I have long wanted to write a storyline that is different to anything else that has been published on this site. This is it.
Although the central theme of the publication is poker, I have constructed the story so that it also works for those who have no interest in that subject and who wish to skip those sections.
A number of the situations have been inspired by some of the small band of authors whose work I immensely admire. I have attempted to occasionally incorporate a flavour of their imagination in this story, in tribute to them. Without their inspiration, this story would not have been told.
This is my first attempt at writing and I know that having completed the novel, I have learnt so much more than I knew at the outset. Two areas of feedback are welcomed:
1. Encouragement that will inspire me to write more... and constructive criticisms that will help me improve.
2. Voting that will help me assess the enjoyment factor.... or otherwise.
CHAPTER TWO: VEGAS AWAITS
It was the night of the tournament. There were one hundred and twenty-two entrants, all of whom were looking for their own piece of glory. Three seats at the World Series were on offer, together with two 'consolation' cash prizes for those in fourth and fifth position. But whilst those consolation prizes would further help Daniel's poker bank balance, and significantly so, there was only one prize he had in mind. That was a seat at the World Series.
That was even more important now, he realised, following Grace's comment about Lauren. It felt like a challenge to his male ego... no pressure there, then, he thought, but if anything he was even more focused as he sat in front of his computer. He leant back in the chair awaiting the tournament bell that would soon burst forth, signalling the impending start of a journey to his destiny. He was so concentrated that he hardly noticed when Grace silently padded out of the bedroom.
Her artificial rasping cough, designed to gain his attention, jerked him from his thoughts. He gave a little jump of surprise and swung his black, low-backed computer chair in her direction. She had deliberately adopted a provocative stance, her slim back resting against the bedroom door and tanned hand resting on her shapely hip. Daniel's eyes widened when he saw her pose, and he gave a low whistle as his eyes surveyed the small, black, cocktail dress she was wearing.
"You look fantastic," he blurted, almost involuntarily.
"Thank you," Grace purred, not altogether appreciatively, crossing her tanned arms whilst maintaining the pose.
She slowly pushed herself up and away from the door and took a single step forward, arching her back so as to emphasise the cleavage of her breasts that were prominently displayed over the low cut top.
"Would you like to come with me tonight," she said, her soft voice deliberately low, knowing in advance what the answer would be.
"I can't, Grace," he replied, raising an eyebrow at the question. "You know that."
"Do I?" she asked, her voice heavy with disdain. "And why is that, Daniel. Why is it that we never seem to go anywhere together nowadays? Please explain?"
She took another step closer as he sighed. They both knew they had played out this scene before. He did not reply, not wanting to get involved in an argument just before the biggest poker game of his life.
"Well?" Grace quizzically asked, knowing how difficult she was being.
"Grace, you know I'm playing in a poker tournament. I've explained all that to you, haven't I? You know what the prize is!" His voice was becoming exasperated.
Grace sighed deeply, and then threw down the challenge. "Is poker more important than an evening with me?"
This was an argument that Daniel knew he could not win. He rose swiftly from the swinging chair and in a couple of steps had closed the small distance between them.
"You know it isn't," he responded, attempting to take her in his arms.
"It isn't?" she repeated, fixing him with a piercing stare and taking a step back even as he moved towards her.
"Grace, if I finish in the first three, we win a trip to Vegas..."
"And how do you rate your chances?" she asked. "You told me there are well over a hundred people playing, most of whom have paid $600 for the privilege!"
She knew she was being unreasonable, but it was so long since they had been invited out together, she
felt
like being unreasonable.
Daniel again attempted to take her in his arms but she took another small step backwards. As they stood there for an uncomfortable few seconds, just staring at one another, the bell signalling the start of the tournament rang out. Their eyes simultaneously jerked towards the small computer screen.
"I know, I know. Your important tournament is starting", Grace spat out, almost contemptuously adding, "Good luck."
A few seconds later she had reached the door and he watched as it swung closed behind her. He hated them parting after an argument, but as the cards hit the screen, he had no time to dwell on that thought. In fact, with her in this sort of mood, it was almost a blessing that she was spending the evening at her dinner party. That allowed him to give this opportunity the full concentration it demanded and he knew that she would come back from her evening feeling much better.
As Daniel anticipated, the tournament was tough from the very beginning. Because of what was at stake, players were cautious. Not only were very few moves being made, but the pace of play was a little slower than normal for online poker. During the early stages, Daniel had time to reflect on the considerable amount of 'on screen' conversation taking place, most of which centred on the prizes at stake.
Several players spent some time promoting the fact that they had already played at the legendary Binion's Horsehoe Casino in downtown Las Vegas, as well as the plusher Rio which was located just off the Strip. The Rio, of course, had taken over from Binion's as the home to the World Series of Poker.
Presumably, Daniel thought, the online posturing was an effort by some to improve their table image without playing a card. But this macho effort to enhance their status was wasted. Or rather, it was wasted on him. He was unusually confident, feeling an almost eerie sense of calm. As far as he was concerned, the Practically Poker prize of a round trip airfare, plus accommodation, was there for the taking.
He would need a fair share of luck, certainly, but knew his game was razor sharp and if he could avoid any silly mistakes….
*
It was almost half past eight when Grace arrived outside the impressive apartment complex. The taxi driver was an unkempt, dirty looking individual who had insisted on smoking throughout the journey. She had felt uncomfortable when he had picked her up, his eyes running over her body and taking in every inch from head to toe. That was more than Daniel had done tonight, she thought, but nevertheless was more than relieved when they reached her destination.
She again thought of Daniel as the taxi was pulling to a stop. She knew her attitude was probably unreasonable and that it was not possible for him to accompany her tonight. The poker tournament was, after all, an excellent opportunity for him. And also for her, she knew, especially in the light of Lauren's audition.
But she felt that his chances of finishing in the top three were pretty small, based on his explanation of what was at stake. And in any case, that was not the point. Her female instinct intellectualised the situation as yet another example of poker coming first, and she was rapidly approaching the end of her tether with that situation. Poker was beginning to drive a massive wedge between them.
She refused to give the lecherous taxi driver a tip and simply dropped her fare into his thick, grubby hand. With some relief, she left the smoke ridden interior and lightly stepped onto the adjacent kerb.
When the evening invitation had arrived, she had accepted with relish, a good opportunity for her to meet up over a meal with friends from the music world. And at Thomas's apartment, at that! Who knows what sort of contacts she might make, she encouragingly thought. But it was not only that possibility that excited her. It had been some time since she had let her hair down and she was determined to take full advantage. If Daniel missed out, that was his loss.
Once inside the impressive looking apartment complex, she took a deep breath before setting out across the large, cold, lobby. The plush lift quickly ascended to the top floor and she hesitatingly looked around her as she stepped out and on to the impressive, wooden panelled floor. Taking the few steps to the heavy oak door signalling Thomas's apartment, she ran her hand through her shining hair before pressing the large, white bell located on the left hand side.