This is an action-adventure-fantasy. While the settings are largely realistic, the events and the people are more akin to those you see in action adventure movies, like Robert Rodriguez's El Mariachi series. Perhaps like Once Upon a Time in Mexico, or A Clear and Present Danger, if it had been directed by Sam Peckinpah.
The MC is a hundred millionaire with almost unlimited financial and human resources available, and powerful connections on both sides of the Texas-Mexico border. His family has been kidnapped, is being held for ransom, and being abused. No help is forthcoming because of the international nature of the events.
His anger knows no bounds, as yours might in the same situation. There is violence, there is retribution, and there is sex, both consensual and forced, but only between those 18 and over. It's X rated for both graphic violence and descriptive sex. If you are under 18 or offended by violence or sex, do not read any of the stories in Part 2!
I write and edit my own work; therefore, you may encounter misspellings, missing or misused words, or grammatical errors. I hope not, but I also find them in edited stories on this site; we're all amateurs here.
If any of the above -- violence, retribution, sex - offends you, please do not read this story or 2.2. If you want realism rather than fantasy, then hit the back button; this is fantasy.
If you decide to read it anyway, you need to read the five chapters of part 1 before you do. Although I rehashed more than normal because part 1 was posted back in December, I don't rebuild the characters from story to story; I build on previous chapters.
If you're still with me, I hope you enjoy this convoluted concoction of a first chapter, and the more straightforward chapters that follow. You constructive comments are welcome, but please don't complain about the forewarned items above. Just so you know, I do edit comments, and I do ban trolls.
It Ain't Paranoia if... 2.1
Hit Below the Belt
The dim green glow of my watch said it was still T-102 minutes until H-Hour. Lowering the binoculars and laying them aside, I rolled onto my back and stared up at the countless stars in the moonless sky. We had chosen the night of the new moon for a reason.
Everything we had done to get ready for tonight was for a reason, and we were only 101 minutes from executing our plan. We had done what we could do, we had accounted for those things for which you can account. Although, barring divine intervention, we would be badly outmanned and outgunned, we were nonetheless as ready as we could be for what had to be done.
We knew the odds were bad -- our plan required too many things to come together at once, flawlessly, for us to have a chance. We also knew that the world hadn't stood still since we went incommunicado a little more than three days ago, but we had no idea what had changed.
There were an impressive number of people at all levels in Mexico and the United States committed to thwarting our plans; a smaller but still potent number were committed to helping us achieve them b. Without communication we don't know what has changed in the past three days, or what awaits us.
So we cling to our plan and hope for the best.
The immensity of our problem goes beyond winning the skirmish and freeing the hostages. If we somehow succeed in rescuing them and no one is badly injured, we still have to get them safely out of Mexico and to safety in Texas, most likely while being hunted by our enemies! Did I mention the odds of success were slim?
Odd's don't matter, though, because we learned that Kaitlyn's new owner intended to keep her as his personal whore, share her with clients and friends until she was worn out, and then sell her to a brothel somewhere. She was nothing special to him; just the latest woman contracted for this Russian oligarch/crime boss.
My 8 and 10 year-old children had also been purchased by foreigners, and, based on what we learned about their new owners, there was no doubt that their fate would be far worse than death.
The $10,000,000 ransom being demanded for their release was subterfuge; the gang had already collected on the contract for the three of them, so their fate was sealed. They just wanted me to contribute $10m to their cause, and they wanted to show myself so they could collect the bonus for killing me.
I played along, hoping to buy enough time to rescue them; I was willing to pay far more than $10 million for their safety.
So... it is what it is.
****
What it is right now, lying on this ridge in lightweight camo, is cold. Oh, the temperature has been much colder in some of the higher mountain passes on our journey, but we were climbing, descending, walking, using the limited natural light offered by the stars and the last slivers of the waning crescent moon or our night vision goggles, depending on the situation. Moving as we were, on high alert, the night chill wasn't problem.
Tonight was different. Even at this modest elevation the high desert cools off as quickly when the sun goes down as it heats up with the sunrise.
The first night of our journey we crossed the
Rio Bravo del Norte
/
Rio Grande
into Mexico just after dark, at an isolated river crossing south of Redford. We clung to the valley of the
Nogal
River when we could, but walked cross country when it took a big dip to the south, before again meeting it ten miles further west.
