Author's note and acknowledgements
This story has sat on my hard drive for four years now.
I wrote it, all twenty chapters and 95,000 words of it in eight days of a frenzied, near trance-like state, sitting on my couch with my wife's laptop. She would occasionally have to remind me to eat.
When the dust settled, and I looked up, I realized a couple of things: one, I had just written a fucking novel in a week, whoa. Two, it seemed to be pretty damn good, double whoa. And three, what the hell was I going to do with it?
I tried editing it, I even enlisted the help of a Lit-Editor, who was invaluable for early editing, and confirming it was in fact, pretty good, or readable at least. I spent several months then, editing, unashamedly forcing it on writer friends to read, regular friends to read, and total strangers on writer boards. Everyone had different opinions of course, as people do, but all of them seemed to think it was pretty good, and I should probably try to do something with it.
So I spent another year trying to sell it.
Well nothing happened.
And I can't blame them, agents and publishers. It's kind of a niche story, hard to market. It's got too much sex for a coming age story, too much teenage drama for adult fiction, and not a single word about vampires or bondage to make it work as erotic fiction.
So it's sat on my hard drive for four years. I'll occasionally open it up, tinker with a line, or try to figure out how to re-work it into something more marketable. I always end up wasting a weekend trying to figure out how to change it, without losing the essence of the thing which I, and several others, feel is, "pretty good."
So fuck it. Here you go Literotica. I just want people to read it. I want people to get to know Jack the way I did. Writing his life made me feel like I was a part of it. He's a pretty good guy, I wish I knew him in real life.
So NEXT, some disclaimers.
This is a coming of age story. Which means first it starts out when the characters are too young to have sex (on literotica.) So there's no sex for a couple chapters. I hope that's okay. Second, this is a novel length story, including the prologue and epilogue, there are twenty-one chapters in all. Some are longer than others, and there is not a sex scene in every one. (Though some have more than one.) More importantly, sex is a thing that happens, it's not written to be titillating, but rather just as events in Jack's life.
So there you go. It's a story with sex in it, not a story about sex. I think it's pretty good anyway.
If you have not read the first chapter, please click on my profile and pick the story up at the beginning, its better that way, trust me.
*****
I dropped my bag with a thud onto the floor of my mom's condo.
God I was beat. Twenty-six hours of airports, delayed flights, waiting, another flight, another airport, and then two hours of LA traffic. I was ready for a vacation from my trip home from my vacation.
"Why don't you just go get a shower and then lay down in my bed sweetie, I'll sleep on the couch tonight. You look exhausted," my mother said.
Abby's mother had dropped me off just a few minutes ago. She and Abby had gone back to their house. Abby and I hadn't said anything else about our own place on the way home. But it was sounding awfully good about now. I didn't want to sleep on my mother's bed. I wanted my own, but it was in storage.
"Nah, I'm good mom. Believe me, after a couple of the places we stayed in in Eastern Europe, the floor here is looking pretty good," I said. Even I could hear the fatigue in my voice.
My mother chuckled, but it was a concerned mother chuckle, "Nonsense. I only sleep a few hours at a time anyway. Stupid old woman bladder wakes me up every night three or four times."
I sighed. Fine. I didn't have enough left to protest anymore.
"I'm not going to argue. I left all my willpower behind about eight countries ago," I said in defeat.
"And just leave your bag there, I'll get your laundry," she said and pushed me to the bathroom with a little shove.
I almost fell asleep in the shower. I tumbled into my mother's bed and slept for a whole day. All I know is I went to sleep and it was daylight, I woke up and it was still daylight, but slightly earlier in the day.
I crawled and stumbled my way to the bathroom and was overwhelmed with the smell of potpourri as I peed. I wrinkled my nose. Neither I nor my dad could stand the stuff. I found my way out to the living room and made it half way back to my mother's bedroom when I froze in my tracks. There was a man sitting at the kitchen table with my mother. An older gentleman. I didn't recognize him.
I turned slowly and looked at the two of them. There were two cups of coffee and I looked like I had walked into the middle of a quiet - intimate - afternoon chat.
"Hello Jack, your mother has been telling me all about your adventures across the pond," he said. He had a very loud voice. The booming kind of voice you would expect a drill sergeant to have.
I scratched my bare chest and vaguely recognized I was standing there in just a pair of Stanford sweat pants, my hair was probably standing straight up, and I wasn't able to fully open one eye yet.
He extended his right hand out. I blinked at it and made a grimace against what was probably some very foul morning breath. I took his hand and he almost crushed mine.
"Jack," my mother said, she had a weird note in her voice, "This is Stan..." she said hesitantly.
"Hi Stan," I grogged at him.
He smiled broadly and gave my poor hand another squeeze and rattle before he released it.
