires. I swear, it's like You can sense what turns me on. You just know how to feed what i fantasize about. You tantalize me with Your commands. You light my fire." We both groaned at the Doors' reference.

"Well, aren't you the silver-tongued slave. Keep going. What makes Me so special?"

"Just now, demanding an inspection. Making me stand naked in front of You. You put me in such a helpless condition. The cock cage. The collar and leash. And taking me for a walk, with commands along the way. It's like W/we're on a date but everything W/we do is completely dependent on Your whims."

"Ah yes, My whims. And You WILL do whatever whim pops into My head. Now, look at My sandals. i know you've been admiring them. Do you like the heels?"

"I love the look, Mistress. Very sexy!"

"Good. I want you to take them off. But get on all fours and worship them first."

"It will be an honor to worship Your sandals, Mistress."

"Good. Do it. Kiss them all over...even the soles. Make sure you kiss every square centimeter."

"Yes, Mistress, i'll do whatever you tell me to do."

Her sandals were crazy sexy. i had been marveling at how easily She moved about with those long, skinny heels. i maneuvered into position, lowering my head to down to Her feet. i kissed the straps. i lifted a foot and kissed all around. i kissed the soles. i tried my best to kiss "every square centimeter."

"The heels. Suck on the heels," she told me. And i did.

"Pretend that it's a cock," She said without further explanation. i did my best. i sucked, kissed and licked with alacrity. i paid great attention to each foot and sandal before finally removing them and setting them aside.

"Oh, you're a good slave. So obedient! Now, sit on the floor with your back to the couch. Close your eyes."

i sensed that she was fiddling with objects from the drawer of a coffee table. And She was adjusting Her clothes. i felt Her sit behind me. She draped Her now naked legs over my shoulders, Her crotch against the back of my head.

"Okay. You can open your eyes." She placed a towel on my lap and placed Her feet on it. She had indeed removed Her leggings. "Foot treatment, slave. An emery file for some rough skin on My heels. Then a massage with the lotion there."

i'm no dummy. i figured out what She wanted. i lifted one of Her feet and began filing the slightly rough heel. It wasn't that bad. And Her foot was a thing of beauty. i proceeded with the pedicure. She initiated new conversation while i worked away.

"I'm curious, slave. What did you think when I answered the door, when you first arrived?" i did not hesitate.

"i was floored, how unbelievably sexy You are. Words fail me. You're more beautiful and alluring than i'd imagined. I was blown away. my emotions got the best of me. i got all choked up, wondering how, somehow, You've made me Your slave and You're allowing me to worship You as my Goddess. And that W/we've decided together that i'll answer to You as my Mistress."

"Oh, i like it. Tell me more. Start with the Goddess part."

"Well..." i paused and gathered my thoughts as best i could. "Angelic. A Goddess is angelic...and You are. You really impress me as the divine personified. And You've probably noticed, i don't mean to glare, but i just can't take my eyes off of You."

"And i'll let you admire Me more in just a bit. And by the way, you're doing a fine job on My feet. That feels really good. You've got good hands." i rubbed a third application of lotion into her foot. "You were saying...about how You see Me as a Goddess."

"Yeah. Okay. On the Goddess front. You are a Goddess! It's like You emanate this glow of....i don't know." i was stuck, trying to describe my fervor. "You emanate..." i continued to struggle. She seemed in no hurry to rescue me. "You have this aura of...i don't know...it's almost like a supernatural, mystical power. It's transcendent. Other-worldly." She smiled and answered, deliberately, seriously.

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"Yeah. You know, thrall, i've told you that W/we sometimes have this connection. Like W/we read each other's minds. It's happened a lot in O/our correspondence. And now that you're here...what you describe is exactly how I feel about Myself when W/we communicate. I feel it too, right now even! I am truly your Goddess. i feel like I have this aura of supremacy. I should be on an altar, with you genuflecting before Me." She laughed and then paused. "Now tell me about this Mistress."

"Oh...my Mistress...Mistress Amanda, You're strict, demanding. Firmly planted in the here and now. You seem to enjoy ordering me around, almost as much as i enjoy fulfilling Your commands. I realize i must obey...whatever You say. And then, of course, i fantasize about ever more daring scenarios, in which Your commands become ever more far out, even outlandish. i dream of the kinds of things where i say to myself, "oh, surely She wouldn't make me..." knowing full well that if You actually say it, i'd have no choice but to obey. So, whenever i tell You that i'll do anything You say, my imagination just soars...and i get a little bit scared."

W/we conversed like this for some time, explaining how W/we each relish O/our roles in the relationship. And how precious a Domme/sub relationship is. All at once She said, "I think that's enough for the foot rub. Stand, slave!" i placed the file and lotion on the side table. "Kneel, slave," she commanded. i assumed the position.

"I told You earlier you could stare at Me. And I keep catching you peeking down My top, catching a peek up My skirt, admiring My legs. Keep it up! I give you permission. Feast your eyes - give in to what you want to do. Under more conventional circumstances it would poor taste to stare, to try to get a glimpse of My breasts, to crane your neck for a better view. To gaze at My shoes, My legs. With fear of getting caught! But I'm telling you, go ahead. I want you to admire. And wonder if you'll actually get to see!"

