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The Slap 4

The Slap 4

by talijmirden
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The Slap

Scene One

Bar, late night. Rain slicks the windows. She's at the corner, tall glass of something neat, legs crossed like a throne. You walk in like you own the air.

She catches your glance but doesn't hold it. Too proud. Too used to weak men falling at her feet, giving her the illusion of power. You let her live in that illusion--for a minute.

You sit one stool over. Not close. Not far. Just enough to feel your presence when she breathes.

"You look like the type who's used to winning arguments," you say, without looking at her.

A pause. She smirks. "Only because I do."

"Ever been wrong?" you ask, turning to face her fully. Calm. Collected.

She laughs, slow and mocking. "Not that I recall."

"Let's change that."

You hold her stare a beat too long. She looks away first. Just for a second. But it's there. A flicker of shift. She covers it with another drink.

"I bet you like games," she says, tilting her head. "But you're not ready for mine."

"I don't play games," you say. "I end them."

She raises an eyebrow, amused. "That supposed to impress me?"

"No. It's supposed to warn you."

The air thickens. Her smile falters, unsure for the first time. Still, she won't give ground. She leans in, her perfume brushing your senses, her fingers sliding your drink closer.

"You're cute. But you wouldn't know what to do with someone like me."

That is when you do it.

Not hard. Not brutal.

But clean. Direct.

A slap across her face--sharp enough to sting. Sharp enough to silence the bar in her head.

She freezes. Her mouth slightly open. Not in fear. Not in pain. In disbelief.

You lean close, voice lower now. "That's where it starts."

She stares at you, cheeks flushed--half rage, half something else she won't admit.

"You have two choices," you whisper. "Walk out of here pretending you're still in control. Or follow me, and find out what it's like when you're not."

Her breath catches. Her pride wants to walk. But her body doesn't move.

The Slap

Scene Two: The Walk & the Room

She doesn't speak. Just grabs her clutch with one hand, the side of her face still tingling with the echo of your palm. There's a storm behind her eyes now--not outrage, not tears. Curiosity mixed with a pulse she can't quite slow down.

You don't offer your hand. You don't ask again. You just turn and start walking.

She follows.

Not because you told her to.

Because she wants to see how far this will go.

βΈ»

Elevator -- Silent Ascent

You stand shoulder to shoulder. She leans slightly into you, not touching, but drawn. The metallic hum of the elevator gives the moment a sterile stillness. Then--

your hand gently brushes hers. A soft graze.

A complete contrast to what happened before.

She looks up at you, confused by the duality.

You don't speak.

You let silence dominate.

Because that, too, is power.

βΈ»

Hotel Room -- The Threshold

Click.

Door opens.

You step aside and let her enter first. The room is dark, moody. One lamp near the window glows low, like a stage light waiting for the show to begin.

She walks in slow, every step quieter than the last. She stops near the bed, her back to you.

You close the door. Lock it. Slow. Loud.

You let that sound settle into her chest.

"You sure?" you ask, voice soft again.

She nods, not turning around.

You walk up behind her. Close enough for her to feel the heat from your chest.

But you don't touch her--not yet.

"I'm not here to play with your pride," you say. "I'm here to break it."

Then--your hand grips her chin and turns her to face you.

Another slap.

This one harder. Sharper.

She gasps, but doesn't pull away.

"I said it starts here," you remind her.

Your fingers brush her cheek where it's already pink. And then you do something she didn't expect--

You kiss it.

Soft. Slow. The complete opposite of the violence.

It confuses her. Wrecks her center.

"I'll be kind when I want to," you say against her skin, "and cruel when you need it."

Her knees buckle just slightly. You catch her by the waist, steadying her like a dance partner who never misses the beat.

The Slap

Scene Three: The Shift

You lower her gently onto the bed--no commands, no force. Just presence. She obeys, not because she must, but because she wants to feel more of this--whatever this is you've stirred in her.

She's breathing deeper now. Slower. Her mask has fallen off.

She's not the queen anymore.

She's herself.

And she's looking at you like you're the only person who's ever seen her.

You crawl up over her--not with weight, but with intention. Your fingertips trace the redness you left on her cheek. A quiet apology without words. Then you drag them down her neck, over her collarbone, where her pulse beats wildly beneath soft skin.

"Now you listen," you whisper, mouth just above hers. "From this point on, everything I do to you--everything I take, everything I give--is because you asked for it."