The highlands were largely barren, rocky, and uneven; the floors of the valleys were sandy, rocky, and uneven, but with vegetation. Covering ground rapidly was easier on the flatlands, but the danger of walking upon someone and losing the element of surprise for our mission made us cautious, so the going was slow, regardless of geography.
Our first day camp was under an overhanging rock ledge near the headwaters of the
Nogal
River south of
Portero del Llano
. The first tendrils of light were on the eastern horizon as we walked the last 100 yards in the shallows of the river, spotting some of the little traps we had been told to steer clear of up on the banks. They were there to alert us if someone came while we rested.
There was also a 3' high mesh snake fence across the front of our shelter, and the combination of fence and traps meant we didn't need to take turns on guard duty. That was critical, because we badly needed our rest.
Our unknown benefactors had stashed food, water, and blankets along the back wall of the shelter. It was only a few dozen steps to the water, so we slipped down and bathed after we ate, but put the same clothing on.
We made our beds in the sand under the overhang, and slept the sleep of the fatigued. It was the best sleep I'd had since my family was taken.
The second night we made just less than thirty miles, and we were again exhausted due to the many climbs and descents. We spent the day in a box canyon north of Chilicote, behind a wall of dense brush and prickly pear encircling two large mesquite trees. Our hidden, well-stocked camp was grassy, and the mesquite trees offered a bit of shade for our snake-fenced sleeping area.
There was a flowing spring against the base of the rock wall, so we washed our clothes and bathed twice; once before we went to bed, and again before we donned our 'clean' clothes.
We only had to make 25 miles the third night, and less than five tonight. If you think those aren't impressive distances, keep in mind that the section of the Chihuahuan Desert we had to cross lays within the
Altiplano Mexicano,
the central highlands of northern and central Mexico.
Most of our route was between 4000-6000 feet above sea level, but some mountains within the
Altiplano
were over 11,000 feet in elevation; thankfully, none were along our route. We skirted all mountains, even small ones, but the passes along our route were still higher than the elevation of Denver, "The Mile High City," meaning the air was thin.
The elevation, rocky terrain, treacherous trails, climbs, and descents, and the need to travel at night under the last vestiges of the waning crescent moon made it impossible to carry enough supplies, weapons, and ammo to serve our ultimate purpose.
Fortunately, our friend and compatriot, Carlos, aka El Chaparral, was able to arrange for anonymous confederates to stock caches of food and water at three pre-set locations.
It wasn't actually that far from the Texas border to our destination... if you traveled in a straight line. It was the need to remain unseen by those in villages, working on ranches, or working/guarding the opium poppy and marijuana fields, while avoiding highways and dirt roads, mountains, canyons, rivers, dangerous trails, and being skylined that made our route longer and more trying.
****
There were three in my group: brothers Clay and Claude Edwards, and myself, Robert Roy Macgregor. I'm usually called Rob, but lately my female companion/ex-wife has taken to calling me RR.
Clay and Claude are owners of the Ultimate Solutions security group that I initially funded, and which provided security for me and mine.
They would have come anyway, because we are close friends and they love my family, but the failure of Ultimate Solutions personnel to prevent the kidnapping weighed heavily. Add the execution of two of their favorite employees by a new employee, Miroslav Popović, and this mission was intensely personal.
If we were fortunate, a half-dozen others from Ultimate Solutions would join us at H-Hour for the assault on the compound. They were coming was from the north, we were coming from the southeast.
It was more pipedream than likely, but if we were REALLY fortunate, an unknown number of indigenous tribesman and Chihuahuan freedom fighters would also join us. However, even the friend who endeavored to make that happen was skeptical that they would actually show up and fight.
Being oppressed since the Spaniards arrived had turned them into passive-aggressive peoples more likely to hide in the
Sierra Madre Occidental
mountains than to fight back. Fortunately for us, maybe, their people had been hounded, beaten, and forced to work by the cartels for decades, and there were rumors that warriors from each tribe were being trained to fight their latest oppressors.
They were said to be ready and willing to fight, but lacked adequate weaponry. We hoped that was all they lacked, because Raymundo was willing to arm them under certain conditions, and those conditions were not odious or onerous.
Had he armed them? Would they join our fight? We had no way to know.
More likely, it would be nine of us against forty-five, maybe fifty, of the gangsters/cartel wannabes. But it has to be done: my family is held captive in that compound, and their future is bleak if we aren't successful.