Then silence. I took Her up on Her offer. I ogled, like a lecherous perv. Though i'd been looking at Her face, i really hadn't studied it. i hadn't fixed my gaze to study Her eyes, the windows to Her soul. Then i did. She looked back, in silence. i thought of the old adage, "Still waters run deed," and i realized what a thoughtful, self-aware, deliciously complex woman sat before me. And Her beautifully shaped legs. The legs of a runner. Well-defined. Long. Smooth. Her skirt was scandalously short. Sitting as She was, the hem was barely covering Her crotch. I tried to peek down that blouse. I saw the upper curvature of one of Her breasts. Some modest cleavage. i wanted desperately to see more. i wanted to see a nipple. i fantasized about being allowed to kiss and flick my tongue over one of Her nipples, all while wondering what they might look like. i was lost in the ogling experience. She decided i'd seen enough.

"Beg!" She commanded forcefully. She grabbed the leash, still connected to my collar. She pulled it taut. "Beg, slave!" She didn't tell me what to beg for so i spoke my mind.

"Please, Mistress, will You give me a peek of Your breasts, and maybe let me kiss Your nipples?" i folded my hands in front of me, like a penitent acolyte in a religious ceremony.

"Well, well. A bit audacious for a slave, but I did tell you to beg." my eyes averted to that loose-fitting top with a deep neckline. She grasped the bottom hem of Her blouse in Her two hands and pulled on it. The fabric stretched over Her breasts, outlining their shape and revealing Her nipples.

"Too bad i've got you all caged up. I might have you masturbate while I tease you." Then she pulled down one shoulder of Her blouse, revealing one of Her breasts. Not large - just right, i thought to myself. The perfectly proportioned Goddess. Like half of a grapefruit. And a smallish, perky nipple. "Bend down here, slave. Kiss My nipple."

Still kneeling, i braced my hands on either side of Her, on the couch, and lowered my head. Ever so gently, and with huge gratitude, i kissed Her nipple. i held the pucker and then flickered my tongue. She didn't object. i pursed my lips and sucked tenderly. i wanted the sensation never to end. i heard a barely audible moan, deep in tone, from deep within Her. It was such a turn-on for me. i was in heaven. She ended it after a minute or so.

She reached into Her suitcase and pulled out a small pipe. She began filling it with some marijuana. She held it to my lips, sparked the flame in a lighter and told me to inhale.

"You'll like this," She assured me. "A very nice, energy-inducing sativa. i took a toke and then She joined me. And that was it, one deep draw apiece.

She then reached again into Her suitcase and pulled out a blindfold and a long riding crop. She held the tip of the crop to my lips. "Kiss it," she ordered. i kissed it with reverence.

She placed the blindfold over my eyes and secured it behind my head. The weed buzz began to take hold. i was a little disoriented but deeply aroused, unsure of what was to come.

Then She began slapping various parts of my body with the riding crop. my cheeks, my arms, my chest, especially my nipples, and my caged cock and balls. She leaned toward me and kissed my nipples, then flickered Her tongue on one, then the other. She stood and maneuvered behind me. She swatted my butt cheeks and my back. "Spread your legs," She told me. And from behind She swatted my entombed genitals, with greater force than i'd have been able to tolerate without the armor.

She set aside the riding crop and attended to Her attire. i could tell She was undressing. And that She was moving to sit on the back of the couch, Her back to the wall.

"Kneel, slave." i dropped into position. "Now lean forward and grab each side of Me for balance. You're about to worship Your Goddess. Your Mistress commands it."

Per Her instructions i got a handful of each side of Her hips and bent down until me head was between Her legs. The intoxicating aroma of sex. She was perfect in so many ways, i was unsurprised that She'd emanate such a divine fragrance. i inhaled.

"Kiss Your Goddess's pussy. Show Me how much you appreciate the honor."

i proceeded to impart the most delicate, worshipful, tender kisses on Her. She interrupted my adoration.

"Now, stick your tongue out as far as you possibly can. And place the back of your tongue - way in the back, as far back as you can, as low as you can on My pussy." I tried to follow Her instructions as closely as i could.

"Good, now, put as much pressure as you can from the back of your tongue, press as hard as you can, then glide it as slowly as you can upward, to the top of My pussy and My clit. Take your time. Nice and slow."

Again, i tried to follow her instructions. For me it was a novel approach to oral servitude. But it made intuitive sense once i began. Over and over, i traced the pathway, the entire length of her pussy, maximizing the pressure on the back of my tongue. She offered tips and pointers with each lap, until She seemed satisfied with my technique. And then She began pushing back, grinding into my own movements. She groaned.

"Not bad for starters," She finally uttered. "You're trainable. "Now, I want you to fold your tongue, right down the middle, so that you create a "V". And i want you to make a crevice. Find My clit and nestle it in the crevice. Like you're making walls on either side of it."

Once again, i tried to do what she said, desperate to please Her and show my devotion. i sensed i was clumsy but She was patient and kept guiding me.

"Pretend like you're trying to masturbate My clit. Move your tongue in and out. Get it nice and wet and then masturbate My clit."

On and on i went, time after time, with Her careful coaching. i must have been doing something right because there was greater and greater lubrication and rigidity of Her clit. She bucked back and said, "Yes, that's it, keep going," and i felt like i was finally catching on to what was for me a novel technique. She grunted a deep, guttural moan and i thought that maybe, just maybe, my efforts were rising to the occasion.

She settled into a more relaxed breathing and told me, "you are so eager and willing to learn. You are an excellent slave." And with that, She pulled me up and kissed me. And kissed me. And kissed me some more. Again and again. Ardent, passionate, warm kisses.

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