Dickens's novella
A Christmas Carol
has been rewritten and adapted many times. Four of us got together and decided to move it through time and space. It came across the ocean, from London to the Big Apple, and one hundred and seventy-eight years forwardΒ ... minus two months.
We each took a part, shortened the story a bit, and took the minor liberty of ignoring the medical situation of the present day.
We hope you enjoy it.
βBebop3, RiverMaya, vanmyers86, chasten
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Chapter 1
I stood on the sidewalk, people-watching. Two hundred years ago this neighborhood would have been considered a paradise. Running water? Indoor toilets? Refrigeration? Astonishing. Few people went hungry and luxuries were abundant. For most of the history of mankind, this would have been considered miraculous. Still, today's residents bemoaned their fates and envied those who had it better.
The church behind me wasn't opulent, wasn't ornate and wasn't large. It was, however, scrupulously maintained. Every inch was scrubbed, polished and cleaned regularly. Love, piety and dedication abounded in this modest building.
It was only slightly warmer inside than on the streets, and the petitioners in the church wore their coats and jackets as they prayed in the chilly house of worship. I found the weather bracing and relished being amongst people and all of their little idiosyncrasies. I'd nod good naturedly and tip my nonexistent hat as they walked by me, ignoring my presence.
There were so many misconceptions. I greatly admired those that did good. Trust me, few knew better than I how difficult it was to stay on the straight and narrow. I held such people in the very highest of regards.
I felt good about this year. So much time had passed but I maintained my vigil. If Mariel could return with such single-mindedness, so could I. Year after year, she came to this church the nine days before Halloween and prayed while I waited. I was her silent shadow, standing outside, always patient, always ready.
Mariel worked her fingers over the rosary, ignoring her aching knees as she prayed for Lucas O'Grady; the businessman, the landlord, the promoter, the manager, the pugilistic legend who'd never stepped foot in the ring to fight. Halloween was nigh, the anniversary of her father's death. She prayed, prayed, prayed and I silently urged her on.
Ending her prayers, she kissed the rosary, made the sign of the cross and I alone heard the tolling of the bell. Finally! My eyes looked skyward and my lips curled into a smile. People walking near me suddenly shivered and turned away. I tugged on the sleeve of my bespoke suit, checked my immaculate hair and stretched.
I was unshackled. I was free to act. My time had finally come. With the greatest of care, I reached into the interior pocket of my jacket, pulled out the velvet container and retrieved the white mask. A holdover from better days, I wore it to remind myself of the greatness possible in every man, even one whose life had, so far, fallen short.
I stepped from Here to There and stood in front of O'Grady.
"Hello, Lucas. I bring you greetings on this All Hallows' Eve. I'm the first to visit you this evening, but I won't be the last."
Chapter 2
Lucas O'Grady sat at his desk, confused and unable to move, transfixed by the sight of the stranger in front of him. He'd just finished reading the last page of his divorce settlement and was actually pleased that his lawyer had found a way so that Caitlin, his soon-to-be ex-wife, would be getting far less than what she had expected (and deserved). The lack of tiny feet pattering had turned out to be a blessing and the prenup he had her sign twelve years before certainly helped.
He had spent the whole day in the study of his posh Manhattan penthouse, ironing out the last details of the latest fight he was handling; it was only a day away, Halloween to be exact. Everything was in place for "All Tricks, No Treats," with Davin Abascal and Juan Adigue, until ESPN called him the day before to inform him that they wouldn't be able to air the taped interviews and short bios of the two fighters until after Halloween. But he pulled some strings, called in a few favors and got an even better deal from NBC. No wonder, he was
numero uno
, he was the man every manager sought if they wanted their boy to get to the top, and he certainly had elevated more than a few of them... three had already been inducted into the International Boxing Hall of Fame... and two more of his current fighters were shoe-ins, one was already being touted the "Greatest Of All Time." Every fight, and fighter, he'd promoted earned... and it earned BIG β stadium seats, pay-for-view, thirty-minute pre-fight TV bios, "live" weigh-ins and interviews that Luke turned into major altercations between the combatants β Luke had mastered them all.
Of course, there were the chumps, the few expendable ones who'd had to be "sacrificed" on the altar, or in this case, in the center of the square ring, but only Luke O'Grady and a very select few knew about them and the tactics he had to employ to ensure the lowest risks and the most favorable outcome for everyone involved; boxing was a sport where the prize money was big... and the back-room deals were even bigger.
He was deep into his third scotch, when this β
stranger
β just materialized in the middle of his study. He looked to be about Luke's age, slightly shorter and slimmer. His three-piece suit was well-made, tailored close to his body, the narrow waist accentuating his slenderness, the trousers pleated and ironed to perfection. But the strangest thing about him was the white Zorro-like mask he wore, it hid half of his face so that one's attention was drawn to the silver eyes that gazed out from behind the slits.
Thinking it was the liquor messing with his wits, Lucas said the one word he understood:
"Visit?"
The man nodded, and smiled β almost invitingly.
"Yes, three visitors and forgive me, I have been terribly remiss, I am Stephen."
"Just Stephen?"
"For now... yes. Come, you have far too many things to do and many places to go to, tonight."
He laid a cold hand on Luke's sleeve and guided him gently out to the living-room and up the long staircase that led to the second floor of the penthouse, all the while keeping a light conversation going with his bemused host. Luke obeyed, and even found himself answering the stranger's questions: yes, he had promoted the last three mega-fights, all of them in Vegas, but this latest one would be here in New York, at Madison Square Garden, the Mecca of Boxing, as a homage to the all the big fights that had been held there before the lights of Nevada drew everything west; an odd thing for him to do, because Lucas O'Grady
never gave anything away for free.
"Ahh, I remember those fights," Stephen said, wistfully, "Tyson-Green, Holyfield-Lewis, Ali-Frazier, one and two..."
"Ali-Frazier? That was in the seventies and you saw both fights?" Luke asked, surprised, as his uninvited guest did not look a day over fifty.
"And the Thrilla in Manila, of course. I even saw Marciano and Louis back in '51. But that is ancient history, there is another fight I'd like to talk about, one that is more recent. You promoted the Kolosov-Baquiran match, didn't you?"
Luke stopped as they reached the top of the stairs and looked at Stephen, one eyebrow raised.
"That was years ago, I... wasn't a promoter yet, I was Alejo Baquiran's friend and manager."
"Ahh, I see, that explains why."
Luke was about to ask what he meant, but they had reached the door to his bedroom; Stephen opened it and waved Luke to enter first, as the clock downstairs struck the hour.