She closes her eyes. Her lips part. And you don't kiss her yet.

Instead, your hands roam--slow, sensual exploration. Fingertips over fabric, teasing the hem of her blouse. You don't rip it. You unfasten it slowly, like unwrapping something sacred.

Each button reveals more of her--bare skin, rising breath, vulnerability cloaked in heat.

She reaches for you. But you gently pin her wrists above her head. Not rough. Just enough to say: Not yet.

Your lips finally touch hers.

And it's not a kiss.

It's a claim.

Warm, deliberate, and deep--pulling a gasp from her throat and a shiver from her spine. Her body arches beneath you, not in resistance, but need.

You release her wrists and let her touch you now--run her fingers through your hair, along your jaw, down your chest. Her touch is trembling. Not with fear. With surrender.

The clothes fall away like dead weight.

Now it's skin on skin--warmth, breath, connection.

No more games. No more slaps. Just slow, intimate tension.

Hands moving. Mouth exploring.

Not to conquer, but to ignite.

You don't rush.

You savor.

And in that quiet, intimate haze, she realizes something she's never admitted out loud:

Power never felt like this.

The Slap

Scene Four: The Serious Shift

Her breath is ragged now. She's beneath you, legs wrapped, body trembling--not from hesitation, but from everything you've drawn out of her. That high-and-mighty persona is gone. It melted under your mouth, your hands, your control.

And now...

Now she looks up at you with a new kind of fire.

Not defiance.

Not submission.

Something shared.

You lock eyes. No more teasing. No more testing.

Now it's the real moment.

You move against her with a new rhythm--measured but unrelenting. Each thrust of your hips a statement. A deeper push. A claiming.

The bed creaks with the weight of intention, not chaos.

Your hands are on her hips--holding, guiding, demanding.

Her nails rake down your back, anchoring herself in something she never knew she needed.

No words now. Just sound. Breath. Skin.

And everything that was left unsaid in the bar. In the elevator. In the quiet before the slap.

She moans--and it's not a moan of pleasure alone.

It's a release.

Like she's been holding her breath for years. Like no one's ever reached her like this.

You lean in, mouth brushing her ear.

"You feel that?" you murmur.

She nods, unable to form words.

"That's real. That's now."

And you don't stop.

You drive her into the mattress with slow, grinding power.

Focused. Intentional. Serious.

She cries out your name--no pride left, no walls.

Just heat.

Connection.

And the beautiful ruin of her old self.

When the end comes, it's not wild.

It's full.

Like falling and being caught at the same time.

And in the silence that follows, as your body eases down beside her, she turns to you and whispers--

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"...Who are you?"

You don't answer. You just pull her close.

Because now she knows:

You're the one who made her feel everything.

"The Slap" -- Scene Five: The Blade Between

The room is thick with heat. Her body still quivers beside you, legs tangled in sheets, sweat glistening across her skin. She's staring at the ceiling like she's just survived something... or been transformed by it.

You sit up slowly, reach for the nightstand.

Her eyes follow you.

Not fear.

Curiosity.

Something deeper.

You pull out a blade.

Not large--sleek, clean, gleaming under the low light. A knife for precision, not violence.

She watches it. Her breath catches.

You turn to her, resting it across your palm.

"Still trust me?" you ask softly.

Her answer is a whisper. "Yes."

You move closer--kissing her collarbone, slow and tender. Your free hand slides over her waist, up her ribs, between her breasts. The knife remains in your other hand. Always in view. Always part of the moment.

"Close your eyes," you say.

She obeys.

Then--cold steel against warm skin.

Not pressing, not cutting. Just gliding.

Tracing her sternum.

Sliding down her stomach.

A deliberate chill against the fire you've built in her.

She gasps--body arching not away, but into the feeling.

You stop just below her navel.

Press your lips to her ear.

"I'm going to give you something now," you whisper.

"Just a moment. Just a mark. Something that says you were here."

Then--a nick.

Tiny.

Clean.

A drop of red against porcelain skin.

Her breath leaves her in a moan that's part pain, part ecstasy.

Eyes still closed, mouth slightly open, body completely yours.

You lick the drop away.

Not to hurt.

To seal it.

Like a pact.

When she finally opens her eyes, there's a look in them you haven't seen before--

Not submission. Not fear.

Reverence.

βΈ»

"The Slap" -- Scene Six: The Kiss

Her body is still beneath you, but her mind is awake now--alert in a way she's never known. She's bleeding just a little. One small mark. A reminder. A gift. A claim.

