So, I just recently joined Literotica after reading and listening to stories for years. But how to start? Just this morning on the train I decided to give it a go and it led to something incredible that I thought you all might appreciate.
I was sitting in a window seat on Amtrak (I commute a long way to the office), working on the beginning of an erotic story when a woman stowed her coat and bag in the luggage rack above sat down next to me. She was dressed to impress, as women commuters often are: purple silk blouse tucked into a slinky black skirt falling just above the knee and slit up the side. I glanced over as she sat down and we exchanged smiles. Then she turned to a legal pad, and I turned back to my story, hoping I could angle the screen so she couldn't see what I was writing.
Well, just as I was getting into narrating a particularly hot part, feeling my cock growing hard inside my suitpants, I looked over at my companion in the aisle seat and caught her eyes on fixed my laptop. She quickly averted her eyes and cleared her throat. I probably blushed, worrying that she might make a scene or express outrage at what a stranger was writing just inches away from her.
But then I got a mischievous idea. I decided to scrap my story and begin writing about my neighbor. I wrote about her blouse and her skirt and how hot she looked and how lucky her coworkers were to spend the day looking at her gorgeous tits and ass and how much I wish she'd just reach over and start stroking my cock through my pants while we careened through central New Jersey on the way to the office. And then I glanced back over and confirmed my hopes: she was reading again, and this time she didn't avert her eyes.
On the contrary, I noticed that her left hand had fallen across her chest, and her left thumb was lightly flicking her right nipple through her blouse as her eyes roamed over my text. And so I wrote about what she was doing. And then began an incredible dance between us, with me sometimes passively narrating her movements, and sometime guiding them with my written suggestions. Soon both arms were crossed over her stunning, full tits, with both thumbs rubbing her nipples, circling them, lightly pinching them, stroking them. Before long the nipples were standing out, peeking over the top of what -- from the strap revealed on her right shoulder -- looked to be a black lace bra, the kind with delicate cups that present a woman's breasts to the world for display, with the nipples barely obstructed by fabric.