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Zip me down, kiss me there
I woke up around midday and got out of bed careful not to wake Eve. I was fully erect when walking down the stairs thinking about the slow and loving fuck I had with Eve when she came home from her night shift. My morning wood was also due to the memories of Angel in her hot outfit.
After making a strong coffee, I checked my new mail account and was glad to see a new message "The rulez".
Dear slave,
Before we go any further, you should read and acknowledge the following rules:
1. My identity is Mine and Mine only. It is up to Me to decide with whom I share it and I'm not sharing it with you. Any attempt on your behalf to reveal it will be the end of us. No excuses, no turning back.
2. Our secret relationship is ours. No one should know about it, unless those few female slaves I choose. Unless you break the first rule, Eve will never find out.
3. You will worship Me in every possible way. Part of your worshipping is your total and swift obedience. Another part is thanking Me for any order I give you.
4. You are Mine. Only Eve can make that same statement. Don't ever dare cheat on one of Us.
5. Shave. And not just your face.
Your Mistress,
Angel
PS: read this mail carefully a couple of times and think about your answer. I want you to reply to Me with due respect.
"Apart from the first and last item, I don't see any issue." I thought. "How am I going to explain the shaving to Eve and will I be able to control my curiosity?"
I wrote an email back to Angel.
Dear Mistress Angel,
For starters, thank you for the superb get together of last night. My cock is throbbing thinking back of you and our fucking.
I want to acknowledge my consent with all of the rules stated in your email.
I hope we can meet up pretty soon, I look forward to savouring you again. I'm free again tonight.
Your slave,
Jake
PS: thank you for the wonderful picture you sent me. I will memorize it so I have you in mind all of the time.
I opened Angel's previous email and stared lustfully at my sperm dripping into Angel's mouth. I was jerking off but saving my seed in case I needed to satisfy Angel's insatiable appetite for swallowing tonight.
I read my mail again and thought about her rules again. I couldn't imagine I'd agree to them if it weren't for Angel. Eve would never be able to get me into this, she's way to submissive and passive. I read her mail again and then it dawned on me. I edited my answer and used appropriate case for Her, my Mistress, my Angel.
I went into the bathroom to shave as Angel had ordered me to do. I first shaved the stubble on my face, changed the blade and applied the foam with the shaving brush after having trimmed my pubic hair. I carefully shaved my balls and dick leaving my pubic hair untouched above my dick. Washing off all remaining foam, I loved the bald feeling immediately.
I dressed and went out to the local store to get some food to prepare a light but delicious meal for Eve later this evening before she went to work again. I couldn't resist checking out all women in the store trying to match them with Angel.
Not paying attention, I bumped into my neighbour Natalie who lived on the other side of the block. Their house had a limited view on our backyard and she could therefore have seen me during my nightly escapades while looking out through the window on the attic. She would need eagle eyes to see me through the treetops, but it was possible.
"Oh I'm sorry. Are you ok?" I asked.
"Yeah sure, no worries." Natalie answered, "you were obviously distracted."
Natalie had been a neighbour for a few years and the four of us regularly got together. We knew each other quite well and my mind raced to match Angel to Natalie. Apart from her hair, it could have been her. But then again, wearing a wig would certainly add to the mystery of Angel.
"Yeah indeed. I drifted off while shopping and did not see you coming around the corner. How's life?"
"Doing just fine, a little tired maybe. Alex and I went out yesterday and we both got home deep into the night. Alex even stayed later than I did, but what could I expect? He was out with some of his friends on a bachelor party. And I had a wonderful girls night out. He's still sound asleep now."
"So is Eve, or at least I hope she's still asleep. She had another night shift at the hospital and I'm here for some food to prepare for her."
"So am I, what's cooking tonight?"
"I don't know yet, but why don't we get together this evening so we can have a light supper the four of us?"
"That's a great idea, we'll do the cooking. At least we can both have some company for the afternoon."
"Deal! Come on, let's check what the both of us can gather here and head to our place."
Natalie turned around and my eyes moved slowly over her body. She could definitely be Angel. Same height and figure, equally large tits and hot as hell. She was wearing a very tight fitting jeans covered by brown leather boots to just below her knees. Her tight fitting green leather jacket was opened to navel level and was pressed open by the largeness of her boobs. The white blouse showed some nice cleavage but not too much to be slutty. Her brown curly hair cascaded nicely around her face and reached the tops of her massive globes.
After we bought all we needed, we got to our place half an hour later and put our stuff in the fridge. Natalie took off her jacket and I noticed she was wearing pink lingerie underneath. I opened a bottle of champagne and poured us a drink.
"Aren't you cold wearing just a blouse in winter?"
"Nah, I am just fine. My jacket is warm enough and since I am Scandinavian, I'm used to lower temperatures."
"Oh really? That's new for me. So you're like a polar bear, right?"
She gave me a sly smile and responded: "Well, not really. The only hair I've got is on my head and it isn't white now is it?"
This was the first time she was this blunt with me. I actually started thinking she was coming on to me the way she was fooling around.
"Well, I can't tell. Maybe you're lying..."
She chuckled and said: "do you like going to the sauna?"
"Yes I do, but Eve doesn't like it so I hardly go. Why do you want to know? Or is this just a way to change the topic?"
"Not at all Jakey... why don't you join me next Thursday to my favourite sauna? Thursdays is 'no swimsuits day' and you can find out for yourself. I mean, for us Scandinavians, going to the sauna always means going fully bare. What's the point of wearing anything at all in there? It's 90 fucking degrees!"
"Well I'd love to and actually I'm flattered you ask me to join you. But I..."
"Yeah yeah yeah. Shut up already. You're worried Eve wouldn't want you to go right? You know what? Alex hates the sauna and I'd love to have some male company I can trust for a change you know. It's really annoying to be a tough bitch all of the time shaking off all of those horny guys staring and flirting. I don't go to the sauna to be picked up and get laid. And going with another woman doesn't help at all either. So come on Jake, be my man for once and I won't tell anyone."
I sat silent for a couple of seconds and got up. I walked over to the counter and found Eve's work schedule. She had a late shift on Thursday so it was feasible to go along with Natalie without too much trouble.
"Eve has to work Thursday evening so we could go, but I still have some doubts."
"Like what Jake? I hope you're not going to back out just because the two of us are going to be naked together? It's no big deal really. I don't mind you see me naked and I sure as hell don't mind seeing you either. It's not like we're going to have sex right?"
"No that's not the point. I just don't want to be embarrassed or embarrass you if I respond to your body."
"Oh that's cool you know. I'm quite assured you won't respond since you'll be too nervous anyway your first time."
"Well I guess we have a deal then."
"I'm sure we do. I'll be here around 7 next Thursday and we'll go together. That way I'm sure you don't embarrass me by not showing up."
I filled both glasses again and raised my glass for a toast. Natalie raised hers as well but held it a few inches from mine.
"Seven years of bad sex if you don't look me in the eyes Jake."
We looked each other in the eyes while toasting and kept eye contact while taking a sip. I was actually looking forward to next Thursday. I would know for sure if Natalie had a tattoo. Although somewhere I felt Natalie wouldn't be Angel. She wanted to keep her identity a secret didn't she. But on the other hand I felt some sexual tension between the two of us that wasn't there before.
"Oh hello Natalie. Good to see you." Eve spoke when she came in.
She walked up to the kitchen table still wearing her flimsy nightie and I hugged her firmly. I squeezed her buttocks slipping my hands underneath her nighty and kissed her good morning.