This is my first attempt at a submission. If you're looking for a quick, upfront bang tale, it might not be for you. I like stories that simmer, then explode. I welcome comments/critiques. Also, if this goes well, it might be an ongoing thread. So the end of this story may only be the beginning.
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Jamie was the black sheep of her family. Her father was a devout pastor, her mother a huge supporting factor in the community, and her sisters were models of virtue, she did things a little was smart, beautiful, outgoing, successful, got along with everyone, and commanded everyone's respect at work. The only reason why she could be considered a black sheep was that she acted like her utterly respectable family only 98% of the time. If they had known about the other 2%, it would have rocked the family's idea of itself to the core. After that analysis, black sheep isn't the right description. Actually, Amy was probably the wolf in sheep's clothing.
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Introducing Jamie:
The beginning of the year had been extremely stressful for Jamie and her boyfriend Will. They both worked at the same boutique investment bank. Technically, they weren't supposed to have interoffice relationships, but everyone in the office knew to keep their damn mouths shut about it. The two acted more professional than anyone else, and no one wanted to lose either of their talents. The couple could basically print money and keep investors happy even when the portfolio seemed on the brink of oblivion.
Jamie and Will met at the firm. He was an impressive kid too: all the right schools, played the right sports, smart as a whip, and a handsome guy. They immediately hit it off and within two or three months of working together, their work lunches turned to after work drinks, after work drinks turned to romantic dinners, and romantic dinners turned to long nights in bed.
Jamie truly was a professional. She graduated from an Ivy, did exceedingly well there, and then started at the firm. There was never a grammar error in an email, her work was entered on time, and she looked the part. Looking the part can be difficult for a female in finance. They had to compete with the good-looking, successful guys who frequently took advantage of gorgeous women after work. The trick to Jamie's look was that she looked beautiful but made large efforts to present the power of beauty and not become Type B submissive beauty who was just a hopeful wife.
At 5'7, Jamie was tall but not too tall. She usually kept her dirty blond hair in a ponytail at work. A normal day at the office would see her wearing nice dress slacks that hugged her ass, but would allow a little room as they ran down her long, slender legs. They were enough to reveal that she had an amazing figure, but not enough to cause whispers. On top, she opted for a tight women's button up work shirt. Her full Bs, possibly even tipping toward a C cup gave her more than a full handful up top, but again, nothing to cause whispers if she passed down the hall. In sum, she blended in perfectly and gave no one the impression that she was anything other than a conservative businesswoman.
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"Uhh," Jamie thought to herself as she left work at 11:25 pm late that Wednesday afternoon. She was worn out. Physically drained. Mentally exhausted. "Just two more days. In two days' time, I'll be on vacation at the beach." She knew she was having 'light at the end of the tunnel' fatigue—the kind of tired where you know you're so close to something and every moment between now and then seems to take infinitely too long. That tension had been slowly building for weeks. Between the long hours and the stress of working in finance when the whole market at any moment could ruin all their hard work, Jamie felt the need for a release. And the more Jamie began to admit it to herself, she knew she needed a big release.
The vacation had been planned by some of her high school friends. They had all grown up in the same school area (some going to public, others private), the same church (Jamie's father's church), and the same group of church friends. With all that described, Jamie enjoyed the fact that they were her long-time friends who happened to be church-ey. These girls weren't saints. They all knew they had lost their virginity by their freshmen years in college, they went out drinking, and would make mistakes with boys. But overall, they were good girls and didn't have random flings. Of the four girls going to the beach, only one didn't have a serious boyfriend—Claire. These were the types of girls that she could present to her family and receive approval, but she could also explore some of the more unseemly nightlife options without too much of their judgment.
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Friday afternoon finally arrived. Jamie had taken a half day so that the group could start off around noon and make the seven hour drive to the beach in time for a fresh seafood dinner and a night on the town. Jamie stopped by Will's office, closed the door behind her, and wrapped around him giving him a long, deep "I'll miss you, and see you in a few days" kiss. Will understood how happy she was to be taking a much needed break, and he wished that it was the two of them that would be headed out for a long, relaxing weekend. He knew that it would just be another weekend where he'd probably put in about fifteen hours of work over the weekend.
Jamie piled into the car with the other three girls and they headed off. Rachel was driving. It was very like her to drive. Socially, she took charge of the girls' activities. She had a fairly mundane job, and Jamie let her organize everything because she was tired of doing that every minute she was at work. Delegate responsibility of thinking of what to do: That was one of Jamie's first feelings of release for the weekend.
