This story is in celebration of National Nude Day. I didn't quite get it done in time for the contest, but I'm publishing it anyway. Comments are always welcome.
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The doorbell rang.
Jackie Jerelsen walked briskly on four-inch heels over a fine-grained wood-plank floor to open the house's massive door. The 10 o'clock potential buyer had arrived, right on time. She threw her shoulders back and put her game face on. It was time to make a sale.
The house was, by far, the pride of all her listings -- a high modern-style mansion of angular white walls, pale maple floors, and vast, floor-to-ceiling windows opening to expansive views over a high bluff, looking over a river below. The house was much admired, but it was expensive, too. Few people could afford it. But she had little doubt that the man with whom she had her current appointment-- Victor Maxon -- could afford it. She just had to convince him to buy it.
She had the sales chops to do it. She knew it. She was the number two sales agent in her realty firm's regional office, close on the heels of her long-time rival and nemesis, Cynthia Beele. If she got this sale done, Jackie would beat Cynthia and be number one for the company's fiscal year, which ended on July 31, just over two weeks away.
She opened the door and gave Victor Maxon her biggest and most confident smile.
"Mr. Maxon!" she said. "Hello. I'm Jackie."
She almost faltered in her delivery. Victor Maxon was disarmingly handsome -- very tall, with wavy hair and broad shoulders, a powerful jaw line, and piercing eyes. He wore dark slacks of a fine wool and a neatly pressed cotton blue shirt. He radiated money and confidence, but he also projected an air of casualness, even indifference, as though he was keenly aware of his success but didn't care if anyone else knew about it. He carried a slim, dark briefcase. He had come by himself, unrepresented by a real estate agent of his own.
"You're right on time," Jackie said. Her voice sounded thinner and less confident to her than she wanted it to. She beckoned with her hand and Maxon walked through the door.
"I'm always on time," he said. "I said I'd be here at ten, and I'm a man of my word. And please call me Victor."
"OK Victor." Jackie turned away from him to lead him to the kitchen, where she expected to begin the house tour. She was aware, as she walked ahead of him, of the brevity of the gray skirt she had chosen to wear that day. It was fashionable, and form-fitting, and it showed a lot of leg. She had asked around about Victor Maxon before his visit, and she felt sure this was the best skirt to wear to get his full attention. She imagined his eyes on her firm, rounded ass as she walked ahead of him.
"I heard that about you," she said. "That you keep your word. You have a good reputation."
"You did your homework," he replied as he set his briefcase down on the kitchen floor. "I did too. I heard that you're very good at what you do, and honest. On your company website you're listed as number two in sales in your office. Right behind Cynthia Beele."
"You saw that? You really did do your homework." Jackie pivoted on her high heels on the floor to face Victor again. She was ready to show him around. He seemed to be in no hurry, though. He looked intently at her.
"I saw Cynthia yesterday," he said.
Jackie was startled. She hadn't known that. "You did?"
"Yes. At another house. On Crawford Avenue. You know the one? She showed it to me yesterday."
Jackie knew that house well. It rivaled the house she was showing right now in opulence and size -- and in price. It hit her in the gut, suddenly, how important this sale was. Whoever sold her house to Victor Maxon would win the realtor of the year prize in her firm's regional office -- and the recognition and substantial bonus that would go with the win.
Jackie wanted that bonus, badly.
Jackie resolved to herself to beat Cynthia.
Putting on her best smile and hiding her thoughts about the competition with Cynthia, Jackie showed Victor around the house. She took him through the living room and dining room, inspected the kitchen with him, took him around the back yard and showed off the seemingly endless views from it, and then escorted Victor upstairs to look at the bedrooms. She started with the master bedroom and then showed him the guest bedrooms. She knew that Victor was single, and she was surprised that he was interested in buying a house with so many rooms.
But, as she was aware, rich men often wanted more than they needed. And Victor Maxon was rich. He, too, was in the real estate business -- he had been buying and developing land in the area for over 20 years. He was famous in the industry as a shrewd operator and tough negotiator. It was said that he never made a bad deal.