You let the knife fall to the floor with a soft clink.

And then--you lean in.

Not slow this time.

Not gentle.

Your mouth crashes into hers, full and wet--

Tongues meeting, lips parted wide.

She tastes herself.

That trace of blood, metallic and intimate, slides between you both like something sacred.

Your spit mingles with hers, and with it--her pride, her past, her resistance--gone.

This isn't just a kiss.

This is consumption.

You breathe her in with every movement of your tongue, drawing her deeper, drowning her in sensation. You kiss like you're devouring the last piece of her old self.

She moans into your mouth, not from pain, but surrender. The kiss stretches, sloppy and raw, hands tangled in each other's hair, pulling, holding, grounding.

And when you finally pull away, just an inch, she's left gasping--lips red, chin slick.

You look down at her, her eyes barely open, dazed in the aftermath.

"You'll remember this kiss," you say.

She nods, throat tight.

"I already do."

"The Slap" -- Scene Seven: The Third Key

The room is still glowing with aftermath. Her chest rising and falling. You, above her, watching her recover.

Then--click.

The sound of a key turning.

Your head doesn't snap toward the door.

You expected this.

She does.

She bolts upright, pulling the sheets slightly, just enough to cover. Her lips still swollen, body still tingling. Her eyes go wide.

He walks in like he's been here before.

Tall. Effortless. Every movement fluid--grace like silk, danger beneath it like steel.

Face chiseled, hair tousled just enough to look accidental, but perfect.

Eyes like slow lightning.

He closes the door behind him, says nothing.

She stares at him.

Then at you.

Then back at him.

You say nothing.

He walks to the foot of the bed, meets your gaze.

Nods once.

Then--without a word--he strips.

First the shirt.

Muscles cut from sculpture.

Then the belt.

Pants hit the floor with a soft whisper.

He stands there, bare, unashamed.

Her breath catches. "Is he...?"

You look at her, your voice calm.

"He's here."

Her eyes dart between you two--unsure.

You see the shift behind her eyes.

She thinks he's here for her.

The way his eyes trail her figure. The way he tilts his head with a smirk.

She sits up straighter, the sheet still clutched in her hand.

She speaks, unsure. "What... happens now?"

You lean forward, brushing her cheek with your lips.

"I'll let you watch for a moment."

Her face stills.

"What?"

You turn to your friend.

Your voice low. Commanding.

"Come here."

He does. No hesitation. Not for you.

And when he reaches the edge of the bed--he kisses you.

Not shy. Not slow.

A full, wet, hungry kiss.

Tongue sliding, hands gripping the back of your neck.

The air cracks with the truth.

She gasps.

And it's not jealousy.

It's not fear.

It's shock at how turned on she is.

The room tilts.

The rules are gone.

Only want remains.

"The Slap" -- Scene Eight: The Shift in Gravity

The kiss breaks, lips wet, breath heavy.

He looks down at you, chest rising slowly--his beauty more than skin. It's in the way he stands. Effortless. Waiting. Fully revealed... and growing.

You meet his eyes without flinching.

Then slowly--wordlessly--you drop to your knees.

The sound of it--your knees hitting the carpet--isn't loud.

But to her...

it's thunder.

She watches, speechless, her sheet forgotten, falling from her hands.

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You reach up, your hands resting lightly on his hips.

He exhales--just once--and lets his head tilt back ever so slightly.

His interest is... undeniable now.

Thick. Heavy. Pointing toward you like a declaration.

You don't rush.

You study him--his shape, his scent, the slight twitch of anticipation. You breathe him in.

And when you glance back at her--she's frozen. Mouth slightly open.

Not with judgment.

Not even confusion.

But hunger.

You turn back to him.

One hand wraps around his thigh. The other... rises slowly.

Hovering.

Almost touching.

Almost there.

And still--no one speaks.

Because in this room, words aren't needed.

Only choices.

And this--

This is yours.

"The Slap" -- Scene Nine: Presto

Your movements are slow. Intentional. Measured like a conductor's hand before the final note.

He stands above you--eyes closed now, jaw tight, muscles trembling beneath your touch. You've brought him there. To the edge. That place just before surrender. The line between restraint and release.

But you don't take him over.

You stop.

Right there.

You hold him in that space.

His breath is ragged, hands clenched at his sides. A single word from you and he'd fall. But you don't give it.

