Author's Note:
My humble apologies to you, readers, again, for the issues with the text message exchanges in the previous submission. After consideration, I'm going to submit an EDIT version of Chapters 10 & 11, once I've got the formatting nailed down correctly. Again, as I've noted in response to Comments on previous submittals, the well-documented formatting options on Lit are minimal, and the "hidden" formatting options are... Well, less-well documented. And Literotica has changed what is and isn't allowed over the years, which is why some older stories have formatting features that no longer exist (and in some cases are themselves broken by site updates). That's kinda why the hidden options are hidden, I think? And sometimes, even when you
think
you're doing what other people did, it goes awry. Finally, the Previewer isn't WYSIWYG, so while something may LOOK perfect during the preview, it may get rejected after submission, or, worse yet (what happened with QT-808: 10-11) it may get published but stay all hamajang. Trial and error is the only way to find out.
Mahalo nui loa, to CorruptingPower (Devin McTaggert) for allowing me to play in his universe. And mahalo to the other spin-off writers and beta readers! I'd also like to publicly welcome Percheron, author of Quaranteam: Aotearoa, to the group β he's been quietly, patiently, waiting for the release of QT: Book 2, Ch 14, where the tragedy in New Zealand unfolded. And, let me tell you, the rest of the Writer's Group was rather less patiently awaiting the same thing. E Percheron, me ke aloha a hoΚ»omaikaΚ»i Κ»ana! (Greetings and congratulations to you!)
I can't say enough good things about the other spin-off writers β please go read their works if you haven't already. Their initial feedback is what first encouraged me to keep writing beyond Chapter 9, and your feedback, dear readers, encourages me even more!
Chapter 12
July 12, 2020 β after midnight
Evelyn woke up and was startled for a moment at being in an unfamiliar room. The young woman then relaxed as her mind, being slightly less willing than her body to crawl out of the comforts of Nod, fuzzily supplied the events of yesterday.
"Oh! Oh." Evelyn smiled as she replayed the events of yesterday in her mind. Particularly the last few minutes before she lost consciousness. As she became more aware of her surroundings, she heard the quiet snoring and noticed the slumbering shape in the comfy chair in the corner of the room.
"Mal," she murmured quietly, not sure if she was trying to wake him or just wanted to feel his name on her lips again. Her mouth and throat felt dry and she noticed the water bottle on the nightstand nearest her. After guzzling most of the bottle, Evelyn realized she was still undressed and looked around for her clothes. Someone β obviously Mal or Gwen had picked them up and hung them from hangers on the room's dressing rack. Evelyn looked around for her duffel with her clean clothing, spotting it in front of the dresser.
The young woman slipped quietly from the bed, not wanting to wake Mal yet, and went to her duffel. To her surprise and concern, it had been unzipped, but when she opened it up, the first thing she found was a pair of neatly folded men's T-shirts on top of her undisturbed clothes. And a note.
Evelyn looked at Mal sleeping in the chair, and, deciding to read the note first, moved β still undressed β closer to the room's nightlight and began to read.
Evelyn,
Please come to the studio when you're able to after you wake up. Without Mal! We need to talk, and I can't focus if he's around me.
The shirts are some of Mal's. I don't know if you're into that sort of thing, but I figured I'd give you the opportunity and let you decide. The shirt with the pie chart is supposed to be a joke about how to get an engineer's attention, but it seems like the truth as far as Mal is concerned. The other one has a well known saying from Star Wars β one of Mal's favorite sets of movies.
My apologies if you don't like either, and in no way am I expecting you to wear one of them. I did not think to discuss it with you yesterday before you and Mal bonded β the vaccine is quite distracting, as you are aware.
Don't worry about bothering or waking me, as I am most uncomfortable and expect that I will not be able to sleep. Your distraction will be appreciated.
Evelyn finished the note, then looked over at Mal again. She wanted to wake him up β actually, she wanted to do a LOT more than just wake him up.
But Gwen was on a clock as well. The orientation had been VERY clear on that β until a vaccinated woman was able to bond with her partner, she would become more and more aroused, finding it harder and harder to focus. And Gwen had been β in her own way β very kind to Evelyn.
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Yesterday (July 11, 2020) β Zoom chat between Evelyn and Gwen
When Mrs. Pilchard had said she wanted to have a private conversation with Evelyn, the young woman worried that the older one would be angry, or demanding, with all sorts of conditions and concessions from Evelyn required to get her agreement... Evelyn imagined all sorts of wild restrictions, and braced herself for that discussion, but after telling Evelyn to drop the Mr. and Mrs. Pilchard, Gwen's first question was to ask how Evelyn was feeling.
Evelyn ended up pouring out her heart to Gwen, how alone and afraid she felt, how overwhelmed, and how worried she was that she would be the Kopua who lost the ranch.
Her father had always told stories about how every generation, some larger ranch β usually Parker β had tried to bully them into selling β once even going so far as to buy or rent or (legend had it) disable every cattle trailer on the Windward side of the island to prevent Evelyn's dad from getting his cattle to the boat. At that time, most of the ranchers still had to ship their beef cattle off island for finishing and processing.
Gwen had listened sympathetically, and then asked if Evelyn was really sure there wasn't someone else she could think of that she'd be more comfortable with, now that she'd had time to consider it after the military people had left her apartment.
Evelyn got worried again, thinking Gwen was preparing to refuse and let her down easily, but she answered truthfully that she'd tried β considering former classmates outside the ones Lieutenant Knox had presented β ones she recalled from her General Education courses, other ranching families she knew, or even people in the Native Hawaiian movement or the larger Hawaiian diaspora.
Ultimately, what it came down to was that she didn't know if any of them were even still alive, or if she could rely upon them, or in some cases, even trust them.
"But Mal," she had explained to Gwen, "He inconvenienced himself to help me, even though I certainly didn't deserve it after the way I'd acted. I was a bitch, Gwen. I'm sorry. Even if I didn't know anything else about Malcolm Pilchard, that act of kindness set him apart."
Gwen gave a soft, non-committal, "Uh-huh," which spurred Evelyn to continue.
"But that's