They entered one of the guest bedrooms. Out of the corner of her eye Jackie noticed Victor running his gaze up and down her body. It felt like she was being undressed, but she didn't wholly mind. Cynthia might have been her senior as a realtor, but Jackie had a better figure, and she knew her looks gave her an advantage over Cynthia. She threw her shoulders back and her chest out and knew that as she passed by Victor, he would be looking at her firm and full breasts, encased in and molded by a cream blouse, in profile.
She felt a twinge of guilt at what she was doing, but just a twinge. She was a realtor. A saleswoman. The sellers had entrusted her the task of selling their house at a good price, and she was bound and determined to do it. And her fee would be significant. So, too, would be the bonus from her firm if she beat Cynthia Beele as the realtor of the year.
She turned around again to face Victor and held her hands out to show the room to him, but he wasn't looking at her. He was looking off somewhere else, into the depths of the room, with a distant and hard-to-read expression on his face.
"A pity I don't have any kids," he said. "So many nice bedrooms. But I have many friends, Jackie, in many places, and they can visit me. This room would be a nice room for them to stay."
Jackie nodded and almost spoke, but Victor interrupted her.
"You have kids, don't you, Jackie?" he asked. Now he looked at her, with steady and almost unblinking eyes. Jackie felt uneasy.
"I do," she said. "Two. How'd you know?"
"I do my homework, like I said. You have one that's about to go off to college, don't you?"
"I do. My son Matthew. He's going to Duke next year. I'm very proud of him. I have a daughter, Lillian, who has two more years of high school."
"Duke," Victor replied. "A private school. Very expensive tuition. That's a lot of money to pay for college, even for a successful realtor. And another child will be going off to college, not far behind. You've got your hands full."
It was unnerving to Jackie that Victor seemed to have such a clear view into her own needs. It was true that Jackie was doing very well as a realtor, but the upcoming expenses for college were going to be enormous, and she knew that her deadbeat ex-husband would be no help. He'd lost his last job and could barely make his minimal child support payments already. There was no chance he was going to contribute to paying for the children's college. Jackie knew it was up to her to do that, and she fretted about being able to cover the expenses in full.
It was cool in the house, but Jackie could swear she felt a bead of sweat on her forehead. Nobody ever made her sweat, but somehow Victor Maxon did.
"Why don't we continue the tour?" she asked, and she led the way through the rest of the house.
They finished the tour in the kitchen, where they began.
"So, what do you think?" Jackie asked. "It's an amazing house, isn't it?"
"It's an excellent house," Victor replied, slowly. "You've done an excellent job showing it off. I'm definitely interested."
"That's great!" she said. "I'd be happy to answer any more questions about it."
Victor paused, for a long time.
"I do have a question, Jackie," he said.
He paused again.
"Do you know what day it is?"
Jackie was nonplussed. Victor Maxon was very hard for her to read.
"It's Tuesday," she said.
"Well, I don't mean that. I mean, do you know what's special about this particular Tuesday?"
Jackie vaguely recalled that there was something unusual about this day -- something odd -- but she couldn't remember what it was.
"I don't know," she confessed at last.
"It's National Nude Day," Victor said, with a thin smile and eyes wide and steady on Jackie's face.
"Oh, I didn't know that," Jackie said, not knowing what else to say and wondering where this was going.
"Ah," said Victor. "I thought everybody knew. Yes, it's National Nude Day. So, I assume, since you didn't know about it, that you have no plans to celebrate it?"
"Oh no," Jackie said, trying to keep her voice serious and steady and feeling more uncomfortable by the moment. She laughed uneasily. "Do you?"
"Oh yes," Victor said, looking away from her, through the large window to the river beyond it, saying nothing more.
He was silent again, unnerving Jackie.
"What's your plan?" she asked.
Victor turned his eyes back on Jackie.
"It involves you," he said.