"The Comeuppance"
EDITED BY:
Miriam Belle
CREATIVE CONSULTANT:
Simply_Cyn
Author's Note:
"Just wanted to say thank you to everyone who supported 'Red Orchids' and wrote me to talk about the story. You're all the best. Special thanks go to miriambelle69 for her in depth criticism and editing."
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Henry stepped back from the door and gently closed it. From the moment Mark Gordian had arrived at his apartment a few hours ago until now, Henry had been feeling like he was living in a dream world. Nothing seemed real. From the revelation that Mark's mistress Marlene was in cahoots with the Gordian family nanny Shannon in a heinous plot to the murder of Mark himself just a few moments ago, it had all seemed otherworldly surreal. Marlene had put a gun to his head, demanding that he and Ellen have sex while the two killers carried out their work. But they had promised to spare Henry, Ellen and her daughter Maddie if they simply did what they were told.
Now, after overhearing the conversation between Mark and his murderers, Henry knew they had no such intentions. All the killing and deception had been an elaborate framework of confusion to allow Shannon to take Maddie as her own. They had certainly wanted to punish Mark for his less than virtuous ways, but their real intent had been to kidnap the baby.
'Icing on the cake,' he had heard one of them say.
"Oh fuck," he whispered as he and Ellen hurried to the bed. He felt cold now, his naked body trembling a little. Or perhaps he was just scared?
"What do we do?" Ellen covered her bare breasts as she hugged herself.
"I don't know!" Henry hissed.
"We've got to get Maddie," Ellen said as she began to get off the bed.
"No," Henry grabbed her and pulled her to him. He said, "Our only chance is going to be to catch them off guard."
"Oh?" Ellen whispered, "And when will that be?"
"When they're finished with Mark, they'll come back for us," Henry said, "We need to look like we don't know anything."
"And then?"
"And then we jump them, grab Maddie and run for help."
"Just like that?"
"Well, yeah..."
"Henry, these women staked out us for months, waiting for the right moment to move in," Ellen reminded him, "Shannon has been playing everyone from day one. They don't make mistakes."
Henry looked at her grimly, "You have a better idea?"
"Yes," Ellen said and pushed him back on the bed. Henry lay there as she reached over to the dresser drawer and quietly pulled it open. She cursed to herself as she felt around, "They took my cell phone."
Henry looked thoughtfully, "I have my cell phone in my pant's pocket."
"No way."
He grabbed the pants and handed the small black phone to Ellen. He said, "They don't make mistakes, huh?"
Ellen kissed him, punched in the numbers for 911 and waited. The line was busy. She looked at Henry, "How the blue fuck can 911 be busy?"
She quickly dialed the number for her best friend Sheila Messing. The phone rang and rang. There was no answer. Finally, her answering service came on and asked for a message to be left after the tone. Once the small electronic beep sounded Ellen whispered, "Sheila, it's me Ellen. Listen. Call 911 as soon as you get this message. Get them to my house. We're in some serious shit here..."
There was noise in the hallway.
"... love you much. Hurry. Bye."
Ellen then called 911 again and left the phone on, slipping it back under the pillows as she grabbed Henry and began kissing him. They rolled on the mattress as the sounds of footsteps registered just outside the door. Ellen grasped Henry's cock and rubbed it as she licked his neck and whispered in his ear, "No matter what, you get Maddie...."
"I promise," he whispered back.
"I love you," she moaned into his mouth as the door opened.
"I love you," he responded, feigning ignorance of Shannon's arrival.
"Well," she smiled, standing naked and bloody in the doorway, "Good things do happen to nice people."
Henry looked at her exposed figure and eyed the blood covering her face and torso and hands, "Are you alright?"
"I'm fine, Henry," she said, "But Mark has checked out."
"You killed him?" Ellen asked, feeling more and more terrified by the moment. She didn't mind letting it show. No matter how Shannon thought she should feel about Mark being killed, Ellen figured horror factored in no matter what.
"He lost his head," Shannon said dryly, "Well, both his heads."
Henry swallowed hard.
"Men," Shannon chuckled and smiled at Ellen.
"What now?"
"Now," Shannon said, "Henry, you'll go downstairs with Marlene and she'll walk you through what to tell the cops when they show up. Ellen, you and I have some unfinished business to attend to."
"Okay," Ellen squeezed Henry's hand, reminding him of his promise.
Henry nodded and reached for his clothes, "Okay."
"Don't get dressed yet, Henry," she said.
Henry looked Ellen once more and left them alone.
Once he was gone from the room, Shannon closed the door and locked it. Ellen sat uncomfortably naked in front of Shannon Merele as the bloody woman looked at her expectantly. From behind her back, Shannon pulled a gun into view. It was the small silver plated pistol that Marlene had been holding earlier. Shannon looked at it and smiled.
"You glad I killed him?" she asked as she walked over to her former employer.
"He was a bad man," Ellen said, "But I don't think he deserved to die."
"You didn't try to stop us?" Shannon asked.
"No."
"And why not?" Shannon toyed with gun, running the nose of it over her blood-streaked thighs, "Too busy fucking Henry?"
"Marlene put a gun to his head and said we had to," Ellen said.
"Must have been horrible work from the sound of it," she replied.
Ellen was silent.
"Did you enjoy it?"
Ellen said nothing.
Shannon cocked the pistol and put it to Ellen's right temple, "Did you fucking enjoy it?"
"Yes," Ellen said, trying not to cringe at the gun against her head.
"You know," Shannon said, "We're not so totally different, Ellen. We're both women who know what they want. You wanted to be done with Mark and his cheating. You wanted to be with Henry. You knew deep down that Mark was up to something, didn't you? That fucker wanted to kill you and Henry... believe me, we did you a favor. Me? I know my calling in life. I punish those who deserve to be punished."
"How noble."
"How many times have you opened the newspaper or turned on the television set to see that another asshole has gotten away with murder?" Shannon asked her, "When O.J. walked, we all watched a murderer go free. Think of all the shitty little cities and towns in this world that see men arrested from crimes and then released because the defense was more eloquent in his debate? Is justice dependant on the craftiness and wiles of those who work for it and against it? My own father killed my mother in cold blood, Ellen. I saw it happen. But he walked free. You know how? The detective in charge forgot to process the evidence properly. That fucker went free on a glitch. How often do we see the guilty go unpunished?"
"And you're the judge, jury and executioner?"
"Mark Gordian planned to kill you both," Shannon reminded her, "In the end, it would have been him who walked away free and clear with your daughter and your money. He would have left you and Henry both implicated in the deaths of his two lovers. Would you judge him and have the courage to carry through?"