Instead, you rise--slowly--never breaking eye contact. Your lips glisten. Your hands still carry his heat.

You turn to her.

She hasn't moved.

Eyes wide. Thighs pressed tight. Chest rising and falling like she just ran a mile.

She whispers, "Is he going to..."

"No," you cut in. Calm. Clear. Absolute.

"Not until I say."

You step back. Let him feel the space widen. Let her feel the power shift again.

Then you press your palm gently against his chest and guide him down--onto the edge of the bed.

He sits. Silent. Waiting.

You stand between them now. The conductor.

She's watching him.

He's watching you.

And in the air, unspoken but electric, is the truth:

The next climax belongs to you.

Only Presto--your command--your cue--

will decide when.

And they both know it.

"The Slap" -- Scene Ten: The Claim

You turn to him. Still seated. Still throbbing at the edge of his control.

Your body moves like it's remembering something ancient.

You climb onto him--not rushed, not eager--deliberate.

His eyes close as your hands brace his shoulders.

You guide yourself down, slowly...

slowly...

until you feel him enter--

inch by inch--

a thick, unrelenting stretch

that makes your breath catch in your throat.

You don't gasp.

You inhale it.

Own it.

He groans--deep in his chest, like a storm that's held back for too long.

You're fully seated now. Skin to skin. No barriers. No masks.

You don't move. Not yet.

You lean forward--mouth brushing his ear.

"She's watching," you whisper. "And she wishes she was me."

He twitches inside you--unable to hide the pulse of want. You grind your hips once, just enough to make his fingers dig into the bedsheets.

You pull back and look into his eyes--storm and surrender. You cup his face, kiss him slow, letting the weight of everything pour through it.

And behind you, she shifts.

Hand slowly moving down.

Eyes never leaving yours.

This moment--it's yours.

You're not giving it.

You're taking it.

And they want you to.

"The Slap" -- Scene Eleven: Convergence

Your mouth finds his again--this time with no restraint.

It's not gentle.

It's not careful.

It's hungry. Lips crashing. Tongues colliding.

You move on him in slow, grinding waves, feeling his body respond with raw urgency beneath you.

Your moans are muffled against his mouth--his, a deep rumble in return.

Behind you, the air shifts.

You glance over your shoulder--

And she's no longer just watching.

Her hand is between her thighs, but her mouth... it's wide open, panting, longing.

Her eyes meet yours.

There's no shame. No hesitation.

Only a silent ask.

You don't say anything. You don't need to.

You lean back from his mouth, turn to her, still riding him slow and deep.

You extend a hand toward her.

She rises from the bed like she's under a spell, sheet forgotten on the floor. She steps close--close enough that her breath brushes your cheek.

You reach for her jaw, fingers under her chin. You guide her forward.

And when her lips part--

you kiss her.

Fierce.

Wet.

Unapologetic.

Your tongues meet with the same fire, the same chaos you gave him. She moans into your mouth, tasting his breath still lingering on your lips, tasting you.

He watches--your bodies tangled above him, lips locked, hands roaming.

His hands rise to your hips, gripping tighter now, holding you in place as he thrusts up once, hard enough to pull a gasp from your kiss.

You break away from her mouth, breathless, and murmur against her lips--

"Now you're in it."

She nods--barely able to speak.

And the three of you collapse into something no longer separate.

One rhythm.

One storm.

One fire.

"The Slap" -- Scene Twelve: The Switch

You ride him harder for just a moment, letting him rise--trembling, his hands gripping your hips like he's about to break apart beneath you.

Then--you stop.

You lift off him, wet and wanting, your breath ragged--but your will unshaken.

He gasps, trying to pull you back down.

But your hand cracks across his face--sharp and clean, the echo still hanging in the air.

"Not yet," you say coldly.

Not punishment.

Command.

He falls back onto the bed, breathless, teeth clenched, muscles flexing in frustration.

You turn to her.

She flinches at first from the slap--but then her mouth opens again, lips trembling, body aching for your attention.

You grab her.

Hard. Hungry. Like you're claiming her now.

She gasps as you pull her forward, her legs already spreading to meet you--already soaked, her arousal clear from the moment she stood up.

You push her down onto the bed, next to him.

She looks up at you, wide-eyed, lips parted, waiting.

And you don't ask.

You slide into her in one smooth motion--deep and full--soaking in the heat of her as her entire body arches beneath you.

She cries out, head tilting back, hands clawing at the sheets.

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