When the girls arrived at their hotel, they quickly unpacked in order to enjoy as much of the night as they could. It was a typical beach condo. It was a one bedroom, one and a half bath place. In the living room, there was a fold out couch and a very comfortable looking recliner. As the girls unpacked, Emily started to twirl around some of the bathing suits she had bought for the trip. Emily was a classic flirt. She'd tease men she met, and every blue moon she would let them take her home. She wasn't an angel, but then again she was a lot closer to an angel than a slut. Needless to say, some of the suits Emily brought were on the risqué side. Emily was a voluptuous girl. She was two inches shorter than Jamie, but outweighed her by twenty pounds. It wasn't chubby pounds, it was woman pounds. She had full breasts that had to have been DD and full hips. If she wore some of these things around on the beach it was going to attract attention.
That night the girls enjoyed their dinner and drinks. All the girls had a pretty good buzz, but they also had the fatigue from the work week piled on top of a seven hour drive to the beach. They headed back to their room about one in the morning. Emily and Rachel took the bedroom. After Jamie thought about it for a second, she realized that there really wasn't even a discussion about it. That was mildly annoying, because they were all paying the same amount of money and they would be much more comfortable. After thinking about if for a minute, Jamie gave up the thought. "That makes sense" she told herself. "Of anyone, Emily will probably need the bedroom for a visitor and Rachel put all this together so she probably deserves it."
The slight off-putting fact about this arrangement was that Jamie was now tagged with Claire. Jamie loved Claire and thought of her as one of her best friends, but there was no way she could get around the feeling that she was hopeless. She still lived at home with her parents. She had a job in "fashion," and that was exactly what she wanted, but she was floor rep in a local boutique—a glorified checkout girl who occasionally gave fashion tips to bewildered husbands or fashion-ignorant passers-through. Further, Claire had never really had a real boyfriend. She had hooked up with guys from time to time, but even that was limited. There were a few reasons for that: 1) she was extremely average looking (not bad but far from good, 2) she didn't like putting out (so guys rarely made the effort), and 3) she didn't drink much and when she did it was lightly (so she didn't even have "woops" moments). Guys referred to her as the "Mother Hen" in the presence of women and "a cockblock that would stop Ray fucking Lewis" when amongst the guys.
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The next morning Rachel, Claire, and I headed down to the beach around 11:00. Emily had drank more than the rest of us the night before and needed to sleep a little later. As we left she told us she'd be down after she showered and got ready. So we headed out with our towels, wraps, and a small cooler. We had only brought a pitcher of margaritas down to the beach with us, and we knew it wouldn't last for more than a few hours. We planned this on purpose so that at about 2 or 3 o'clock it would force us to come back up to the condo. That way, we would avoid drinking too much and prevent serious sunburns the first day.
The next thing we know it was around noon, and Emily appears on the horizon walking towards us; however, she wasn't alone. Trailing right behind her were four guys. Another thing I immediately noticed was that two guys had large coolers hoisted up on their shoulders. They were all skinny, very pasty, and had crew cuts, but overall they were pretty cute. It was fairly easy to comprehend why these guys decided to follow Emily. Her breasts were overflowing in her top. Not only was there a massive line of cleavage, but base string was so stretched that her tits were coming out the bottom.
I looked at my own suit and considered myself downright Puritanical. But then I did a quick look down, and I could see that I had two things to be proud of. "I have nice tits" I affirmed to myself. After a few more seconds of admiration, I also noticed my nipples were saying hello. Between the immediate effects of the tequila in the two margaritas and the boys, I was getting a little turned on. For a split second I felt a strong stirring in all my right places. I could feel the pressure of the sand pushing up between my legs and the cool breeze blowing across exposed skin...and it made me quiver.
Emily got up to us, unfurled her towel, and sat down. She introduced us to the guys: Ryan, Matt, Andy, and Will. They all turned out to be Coast Guard guys who all had a weekend's leave. "Hey, Will is Jamie's boyfriend's name," Claire exclaimed. Emily and Rachel shot her a cold glance. They didn't want to scare away the cute guys who obviously seemed nice enough at first meeting. I didn't care, I was kinda glad that that was out in the open. The comment did attract Will's attention. He laughed and told us that with a name that great he must be some guy.
Then Will did something unexpected. He took off his shirt, as would be expected. Then, the next article to go were his tearaway basketball warm up pants—the kinds with the snaps on the side. Underneath, he was rocking a Euro-style brief bathing suit. It wasn't a full speedo, but they were tight, very short, and neon orange. "Lifeguard On Duty Ladies!" he yelled. All of us immediately both laughed and began to wonder what we had gotten ourselves into.
Immediately, Claire went back to her book as the guys unpacked their stuff. I noticed Emily and Rachel begin assessing the guys. Even though they both had boyfriends, I knew they weren't going to pass up the chance to check out the items on display. As I was passing judgment on them in my mind, I found my eyes going back to Will. More specifically, I went back to checking out the package. It takes a pretty confident guy to rock something like the banana boat. To be honest, I thought he was pulling it off pretty well.